Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 19, 2025 |
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Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: “This work was supported by the Intramural Research Program of the National Institutes of Health (NIH), National Institute of Environmental Health Sciences, 1ZIAES102405 (CJW) and 1ZICES102425 (Gene Editing and Mouse Model Core).” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers made some specific comments, please address them in logical and coherent manner. I am looking forward to your reply and revised manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript tested an interesting hypothesis whether an SNP in the FVB/N strain contributes to the accelerated onset of endometrial cancer in the DES-induced EC model. The authors used an elegant conplastic genetic model to test this hypothesis and found that there was no difference in cancer incidence but surprisingly found higher cancer grade in the conplastic strain. The authors conclude that the increased EC susceptibility lies in nuclear gene polymorphisms but not the SNP in the FVB/N mitochondrial genome. This is an important research addressing the role of strain differences in response to DES-induced EC development. The conplastic mouse strain generated is a very valuable resource to researchers in the field of cancer and developmental biology research. There are some clarifications that the authors can make to improve this manuscript. 1. The authors could explicitly state the conclusion regarding the role of the SNP on EC incidents more clearly in the abstract. 2. It is intriguing that EC tumor grade is higher in the conplastic uteri. A direct interpretation is that the SNP actually protects uteri from EC progression. It would be nice to discuss this surprising result further by giving some possible mechanisms that can lead to this. 3. Is it known whether or how this SNP alters mitochondrial function in the presence of excessive estrogen signaling? 4. Does the DES-induced EC fall into the newly classified EC subtypes? Endometrial cancer. Nat Rev Dis Primers 7, 88 (2021). This information should be important to be included. Reviewer #2: The presented manuscript is an original article with novel discoveries in the field of endometrial cancer models and germ line competent embryonic stem cells. However, it does require several improvements in order to be suitable for publishing in PLOS one. In short, I believe that the biggest shortcomings of the paper are the presentation and analysis of the Results, as well as Discussion where some oversights have taken place. The statistical analysis should also be explained in detail. Commens throughout the text by row: Row 33 – Change “diethylstilbesterol” to “diethylstilbestrol”. Row 52 – You state: “leading to altered mitochondrial function” Such as? What are the altered functions and what are they connected to other then ROS production? How does it potentially drive endometrial cancer? I believe this is an important information to elaborate on since the whole paper is based on the fact that the mitochondria is, according to the Abstract, “mildly disfunctional”. Row 60-62 – You state: “To test this idea, we generated a conplastic strain of FVB/N mice that carried 61 129S6/SvEvTac mitochondria (FVB/N-mt129S6/SvEvTac; referred to henceforth as FVB/N62mt129).” Why did you use this mouse strain? Any other mouse strain could have been used. Consider writing a sentence or two about why this mouse strain was chosen. (Perhaps due to its potential to generate embryonic stem cells?) Row 91 – Consider changing “FVB/N-mt 129” to “FVB/N-mt129S6/SvEvTac” due to the naming in Abstract. It should be uniform. Or put “FVB/N-mt129S6/SvEvTac (FVB/N-mt 129)”. Row 94 – You state: “Females were then backcrossed for 17 generations (N17)” Why 17? Row 199 – Please indicate the volume of vehicle/corn oil. Row 206 – You state: “Mice were humanely euthanized at 9 months of age.” How did you choose this timepoint? Especially considering that in ROWS 44 and 45 you offer several potential time points. Row 208 – You state: “FVB/N mice, N=24; FVB/N-mt129 mice, N=42” How come there is almost twice as much of FVB/N-mt129 mice in the experiment? Please elaborate. Row 208 – You state: “Two sections 36 μm apart were microscopically evaluated” Were they both scored? It is not explained in the “Histological analysis” section. Please elaborate. Row 253 – “Statistical analysis” This part should be written in much more detail, especially because your sample size is extremely different between groups. You should provide detailed explanation of statistical analysis for each method. Row 324 – You state: “This difference did not quite reach significance” replace with “This difference was not statistically significant” Row 297-298 – You state: “FVB/N-mt129 conplastic mouse line readily produced ES cells using blastocyst 298 plating methodology” Did you try to obtain them from FVB/N mouse line considering that Reference 23 provides an improved protocol? If no, explain why. If yes, please include the Results of the experiment. Figure 2 – The quality of the images is quite poor. Please increase the quality. Also, the Figure would benefit from better labelling. Maybe consider circling or enlarging the important parts of tissue. Figure 3 – The results should be presented in a better way than the three graphs presented. Due to the difference in group sizes, the graphs are hard to interpret. Please find a suitable alternative. Additional comments: Considering the complexity of the experiment, I believe that the paper would benefit from schematic representation of the experiment timeline. Do you have any pictures of the animals or uterus (perhaps on a scale paper, or with a ruler) after sacrifice in order to provide morphological appearance of the uterus and associated tissue? The Figure 2 would look more informative. Other than tumor grade, it would be beneficial if the study included additional tests such as CT scans of the mice to track tumor progress throughout time, or just prior to sacrifice. In that way, a more accurate image of tumor size and spreading could have been obtained. Why weren’t any other characterization methods other than basic histology done? Maybe the abstract should be adjusted more towards the “embryonic stem cells” part considering that the major portion of the paper’s content is directed more towards obtaining stem cells than on actually comparing the two animal models. How did you characterise the stem cells? Why is that not explained and provided in the Methods and Results? Even though there is a substantial amount of stem cells mention, there are no Figures relating to either obtaining or cultivation. Please consider including additional Figure relating to stem cells in the Manuscript. The authors also didn’t fully exclude the impact of mitochondrial genome since none of the experiments “post model establishment” focused on assessing mitochondrial function and ROS production between the strains. Why weren’t ROS measurements performed? Considering the unexpected results regarding tumor development in constrained mice, it would be beneficial to discuss this issue in more detail. Please comment on possible causes and provide references if possible. Consider separating Results from Discussion. Go once again through the text and uniform words and phrases (e.g. Fig. or Figure, germ line or germline…) ********** what does this mean? ). 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Conplastic FVB/N-mt129S6/SvEvTac mice: A new tool for cancer research PONE-D-25-48629R1 Dear Dr. Williams, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Benjamin Benzon, Ph.D., M.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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