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| Original SubmissionJanuary 23, 2026 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-26-01165 Title: Predictors of Health-Related Quality of Life in Indonesian Women with Systemic Lupus Erythematosus: A Cross-Sectional Within-Cohort Analysis General Comments This manuscript investigates the factors influencing health-related quality of life (HRQoL) in a specific cohort of Indonesian women with SLE. The study identifies sleep quality, anxiety, and age as significant independent predictors of QoL, explaining 36.1% of the variance. The finding that clinical disease activity (MEX-SLEDAI) and corticosteroid dose did not significantly correlate with QoL in this predominantly low-activity cohort is particularly noteworthy and highlights a potential "disconnect" between clinical markers and patient well-being. While the study is well-structured and uses validated instruments, several areas regarding statistical interpretation and local context require clarification to meet the standards of PLOS ONE. Specific Comments and Revision Requirements 1. Methodology and Statistical Stability • Variable Definition: The authors combine "Anxiety/Depression" into a single dichotomous variable. Given that the DASS-21 provides distinct subscales, please clarify the rationale for this grouping. • Subgroup Size: Only 3 subjects (4%) were identified as having anxiety or depression. The authors must address the statistical limitations of drawing strong conclusions or high beta coefficients (-21.402) from such a small subgroup. • Multicollinearity: Considering the known overlap between sleep disturbances and psychological distress, did the authors test for multicollinearity (e.g., Variance Inflation Factor) in their regression model? 2. Clinical and Diagnostic Tools • MEX-SLEDAI Rationale: The manuscript provides a strong justification for using the MEX-SLEDAI in resource-limited settings. To enhance the "Materials and Methods" section, explicitly state if specialized immunological assays (e.g., anti-dsDNA) were unavailable at the study site or if the tool was chosen for its practical utility in Southeast Asian clinical practice. • Pain Scale Thresholds: The authors use a 40mm VAS cutoff to define "severe" pain. Please provide a specific citation supporting this threshold as a marker for functional impairment specifically within the SLE population. 3. Results Interpretation • Variance Explanation: The model explains 36.1% of HRQoL variance. The Discussion should more robustly address the remaining 63.9%, perhaps speculating on the roles of social support, cultural stigma, or permanent organ damage which were not measured in this study. It is recommended that the authors include theses study limitation in the discussion. • Education Levels: In Table 2, the p-value for education is exactly 0.050. The authors should clarify if they consider this statistically significant or a trend, as the text describes it as having "influenced QoL". 4. Discussion and Contextual Depth • Age and Quality of Life: The finding that younger age predicts lower QoL is a highlight of the paper. The authors are encouraged to expand on the "burden of a life interrupted" by providing more specific local context regarding the social and professional expectations for young women in Indonesia. • Socioeconomic Factors: 77.3% of the participants had incomes above the minimum wage. The authors should discuss how the recruitment from a private hospital clinic might skew the socioeconomic representation compared to the broader Indonesian SLE population. 5. Actionable Recommendations • Intervention Specificity: The conclusion advocates for "psychosocial and sleep interventions". To increase the paper's impact, the authors should briefly detail which components of Cognitive-Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia (CBT-I) and anxiety management are most feasible for implementation within the Indonesian healthcare framework. Reviewer #2: This article is beneficial to improve current care of SLE. But the following points need a further clarification. 1. The reference should be added : Buysse DJ, Reynolds CF 3rd, Monk TH, Berman SR, Kupfer DJ. The Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index: a new instrument for psychiatric practice and research. Psychiatry Res. 1989 May;28(2):193-213. doi: 10.1016/0165-1781(89)90047-4. PMID: 2748771. 2. Do "Hours of sleep per night" ( in the Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index) relate with QoL? 3. Why male lupus is not investigated in this study ? ( Please explain it ) Reviewer #3: 1)The title does not reflect the primary objective of this study as stated in the Introduction “impact of sleep disturbances and psychiatric symptoms on daily function…” 2)This was a cross-sectional study so wont be able to establish the causal and effect relationship. Please revise the term “effects/predictors” to “association/associated factors” 2)Method -Please clarify whether the questionnaires were in English or Indonesian language. Please provide the validation study if the questionnaires were translated. -What was the sampling method? -The objective also include the impact on daily function. What was the tool used to determine/ measure the daily function of the patients? -The variables (sleep pattern, HRQoL, VAS, MEX-SLEDAI) were categorized. But in the statistical analysis, there was no chi square performed and/or multivariate logistic regression performed to determine the relationships between these variables. -Please clarify which one of the following was the dependant variable in this study. Sleep pattern or HRQoL? ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Associated Factors of Health-Related Quality of Life in Indonesian Women with Systemic Lupus Erythematosus: A Cross-Sectional Within-Cohort Analysis PONE-D-26-01165R1 Dear Dr. Sumantri, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Wesam Gouda, MD,PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript is technically sound, the data supports the conclusions, and the authors have addressed all my comments appropriately. The "Key Messages" summary box effectively distills the clinical impact for the readership. Though the authors have handled a small-sample-size study. the strength of this paper lies not in its generalizability to all SLE patients, but in its specific insights into the Indonesian outpatient context. Reviewer #2: This article is beneficial to improve current care of female SLE. I have no further comments. [In the future, male SLE is worthy of investigation] Reviewer #3: Thank you for the revised manuscript All of the comments and queries have been addressed by thr authors. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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