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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: I. Major Strengths 1.Large-Scale and Generalizable Cohort The study uses data from the NHANES (1999–2018), a nationally representative U.S. cohort, including 4,350 CKD patients (eGFR < 60 mL/min/1.73m²). This ensures strong external validity—results are not limited to a single center or regional population, but applicable to diverse U.S. CKD patients across age, race, and socioeconomic status. 2.Comprehensive Frailty Assessment The frailty index (FI) is constructed per Searle’s validated methodology, incorporating 53 deficits across 7 domains (cognition, ADL dependence, depression, comorbidities, healthcare utilization, physical function, laboratory markers). This multidimensional approach avoids limitations of single-domain tools (e.g., gait speed alone) and better captures the complexity of frailty in CKD—where physiological deficits (e.g., anemia, inflammation) and functional impairments (e.g., mobility loss) often coexist. 3.Robust Statistical Analyses Multivariable adjustment: Three hierarchical Cox models (adjusting for demographics, lifestyle, and comorbidities) minimize confounding, ensuring associations between FI and mortality are not driven by factors like age or diabetes. Dose-response and stratification: Restricted cubic splines confirm linear associations between FI and mortality (all-cause, cardiovascular, cancer), while subgroup analyses (age, sex, BMI, diabetes/hypertension) validate consistency across populations. Sensitivity analyses: Excluding patients with preexisting CVD/cancer and multiple imputation for missing data confirm results are robust to selection bias and data gaps. 4.Focus on Cause-Specific Mortality Most prior CKD-frailty studies focus on all-cause mortality; this study extends knowledge by linking FI to cardiovascular (ICD-10: I00-I09, I11, I13, I20-I51) and cancer (ICD-10: C00-C97) mortality. The finding that high FI increases cancer mortality by 67% (tertile 3 vs. 1) fills a gap in understanding frailty’s role in non-cardiovascular outcomes in CKD. 4. Outcome Interpretation and Reporting Cancer Mortality Mechanism Underexplained:The study finds FI is associated with cancer mortality (HR=1.67, tertile 3 vs. 1) but does not discuss why—frailty may increase cancer risk via immune dysfunction [28] or delay cancer diagnosis via reduced healthcare utilization. Suggestion: In discussion, cite studies linking frailty to cancer (e.g., Reference 22, which shows frailty increases cancer mortality via impaired treatment tolerance) and hypothesize: “In CKD, frailty may exacerbate immune dysfunction (e.g., reduced lymphocyte count, included in FI), increasing cancer progression risk. Future studies should explore FI and cancer treatment outcomes (e.g., chemotherapy adherence) in CKD.” Kaplan-Meier Curve Reporting Gaps:Figure 2 shows survival curves for FI tertiles but lacks median survival times (e.g., “Median all-cause survival was 8.2 years in FI tertile 1 vs. 4.5 years in tertile 3”). This limits clinical understanding of FI’s impact on survival duration. Suggestion: Add median survival times to Figure 2 legends and results (e.g., “Median all-cause survival differed significantly by FI tertile: 8.2 (IQR: 5.1–10.3) years (tertile 1), 6.1 (IQR: 3.8–8.5) years (tertile 2), and 4.5 (IQR: 2.9–6.7) years (tertile 3); log-rank p<0.001”). II. Key Issues and Revision Suggestions 1. Methodological Gaps in Frailty Index Construction Over-Reliance on Self-Reported Data:Critical FI components (e.g., comorbidities, ADL dependence, depression via PHQ-9) are self-reported, which may introduce bias (e.g., underreporting of “stigma-related” conditions like depression, or overreporting of functional limitations). Objective measures (e.g., grip strength, 4-meter gait speed—available in NHANES) are not integrated into the FI, despite their validation in CKD frailty assessment [10, 21]. Suggestion: In the “Frailty Index” section, acknowledge self-report bias and supplement with sensitivity analyses: re-calculate FI by replacing 1–2 self-reported domains (e.g., ADL dependence) with objective NHANES data (e.g., gait speed < 0.8 m/s) to test if associations with mortality persist. Cite studies validating objective measures in CKD (e.g., Reference 10, which uses grip strength to define frailty) to contextualize limitations of self-report. No CKD-Specific FI Adaptation:The FI uses general population cutoffs (tertiles: 0.010–0.130, 0.130–0.211, 0.211–0.665) but does not account for CKD-specific physiological deficits (e.g., uremic toxin accumulation, renal anemia, mineral bone disorder). These factors may accelerate frailty in CKD, making general population cutoffs less clinically relevant. Suggestion: Add a post-hoc analysis stratifying by CKD stage (G3a: 45–59, G3b: 30–44, G4: 15–29, G5: <15 mL/min/1.73m²) to test if FI-mortality associations vary by renal function. For example, “In CKD G5, the adjusted HR for all-cause mortality in FI tertile 3 was 2.51 (95% CI: 2.03–3.11), stronger than in G3a (HR=1.78, 95% CI: 1.42–2.23).” Discuss whether CKD stage-specific FI cutoffs (e.g., lower threshold for frailty in G5) may be needed for clinical use. 2. Confounding Factors and Causal Inference Missing CKD-Specific Confounders:The models adjust for general factors (BMI, hypertension) but omit key CKD-related variables linked to both frailty and mortality: Urine albumin-to-creatinine ratio (ACR): A marker of renal damage, independently associated with frailty [21] and cardiovascular mortality [3]. Anemia severity: Beyond hemoglobin (included in FI), iron parameters (ferritin, transferrin saturation) influence muscle function and frailty [29]. Inflammation markers: C-reactive protein (CRP) or interleukin-6 (IL-6)—available in NHANES—mediate both CKD progression and frailty [28]. Suggestion: Add a fourth Cox model (Model 4) adjusting for ACR, ferritin, and CRP. Report if FI associations are attenuated (e.g., “After adding ACR, the adjusted HR for FI tertile 3 decreased from 2.02 to 1.89, suggesting