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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors investigated the interplay between pain-related attentional biases, psychological traits, heart rate as a measure of autonomic reactivity and conditioned pain modulation (CPM). The relevance of the current study becomes clear in the context of previous research; the authors did a great job in summarizing the state of the art and identifying important gaps in knowledge which they attempted to close. From my perspective, this study has several important strengths that I would like to point out before sharing my criticism: - The authors used two different paradigms for assessing attentional bias combined with two different sets of stimuli (pain-related words vs. pictures). This approach is warranted by previous research and led to the identification of a very interesting pattern in results which would have been missed when using just one of the two paradigms. - The inclusion of heart rate in their analyses yielded an innovative result linking attentional bias and psychological distress to autonomic reactivity under CPM/painful stimulation which is highly relevant and stimulates further investigation of these associations. - The overall writing style is clear and concise, the theoretical and empirical background is presented extensively, and the statistical analyses are thorough and suitable for testing the authors' hypotheses. However, I have a few comments that I would like the authors to address: 1) When the authors state their hypothesis at the end of the Introduction, the hierarchy of and potential interaction between the different predictors does not become entirely clear (‘We hypothesized that individuals with stronger attentional biases toward pain, higher levels of pain-related distress, and heightened autonomic reactivity during CPM would exhibit reduced endogenous pain inhibition’). In contrast, in the first paragraph of the Discussion it is clearly stated that attentional bias is treated as the main predictor, and it was explored whether the other factors provide ‘additional explanatory value’. I would recommend adjusting the wording in the Introduction accordingly to make this clearer. This might also apply to the Abstract. 2) I was confused by the following sentence: ‘Specifically, the ANS is involved in shaping CPM efficacy, with studies showing increased heart rate (HR) and sympathetic activation during CPM’ (Introduction, p. 5) as the first part of the sentence does not logically follow from the second part. Did these studies only show that heart rate was elevated during CPM, or are there clear indicators for an involvement in CPM efficacy (e.g., participants with higher heart rate showing more efficient CPM)? It would be important to clarify this. 3) My main concerns relate to the paradigm used for CPM/painful stimulation. Here, I noticed a few aspects that are (from my experience) unusual and might be problematic: a) Individually adjusting the intensity of the test stimuli to a level of 60 seems reasonable; however, I am not sure about the reliability of the authors’ methods. In my experience, it takes quite some time to familiarize participants with the thermode and several practice runs so they learn to differentiate between non-painful and painful sensation and to reliably use the rating scale. Applying three single stimuli to determine the approximate location of a ‘60’ on the rating scale (then followed by three more) seems insufficient. Unfortunately, the ratings of the test stimuli (Table S 2 in the Supplementary Material) underscore this problem, with ratings decreasing dramatically from 60 to 20-25 within the 60 seconds of stimulation. In my eyes, this suggests that the initial rating might be exaggerated by fear/startle. The authors should at least discuss this and the descriptive statistics of the test stimulus ratings should be presented in the Results section (not in the Supplementary Material) as they are the main outcome measure of this study. b) Relating to this, please include the stimulus duration of the stimuli that were used to determine ‘pain 60’, the verbal anchors (if any) of the pain scale and the resulting stimulation intensities for ‘pain 60’. c) I am not sure why the authors chose to individually tailor the temperature of the hot water bath (conditioning stimulus) as most studies use a fixed temperature of 46 or 46.4 °C. However, please provide some information on the procedure used. How long was the hand immersed during these trials? Could this have influenced the CPM response by potential adaptation to the conditioning stimulus? In addition, the descriptive ratings of CS ratings should also be provided in the Results section. d) Why were participants explicitly instructed to focus their attention on the test stimulus? This also seems unusual and potentially problematic as the frequent ratings of the TS (every 10 s) probably primed attention to the TS anyway. The authors state that instructions to focus on the CS can increase CPM; if this works the other way round as well, it might have led to a suppression of CPM effects. e) It is a bit unfortunate that the authors failed to obtain a classical CPM effect (main effect of condition) which might be due to the factors mentioned above. However, the time-dependent effect seems interesting (adaptation over time in both conditions, but stronger in the CPM condition) – especially in the light of previous research showing that CPM can abolish temporal summation – and could maybe be discussed a bit more. 4) On p. 12, it is stated that ‘the THP test stimulus was applied for 60 seconds to the dominant hand’; I suppose the authors mean ‘the forearm of the dominant hand’ as described in the preceding paragraph? 