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| Original SubmissionJuly 25, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-40425-->-->Do dogs rationally infer the causes of failed actions?-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bastos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear authors,-->--> After careful consideration by the reviewers, I am recommending a Major Revision of the original manuscript submitted to PLOS One. The reviewers appreciated the contributions of the study, even though the results were negative. However, they raised questions regarding the experimental design and requested an update of the bibliographic references. The detailed comments from both reviewers are specified below. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments : Dear authors, After careful consideration by the reviewers, I am recommending a Major Revision of the original manuscript submitted to PLOS One. The reviewers appreciated the contributions of the study, even though the results were negative. However, they raised questions regarding the experimental design and requested an update of the bibliographic references. The detailed comments from both reviewers are specified below. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors investigated whether dogs can infer the causes of human success and failure in opening a door. In Experiment 1, dogs observed a competent versus an incompetent human, and in Experiment 2, they observed one door that could be opened and another that could not. The main finding was that dogs’ choices were random in both cases, suggesting that they did not infer either human competence or physical properties of the doors. Overall, I found the study clearly reported and based on a simple and straightforward experimental design, which makes the results easy to interpret. The use of an accessible setup is a strength. At the same time, I felt that the novelty and impact of the work are somewhat limited, perhaps in part because the findings are negative results. Nonetheless, the study contributes to the growing literature on the limits of dogs’ causal reasoning and provides useful insights for future research designs. I would like to raise a few potential concerns regarding experimental design and interpretation, which I hope may contribute constructively to the further refinement of this work. 【Major comments】 Main concern is the difference in what dogs were actually choosing in Experiments 1 and 2. In Experiment 1, the choice was between two “humans” who clearly differed in competence (one consistently succeeded vs. one consistently failed). In Experiment 2, however, the choice was framed as between two “gates,” but since dogs cannot open gates themselves, they are likely to have perceived this as a choice between the two humans standing next to the gates. Importantly, in this setup both humans had equivalent ability: each could open one of the gates but not the other. Thus, from the dog’s perspective, both humans were equally competent, and approaching either one would be equally reasonable. This raises the possibility that Experiment 2 did not truly test inference about the physical properties of the gates, but rather left the dogs with no basis to differentiate between the humans. I would encourage the authors to clarify this point in the Discussion, and perhaps consider alternative designs that could more cleanly separate choices based on door properties from those based on human agents. In addition, the way the Analyses are described (e.g., “comparing the proportion of trials for which dogs first approached the predicted gate” or “the amount of time dogs spent at each of the two gates”) reinforces the impression that dogs were choosing gates rather than humans even in Experiment1, which may be misleading given the actual task structure. Another factor worth considering is the actual size of the doors used. Dogs are known to take their own body size into account when deciding whether to attempt passing through an opening (e.g., Lenkei et al., 2020, Animal cognition). Since many participants were large-sized dogs, if the doors were relatively narrow, this could have discouraged them from approaching or biased their choices, independently of the causal reasoning task. I could not find information about the door dimensions in the Methods; reporting this would clarify whether door size might have influenced the results. In lines 336–362, the authors note that preliminary familiarization trials might alter the outcome. This point directly relates to findings by Kuroshima et al. (2017, Behavioural Processes), who showed that dogs can infer physical properties of objects (door weight) from human demonstrations only when they had prior personal experience with those objects. I suggest citing this study in that section, as it would strengthen the discussion by linking the present findings more explicitly to prior work. It would therefore be valuable to consider whether providing dogs with initial experience of openable vs. non-openable doors might have led to different results. 【Minor comments】 I think “Study�” should be unified as “Experiment2” (e.g., line 112,179,202). Table1 and 2 might be okay to move to the supplement section. The authors investigated the amount of time dogs spent at each of the two gates in each experiment. I noticed that the authors define “being close” as within 0.6 m of the agent or gate, but this information appears only in the Results section. It would be clearer to report this operational definition already in the Methods, together with a short rationale for choosing 0.6 m (e.g., based on prior studies or room setup). This would enhance clarity and reproducibility. In the Discussion, the authors suggest that the results reported by Chijiiwa et al. (2022) might reflect simple mechanisms such as local or stimulus enhancement rather than genuine causal inference of human competence. I recommend citing the recent study by Jim et al. (2025, Animal Cognition), which raises very similar concerns in the context of dogs’ reputation formation. This would strengthen the connection to current debates in the field. Reviewer #2: The authors investigated whether dogs can rationally infer the causes of failed actions. They implemented an intelligent design in which dogs had to choose between two humans that were either not capable to open a gate due to incompetency or physical properties of the gate. I found this setup very elegant as it also ecological relevant in every-day lives of domestic dogs. Dogs were unable to make rational inferences in both experiments. I find it essential to publish negative results to get the whole picture – in that case about the causal skills of dogs. As the also the methods seem to be appropriate, it is important to publish these data. The thing I am not convinced regarding this paper is how the findings are embedded into the literature. Whereas some papers seem to be a bit outdated (i.e. ref 15-17), also very relevant literature for the topic of the paper is missing: On reputation Nitzschner, M., Melis, A. P., Kaminski, J., & Tomasello, M. (2012). Dogs (Canis familiaris) Evaluate Humans on the Basis of Direct Experiences Only. PLoS ONE, 7(10), e46880. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0046880 Kundey, S., De Los Reyes, A., Royer, E., Molina, S., Monnier, B., German, R., & Coshun, A. (2011). Reputation-Like Inference in Domestic Dogs (Canis familiaris). Animal Cognition, 14(2), 291-302. doi:10.1007/s10071-010-0362-5 On rationality Kaminski, J., Nitzschner, M., Wobber, V., Tennie, C., Bräuer, J., Call, J., & Tomasello, M. (2011). Do Dogs Distinguish Rational from Irrational Acts? Animal Behaviour, 81(1), 195-203. doi:10.1016/j.anbehav.2010.10.001 On causal reasoning Lampe, M., Bräuer, J., Kaminski, J., & Virányi, Z. (2017). The effects of domestication and ontogeny on cognition in dogs and wolves. Scientific Reports, 11690. doi:10.1038/s41598-017-12055-6 On reading human intentions Schünemann, B., Keller, J., Rakoczy, H., Behne, T., & Bräuer, J. (2021). Dogs distinguish human intentional and unintentional action. Scientific Reports, 11(1), 14967. doi:10.1038/s41598-021-94374-3 The authors might also consider this paper, where dogs also have a choice between two humans after experience with them: Silva, K., Bräuer, J., de Sousa, L., Lima, M., O’Hara, R., Belger, J., . . . Tennie, C. (2020). An attempt to test whether dogs (Canis familiaris) show increased preference towards humans who match their behaviour. Journal of Ethology, 38(2), 223-232. doi:10.1007/s10164-020-00644-4 Embedding these papers by rewriting the discussion will improve that paper. Overall, this is a good paper worth to be published in PLOS ONE but needs the above mentioned improvement in the theoretical parts, explaining the results. Minor points: a videoclip of the procedure in the Supplementary Materials is always helpful. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their thoughtful and detailed responses to my comments. The revised manuscript addresses my concerns very well, and the additional clarifications and discussion have greatly strengthened the paper. I have no further comments and am satisfied with the current version. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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