partial mediation by renal damage”). No Mediation Analysis for Causal Pathways:The discussion hypothesizes mechanisms (inflammation, lifestyle changes) but does not test them. For example, it is unclear if frailty increases mortality via inflammation, or if inflammation independently drives both frailty and mortality. Suggestion: Use mediation analysis (e.g., Baron-Kenny method) to test if CRP (inflammation) or physical activity (lifestyle) mediates the FI-mortality association. For example, “CRP mediated 15% of the association between FI and cardiovascular mortality (p<0.001), indicating inflammation is a partial driver.” IV. Overall Recommendation Revise and Resubmit. The study makes a valuable contribution to CKD and frailty research by linking a multidimensional FI to cause-specific mortality in a large, generalizable cohort. Key revisions—adding CKD stage stratification, including CKD-specific confounders, and enhancing data transparency—will address current gaps and ensure the manuscript meets PLOS ONE’s scientific rigor standards. With these adjustments, the work will provide actionable guidance for integrating frailty assessment into CKD clinical care. Reviewer #2: Main topic : Mengmei Xiong and Xiaoyan Lu investigated the association between a 53-item Frailty Index (FI) and mortality, expressed as overall and cause-specific mortality, based on retrospective data from the NHANES cohort. The main objective of this study is to highlight the association between frailty, expressed by the 53-item FI, and the rate of mortality in a population suffering from chronic kidney failure (CKD) and to investigate a potentially specific association between FI and cancer or cardiovascular diseases. This kind of approach is relevant to estimate the association between frailty and common disease for older adults but may also be interesting in chronic organ failure like the kidney, which is associated with multiple morbidities, loss of functional independence, and overall mortality. This work sometimes lacks intelligibility, due to some difficulties with English writing but also with the research question that remains unclear for me. I am not comfortable with the question raised by the authors, I understand that they suppose a strong association between cancer and frailer patients in this population, but do not justify this thinking by any reference in the introduction. However, my biggest point about this manuscript is the categorization of patients suffering from CKD. Based and the article, I understand that patients were selected from a US public database, by the estimation of their estimated glomerular filtration rate. An eGFR above 60mL/min/1.73m2 was then considered as CKD. This point appears like quite problematic, because authors had no information about the clinical diagnosis of CKD, the aetiology evocated and might be biased by some acute kidney failure for younger people, or physiological loss of GFR in older adults. Moreover, it seems to me that the authors could not have access to any information about treatments of CKD, and then could not adjust their models for eGFR, the stage of CKD or the kidney replacement therapy. This point strongly impacts negatively the quality of the manuscript, whereas statistical analysis is robust, the methodology for the creation of the FI seems also consistent. Discussion deserves to evocate this point, which is not the case currently. I would consider a point-by-point reviewing if the first two points can be corrected. Kind regards ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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<p>How Frailty Index Impacts Death in Chronic Kidney Disease: A Retrospective Observational Investigation PONE-D-25-41253R1 Dear Dr. Lu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ken Iseri Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I. Assessment of Response to Review Comments The authors have systematically addressed the core issues raised in the initial review, with most key suggestions effectively implemented. The overall quality of revisions is high. II. Remaining Minor Issues Inadequate clinical practical details: While the authors suggest integrating frailty management into CKD care, they have not specified clinically actionable intervention thresholds for the frailty index (e.g., whether FI>0.210 constitutes a high-risk threshold for intervention) or screening frequency (e.g., annual screening for CKD G3+ patients). It is recommended to briefly supplement these in the Discussion section to enhance clinical translatability. III. Core Strengths of the Revised Manuscript Significantly improved methodological rigor: Added CKD stage-specific subgroup analysis and mediation analysis, adjusted for key confounders such as ACR and CRP, and the statistical model is more aligned with the pathophysiological characteristics of CKD, enhancing the reliability of results. Convincing conclusions: Using a large, nationally representative cohort (3,262 cases), the study clearly demonstrates a dose-response relationship between the frailty index and all-cause, cardiovascular, and cancer mortality. This association remains robust across subgroups of different CKD stages, sexes, and ages, ensuring strong generalizability. Comprehensive and objective discussion of limitations: The authors candidly acknowledge data constraints (e.g., lack of treatment information, self-report bias) without avoiding methodological shortcomings, reflecting the scientific rigor of the study. IV. Overall Review Conclusion The authors have fully addressed the core issues raised in the initial review. The revised manuscript meets PLOS ONE’s scientific rigor requirements in methodology, statistical analysis, and result interpretation. The core conclusions are reliable and hold significant clinical and public health value. The remaining minor issues do not affect the core quality of the study, and no further major revisions are needed. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No **********
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