Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 8, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Please find attached my review of the manuscript entitled "Enarodustat suppresses thymic stromal lymphopoietin expression via hypoxia-inducible factor-mediated c-Jun N-terminal kinases dephosphorylation" (manuscript ref no.: PONE-D-25-54477). The authors have already reported in the past that HIF signaling suppresses TSLP expression in keratinocytes, but the mechanism was unclear. In the current study they identify AP-1 (via JNK) as the key suppressed pathway. They also demonstrate that HIF activation increases DUSP expression, which in turn dephosphorylates and inactivates JNK, leading to reduced AP-1 activity and both HIF1α and HIF2α are required for this suppressive effect. While the study suggests use of small molecule enarodustat as a clinically attractive target for Atopic Dermatitis by targeting endogenous HIF pathway, the data are weak and has insufficient proof of concept. The use of a single cell line HaCaT to prove clinical translation is merely speculative. Mechanistic finding requires in vivo validation using AD mouse model or knock outs for DUSP and/or HIF1α/HIF2α. Alternatively in order to investigate how enarodustat and HIF activation reprogram keratinocyte pathways the authors could design studies to investigate transcriptomic and genomic profiles to investigate the pathways in enarodustat-mediated TSLP suppression. This would identify global transcriptional changes in response to enarodustat or Determine HIF-dependent pathways that mediate TSLP suppression. Reviewer #2: Paper: Enarodustat suppresses thymic stromal lymphopoietin expression via hypoxia inducible factor-mediated c-Jun N-terminal kinases dephosphorylation Summary and Overall impression: In this manuscript, Segawa et al. determined the components of pathways involved FSL-1 induction of TSLP within an in vitro system using the human keratinocyte cell line, HaCaT cells. The overall study attempts to systematically determine the involvement of NF-kB and AP-1 pathways in the FSL-1 induction of TSLP through use the of inhibitors. In doing so, they provide a schematic for a pathway in which Enarodustat acts to suppress TSLP through the involvement of stabilization of HIF, and the subsequent dephosphorylation of JNK through a proposed number of DUSPs. While the study has mostly delineated the involvement of the pathways it hypothesized, several concerns arise when reading the text that should be addressed: Discussion of specific areas for improvement Major concern 1. Throughout the paper, only RT-qPCR was used for TSLP detection. Given that this paper is arguing for pharmacological use of that HIF-PH inhibitors such as enarodustat in treating atopic dermatitis, have the authors considered using a protein detection method such as ELISA or western blot to ascertain that similar dynamics of TSLP are observed at the protein level? If not, this should be done for Figures 2D and 3B where they attempt to deduce the involvement of enarodustat in the NF-kB and AP-1 pathways. Minor concern 1. In the results section, authors tend to leave things hanging by solely describing the results without providing suggestions on what they mean. For example, the entire section 3.3 is purely descriptive, without any interpretation on what the data means. This problem is persistent throughout the manuscript. This may have been intended to save the inference for the discussion, but the paragraphs end abruptly, disrupting the understanding of the reader as we do not know the key point that the authors want us to get from the figure. 2. The phrasing in line 262 and 263 needs to be reworked. From Figure 7E, it seems “HIF1a and HIF2a knockdown without Enarodustat” already suppressed TSLP production to a similar level as with the “control siRNA treated condition + Enarodustat”. But the term block gives a false interpretation of the data. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Enarodustat suppresses thymic stromal lymphopoietin expression via hypoxia-inducible factor-mediated c-Jun N-terminal kinases dephosphorylation PONE-D-25-54477R1 Dear Prof. Segawa, Thank you for submitting the revised manuscript. We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Srinivasa Reddy Bonam Academic Editor PLOS One |
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PONE-D-25-54477R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Segawa, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Srinivasa Reddy Bonam Academic Editor PLOS One |
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