Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 20, 2025 |
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Besides, please consider the following comments during the revision and modify the manuscript accordingly, and provide feedback and modifications for each comment: - Abstract, Results, Discussion, and Conclusion sections need more interpretation, discussion, and key findings in terms of Soil Moisture. - Please investigate more literature review in the Introduction and then summarize their findings and make linkages between them and the research gaps you want to address in this study. - Table 4: please provide statistical metrics for training and testing phases separately. - Table 4: please also include Relative Root Mean Squared Error (RRMSE) as a new metric. - Figure 2: please provide such figures for the training and testing phases separately. - Figure 5 needs more explanation and discussion in the text. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a very interesting approach involving image recognition and the use of AI to estimate soil moisture. I have a few minor comments to help improve the quality of the manuscript: - Please add relevant references between lines 19 and 26. - In lines 40–41, to which studies are the authors referring? Please clarify. - Similarly, which studies are referenced in line 43? Please review the Introduction section to ensure all citations are properly included. - The content between lines 72 and 82 appears to be background information. I suggest synthesizing this content and incorporating it into the Introduction. - In lines 104–105, is the soil moisture reported on a gravimetric or volumetric basis? Please clarify this point. - In Section 2.2, the authors describe the soil moisture monitoring system. Arduino-based soil moisture sensors are known for their limited accuracy (see for example https://doi.org/10.3390/s23052451), which can harm actual soil water conditions. Additionally, the manuscript mentions that only two points were used for sensor calibration. How can the authors ensure the reliability of the sensors using only a two-point calibration approach for Arduino-based sensors? - In line 130, the authors mention a “100%” volumetric water content. Would this not refer to the degree of saturation of the soil sample rather than its volumetric water content? Please verify and ensure that the correct concepts and terminology are used consistently throughout the manuscript. - The content between lines 239 and 246 also appears to be background information. Please remove it from Section 2.4.2 and integrate a synthesized version into the Introduction. - In lines 424–426, could the reduced reliability of the soil moisture data have influenced the findings? Please consider and address this possibility. - In lines 435–436, the authors seem to be referring again to the degree of saturation. If so, please correct the terminology. - Currently, the Discussion section summarizes the main findings and highlights the study's limitations and contributions. However, a typical Discussion should also compare the results with findings from other studies. I strongly recommend revising this section to include comparisons with relevant recent literature. Reviewer #2: • Maintain consistent use of the Oxford comma throughout lists. • Replace passive voice were unnecessary, especially in methodology sections, with active constructions for clarity. • Avoid stacking multiple clauses in one sentence; break them into two where necessary. • Use consistent units of measurement (e.g., always clarify if % is gravimetric or volumetric moisture content). • Use either American or British English consistently (e.g., “analyze” vs. “analyse”). Reviewer #3: In this manuscript, the authors present a non-destructive image-based approach for estimating soil moisture. Top-view RGB images from a mobile camera were used as predictors for an adopted version of pre-trained deep learning architectures to predict the soil moisture content at the top layer. DenseNet121 was reported as the optimal model for soil moisture estimation in the top layer with high accuracy and computational efficiency. Moreover, non-linear regression models were optimized to allow for soil-moisture estimation at the bottom layer. The random forest and bagging decision tree performed the best in estimating the soil moisture at the deep layer from the measured soil moisture at the top and middle layers. Generally, the manuscript is well-written and structured in a logical order with well-justified choices. However, a few points need to be addressed before this work can be published. **Major comments** 1) I recommend adding a timeseries figure including both actual and predicted soil moisture (of Figure 4 and Figure 5). This allows for further understanding of the capabilities and limitations of the image-based estimation. If this is not possible, please explain why not?! 2) What is the coefficient of determination between soil moisture at the upper and middle depths against the bottom layer? This check is important to understand the added value of the regression models used to predict the bottom layer. 3) The discussion of the manuscript can be further strengthened. Here are some points that are worth discussing: - The study focused on the seedling stage, which raises the question of robustness and generalizability of your approach to the different growth stages. For example, a shadow will be introduced as the growth progresses, suggesting an updated model training, thus reducing its practicality. - The approach applied looks infeasible for the intended purpose of crop management on a large scale. A key question would be how such an approach can be feasibly implemented for large-scale areas. - Since the initial soil moisture was controlled (40-60%), how would changes in the initial soil moisture impact the performance of the AI model? Try to discuss this point and explain what is needed to quantitatively analyze this sensitivity. - What was the rationale behind selecting 224x224 pixels? What is the implication of such a decision? - The practicality does not fully convince me of your second part (i.e., soil moisture estimation at deep layers from the upper and middle measurements). In which cases can such a model be useful? The rationale behind this analysis requires strong arguments to accept it. **Minor comments** 1) Lines 43-45: an example of references is missing. 2) Figure 1: Add dimensions to the cultivation system with more elaboration on its different components. 3) Figure 2: Add scale per subpanel. 4) Lines 171-172: add references to the pre-trained models. 5) Lines 167, 407: Typo in figure numbering 6) Table 3: caption is not complete. “is used to reduce…” 7) Lines 336-338: give different numbers for each question. Moreover, the equation of MSE is missing, and the second equation is for NRMSE, not RMSE. Make the necessary changes! 8) I found the heading and subheading titles are long. I suggest making shorter titles. 9) Table 4 should be split into Table 4 and Figure 4. Moreover, I suggest adding a legend that links the difference in the MAE values and the bubble size. 10) Table 6: The ranking of the models is not correct in the caption. Change it to “random forest and bagging decision tree regression … followed by gradient boosting”. 11) Figure 5: Add more information about the right panels in the caption. For example, they are based on the testing data and the optimized hyperparameter indicated by the green vertical dashed line, or so! 12) Type in line 550, change “Furesearch” to “Future research”. 13) Line 552: future work should explore other predictors beyond the measured spectrum (i.e., indices that can indicate changes in soil moisture). Awad M. Ali Hydrology and Environmental Hydraulics Group, Wageningen University ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Luis Eduardo Bertotto Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Iftikhar Ahmed Reviewer #3: Yes: Awad Mohammed Ali ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Suh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Image-Based Machine Learning Models for Customized Soil Moisture Management PONE-D-25-27146R2 Dear Dr. Suh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gobinath Ravindran Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I have no further comments to the manuscript, therefore I recommend acceptance of the article in the current version. Reviewer #3: I am satisfied with your response to my previous comments. I believe the manuscript is ready to be published. Well done! ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Awad M. Ali ********** |
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