Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-40003-->-->How peer mechanism impacts loan repayment in a Self-help group? An empirical study-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Malhotra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been evaluated by two reviewers, and their comments are available below. --> -->-->?> Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: • Topic: Good, interesting and researchable. But the study location is missing. Better to add at the last of the topic – in India • Abstract –Lengthy, concise it. • Introduction: Poor. The contextual issues are missing. Use of old citations (not after 2017). Need to add latest citations. Remove problem statements and objectives of the research under the sub-headings (It is not a thesis, a research paper!). Keep it under the introduction part in a concise form. • Literature Review: Poor. The theory, model and policy related to the research area is missing. Not shown the research gap and a conceptual framework. The review of paper is too old, not found citations after 2015. The way of citations is not proper. Significant improvement is required. Consult the papers and add the latest citations: Dhungana, B. R., Chapagain, R., Pokhrel, O. P., Sharma, L. K., & Gurung, J. B. (2025). Assessing the performance of microfinance institutions in Nepal. Pacific Business Review International, 17(11). Dhungana, B. R., Chapagain, R., & Ashta, A. (2023). Alternative strategies of for-profit, not-for-profit and state-owned Nepalese microfinance institutions for poverty alleviation and women empowerment. Cogent Economics & Finance, 11(2), 2233778. Chapagain, R. K., & Dhungana, B. R. (2020). Does microfinance affect the living standard of the household? Evidence from Nepal. Finance India, 34(2). Dhungana, B. R. (2016). Does loan size matter for productive application? Evidence from Nepalese micro-finance institutions. Repositioning:The Journal of Business and Hospitality, 1, 63-72. • Methodology: Poor. No need sub headings. Concise it and remove irrelevant writings. • Results and Discussion: Poor. This section is missing. You’re your results and analysis under this section. You need to compare your results with previous researchers that may be for and against with your findings. It is necessary to cite properly. • Conclusion: Concise it. Highlight what interesting message you found and provide suggestions to the policy makers. Also highlight -why your research is useful for policy implications. • Others: Follow the format as prescribed by the journal. Reviewer #2: The introduction lacks a broader context, failing to connect the study to the wider global landscape of microfinance and self-help groups (SHGs). It could also provide a more detailed discussion on how the problem of information asymmetry manifests in various microfinance models. The Literature Review section primarily relies on foundational theories without exploring more recent or conflicting perspectives. It also lacks a critical review of the limitations of the existing research it cites, such as contexts where peer mechanisms have failed. Findings and Discussion: The discussion is confirmatory mainly and does not deeply explore counterintuitive or unexpected findings. It lacks a nuanced analysis of potential downsides, such as whether a high frequency of meetings could lead to group fatigue. Comparing the findings to other geographical or cultural contexts is also missing. Conclusion and Implication: This section lacks a discussion of the policy and practical limitations of the study's findings. It recommends the peer mechanism for financial inclusion but doesn't address the real-world challenges of large-scale implementation, such as training costs or the ethical implications of social sanctions. Overall, the paper is also poorly written, as it lacks a research method, and the numbering is inconsistent. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Bharat Ram Dhungana Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-25-40003R1-->-->How peer mechanism impacts loan repayment in a self help group ? An empirical study in India-->-->PLOS One?> Dear Dr. Malhotra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Based on the reviewer’s final comments, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript is accepted pending minor revisions. Please ensure the following before final acceptance:
Once these minor adjustments are made, we will proceed with the final steps of publication. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Zakaria Boulanouar, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Based on the reviewer’s final comments, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript is accepted pending minor revisions. Please ensure the following before final acceptance: 1- Add a few recent and relevant citations in the discussion section, as suggested by the reviewer. 2- Ensure that the manuscript fully adheres to the journal’s formatting guidelines. Once these minor adjustments are made, we will proceed with the final steps of publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: As this is the second review, the author has addressed few comments and revised it accordingly. Hence, the article could be considered for publication ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Bharat Ram Dhungana Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. |
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