Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 18, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-35823-->-->"Doctor, when can I drive?" – Can we compensate an immobilization of the right wrist while driving a car?-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Hilsmann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The introduction well structured with clear aim. Combining the aim with statistics related to road accidents would have been a plus The methods please add a brief description of the motion capturing system used The limitation and conclusion are an add to the paper Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this valuable work. The topic is clinically meaningful, and the manuscript provides new insights into compensatory kinematics. Overall, the work is good and promising, but several sections need clearer reporting, correction of inconsistencies, and tempering of conclusions before publication can be considered. In the abstract, please include the number of participants, mean age, and sex distribution in the results section. The study objective sentence is too long and difficult to follow. Sample size justification is missing, please provide a sample size calculation or state that the study is exploratory. Randomization procedure unclear, Describe how conditions were randomized. Limitations include the lack of adjustment for multiple comparisons, a small sample size, and concerns about simulator generalizability. Additionally, potential learning effects should be considered. Reviewer #3: Overall Assessment The manuscript addresses an interesting and clinically relevant question concerning the impact of wrist immobilization on driving ability. This is a pertinent topic in orthopedic and trauma care, as patients frequently inquire about their fitness to drive following immobilization or surgery. The use of a driving simulator combined with motion capture analysis is a clear strength and adds objectivity to the study. The paper is well-structured, the methodology is described in detail, and the results are generally clear. However, several methodological, analytical, and reporting issues require clarification and revision before the work can be considered for publication. Strengths 1. Novelty and Relevance: The study focuses on an underexplored area—upper extremity immobilization and compensatory strategies during driving. 2. Methodological Rigor: Use of motion capture and a standardized driving simulator protocol provides objective kinematic data. 3. Clinical Importance: Results may aid physicians in counseling patients regarding return to driving after wrist immobilization. 4. Clear Structure: The manuscript follows a logical format with clear separation of Introduction, Methods, Results, and Discussion. Major Concerns 1. Sample Size and Power o Only 20 participants were included, all of them healthy volunteers without actual injury or pain. While the study demonstrates biomechanical compensation, the small and homogeneous sample raises questions about generalizability. o A power analysis to justify the sample size is not provided. 2. External Validity o The study used healthy young adults (mean age ~28 years) without pain or disability. This limits applicability to real patients who often have pain, swelling, decreased grip strength, or comorbidities. o This limitation is acknowledged but not sufficiently emphasized in the Discussion. A stronger statement is needed about how this affects clinical translation. 3. Simulator Limitations o Only three driving scenarios were tested (shifting, left turn, right turn), which may not represent the complexity of real-life driving (e.g., emergency braking, rapid steering corrections, highway driving). o Automatic transmission was used in some parts, potentially underestimating the role of the immobilized wrist. 4. Statistical Analysis o The choice of linear mixed models is appropriate, but details of the model specification are sparse. o It is not clear if adjustments for multiple comparisons were performed, given the large number of joint angles and outcomes analyzed. This raises the risk of type I errors. o Effect sizes and confidence intervals are not presented, which would strengthen the interpretation. 5. Clinical Implications o The conclusion that “safe driving with the right immobilized wrist is possible” may be overstated given the limited scenarios and lack of patient population. o A more cautious interpretation is needed, highlighting that these findings apply only to healthy individuals in controlled conditions. Minor Concerns 1. Abstract o The abstract is generally well written but should explicitly state that only healthy volunteers were studied. o Reporting of key statistical values (p-values, confidence intervals) would strengthen clarity. 2. Introduction o While background references are provided, the review of existing literature could be more concise. Some citations appear repetitive. o Clarify how this study advances beyond earlier work on elbow immobilization and driving. 3. Methods o More information about randomization (order of immobilized vs. non-immobilized trials) is needed. o Describe the wrist immobilization device more clearly—was thumb immobilization included? How standardized was the splint? o Provide explicit exclusion criteria (e.g., musculoskeletal disorders, neurological conditions). 4. Results o Tables are informative but could be simplified; some parameters (e.g., minimum/maximum values) may not add substantial value. o Figures would benefit from clearer legends and consistent labeling (NI = no immobilization; WO = with immobilization). 5. Discussion o The discussion is comprehensive but occasionally repetitive. o Greater emphasis on the limitations (young healthy participants, lack of pain, limited scenarios) is necessary. o Some references are dated; ensure that the most recent literature (past 5 years) is adequately included. 6. Language and Style o Overall, the manuscript is well written. Minor grammatical edits and simplification of long sentences would improve readability. Suggestions for Improvement • Include a power analysis or at least a rationale for the sample size. • Report effect sizes and confidence intervals along with p-values. • Clarify whether correction for multiple comparisons was applied. • Strengthen the limitations section, particularly regarding generalizability to real patients. • Revise the conclusion to be more cautious, stressing that results cannot be directly generalized to injured or post-operative populations. • Improve clarity of tables and figures, and ensure consistent terminology. Conclusion and Recommendation This is a well-designed pilot study that provides valuable biomechanical insights into compensatory mechanisms during driving with wrist immobilization. However, methodological clarifications, more cautious interpretation, and improvements in reporting are needed. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-25-35823R1-->-->"Doctor, when can I drive?" – Can we compensate an immobilization of the right wrist while driving a car?-->-->PLOS One?> Dear Dr. Hilsmann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 25 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Priti Chaudhary, M.S. Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: After revisions done by authors,The manuscript may be accepted as Pilot study; as the small sample size, the exclusive inclusion of healthy volunteers without pain or injury, and the limited range of simulated driving tasks reduces the generalizability to real patients. To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. |
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"Doctor, when can I drive?" – Can we compensate an immobilization of the right wrist while driving a car: A pilot study PONE-D-25-35823R2 Dear Dr. Falk Hilsmann, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Priti Chaudhary, M.S. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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