5) At some points, I was a bit confused by the terminology used for describing the experimental conditions. Personally, I prefer the terminology ‘baseline condition’ (for TS alone) and ‘CPM condition’ (for TS + CS), but I see how that would be a problem here as ‘baseline’ is used to refer to the initial HR assessment. However, I think that the term ‘THP’ could be confusing because it seems unclear if it refers to a stimulus type or a condition; this caused some confusion for me when looking at the descriptives given in Table S2. I also had to scroll back and forth a few times to understand the baseline/reactivity/recovery phases. Maybe the terminology and/or Figure 1 could be improved to simplify and clarify this. Reviewer #2: Summary This study (N=86 healthy women) tests whether attentional biases (Perceptual Load images, Dot-Probe words), psychological traits (DASS-21, PCS, FPQ), and autonomic activity (heart rate; baseline/reactivity/recovery) explain individual differences in pain sensitivity and conditioned pain modulation (CPM). Key findings: stronger interference by pain cues under high load → higher pain sensitivity; Dot-Probe avoidance → higher fear of pain; none of the examined factors predicted CPM magnitude. HR increased during CPM and stayed elevated in recovery; higher distress related to blunted HR reactivity; attentional indices predicted higher HR during recovery. Strengths • Clear gap and two-task design. Nicely motivates moving beyond attentional focus to biases, using complementary tasks that target earlier capture vs strategic avoidance. • Well-specified QST/CPM and ECG stages. Baseline/reactivity/recovery windows and repeated-measures analyses are clear; HR effects are quantified. • Integration of psychology and ANS. Parallel treatment of distress, fear, catastrophizing with HR dynamics strengthens interpretation. Areas for Improvement: 1. The fact that attentional biases wasn’t correlated with CPM is unexpected. I would suggest authors to make a more scholarly discussion of this. Which could include the fact that task/modality/time differences could dilute shared variance; attentional tendencies may relate more to autonomic recovery than to CPM magnitude, which is consistent with your recovery HR findings; and most importantly that restricted range in healthy young women reduces covariance. 2. The authors have done an exemplary job providing comprehensive methodological details, which greatly enhances transparency and reproducibility. However, the level of detail in the main text occasionally impedes narrative flow and may overwhelm readers unfamiliar with attentional bias paradigms or QST protocols. I recommend moving some procedural specifics to supplementary materials while retaining core conceptual information in the main text. For example, Section 2.3.1.a (Perceptual Load task, lines 156-182) could be streamlined to emphasize what the task measures (early attentional capture by pain stimuli under varying cognitive load) and why it was chosen, with stimulus presentation parameters, letter selection criteria, and catch trial percentages moved to a supplement. The same could be done for other procedures. This restructuring would help readers grasp the conceptual logic—how attentional biases were operationalized and measured—without getting lost in technical specifications, while still providing the detail necessary for replication. 3. While the authors report η² for their ANOVA analyses, I recommend also including Cohen's d effect sizes for key pairwise comparisons and t-tests to facilitate meta-analytic integration and practical interpretation. It is recommended to report both η² for omnibus tests and Cohen's d (or Hedges' g for small samples) for specific contrasts, as this provides readers with both variance explained and the magnitude of differences in standard deviation units. This is particularly important given that some findings (e.g., attentional biases predicting pain sensitivity) represent novel contributions that future researchers will want to interpret and replicate. 4. The sentence “Specifically, the ANS is involved in shaping CPM efficacy, with studies showing increased 96 heart rate (HR) and sympathetic activation during CPM: should be revised to distinguish group-level HR increases “during CPM” from between-person prediction. Do authors mean that the expected within-task HR rise or that individual HR reactivity predicts CPM magnitude. 5. At first mention in Participants, add a parenthetical brief explanation regarding SONA, clarifying its meaning. This makes recruitment transparent for international readers and non-academic audiences. 6. Authors describe that normality was checked using Shapiro-Wilk and histograms but don’t describe what was done if violated. Minor Comments: 1. The resolution (DPI) of the figures appears to be below publication standards. Panel labels in Figure 6 (A, B, C) are difficult to read, and the violin plot contours show pixelation. 2. The OSF data repository link provided (https://osf.io/3bwy7/files/osfstorage) does not appear to be functioning properly or may not be publicly accessible. When accessing the link, it does not resolve to a viewable repository page. I believe the correct link should be: https://osf.io/3bwy7/files or https://osf.io/3bwy7. This manuscript represents a methodologically rigorous and theoretically well-motivated investigation into the role of attentional biases in pain sensitivity and endogenous pain modulation. The study makes meaningful contributions by demonstrating that attentional biases predict pain sensitivity independently of psychological factors, and by revealing their association with autonomic recovery dynamics, novel findings that advance our understanding of cognitive mechanisms in pain processing. The use of complementary attentional bias paradigms, careful QST/CPM methodology, and integration of autonomic measures are particular strengths. The suggested revisions focus primarily on enhancing clarity in the Discussion of unexpected null results, improving readability through strategic reorganization of methodological detail, strengthening effect size reporting, and addressing minor technical issues with figures and data accessibility. Reviewer #3: This study investigated whether attentional bias predicts individual differences in pain sensitivity and endogenous pain modulation, and whether psychological, emotional, and autonomic factors provide additional explanatory value. The authors are to be congratulated for this work. The methods in particular were very clearly described. Well done! I have only a few minor queries: - The quality of the figures seems to be low; they are quite pixelated. I recommend that you increase the resolution of the images. - Section 2.4.1: please provide a justification for including only participants with 2.5 z-scores above or below each participant’s average RT. The rationale for this approach is not entirely clear. - The relevance of including BMI and ethnicity are unclear. Please can you include a justification for the relevance of these outcomes. - In Table 1, it would be useful for the reader if you include the possible ranges of the questionnaires so that the reader can better interpret your summary statistics. - Please can you include assessments of model fitness for your regression analyses. - Was the protocol/statistical analysis plan locked online prior to conducting the analysis? 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