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| Original SubmissionOctober 22, 2025 |
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, this is a methodologically rigorous study and a well written manuscript. There are a few edits that are needed. For example, on line 100 it states, "Lebanese lira" on line 402 it says, "Lebanese pound." There are also inconsistencies in tense. For example, on line 109, "Studies in Lebanon have highlighted..." I look forward to reading the published article. Reviewer #2: General comments: This is a good study with appropriate details given and good flow of narrative. Abstract: 1) Perhaps want to include the odds ratio for multiple regression result. 2) Could probably cut the proportion of women as majority as unsure how this may change the narrative 3) Reading the whole thing, I would say that the qualitative part focuses a lot about impact of migration, perhaps want to revise title to include that word. Maybe readers will have impression that this tells two points of views from the workers (quanti) and upper management (quali) Introduction: 4) Page 4. Simultaneously, systemic issues such as weak health systems � what does weak systems mean) 5) Page 5: Since October 2019…. � maybe could show better context of what’s been happening over the last few years with specific year of things happening – unsure explosion happened when, so might be better for new readers to understand when each occasion happened. 6) Page 5: Lebanese lira � could put in bracket (Lebanese currency) 7) Page 6: say that Beirut is capital of Lebanon, maybe also could put the population number so that readers could get a sense how big is the capital and how big is the demand 8) Maybe explain a bit about what you mean by political instability in Lebanon, quite vague and general 9) Last paragraph: Make a distinction of doing quanti study to HCW and quali to management levels Materials and methods: 10) Can you say why the medical residents and department chiefs were excluded. If residents mean in training, does that mean no other trainees that were excluded like nurses, etc 11) Quali phase Inclusion: …. Willing to participate (I don’t think this sentence is necessary as this is why you include them as eligible. Consent part comes after that). In that sense, does that mean the exclusion criteria are those who participated in the quantitative survey, perhaps can write that so it makes a distinction of HCWs who answered their reasons to migrate (bottom up approach) and management POVs why this is happening (top down approach) 12) Out of curiosity, are all the HCWs have Lebanese nationalities, meaning no international workers so far? 13) Noted in introduction that migration was reported among nurses or medical doctor. As you are also including pharmacists, dietitition, etc,..is there evidence for this as well that should be the intro, or you are purposely do this as a part of seeing whats the trend in other HCWs that were not usually reported as well Sampling strategy 14) 550 HCW – is this the total number of all the staffs in the hospital and where is this number obtained from; registrar, admin? Also saying that this is the target population for the quantitative part or overall? 15) Stratified sampling – understand the logic, but whats the number like in terms of distributions across specialties 16) Purposive sampling – what does this mean, and also would help if there are flowchart of sample selection from eligible, excluded, and final 17) For quali sample, does that mean the people selected were ensured from different department Data collection tools 18) Work experience - …..salary range.. ( is this a monthly based salary) 19) Page 10 (HCW migration intentions) – the last sentence implied that they were asked about the reasons and potential strategies. Does this mean sort of open ended question in the survey. I can see the result from Figure 2, but these were not shown in the method part Data analysis 20) Page 12 – first two sentences were repeated 21) Unsure if the data categorisations in the survey is similar to the analyses. Is there any recategorization due to smaller distribution in subcategory. Or data transformation after seeing the total numbers. 22) Translation was reviewed…… - is this done by consensus of the authors or had third part doing it Results 23) Response rates – give a percentage, also is there a reason they did not participate (was it accessed in the survey if HCW were not consented). Also, could be more explicit that the first part is the quantitative analysis as this 120 people were the sample and 10 is for qualitative 24) Table 1: ensure if want to use one decimal point for proportions then all are shown one decimal point (some are missing). Also, educational background BT/LT (what does this acronym mean). Salaray range is not sure if this implies an hourly rate, in lebanese currency? 25) Page 15 – Of the total respondents (79.2%)…. This implies that from the 79.2%, 20.8% had another job. Don’t think that is quite right. The 79.2% is not needed in the text 26) Bivariate analysies examining……Additionally, our analysis….. several things confuses me in this part. The numbers in the texts are not the same as the table. Also, the text didn’t say what is dropped or included in the multiple logistic regression analyses. Table shows only adjusted OR for pay (which numbers are not the same), but text shows it includes prospects as well, and the decimal points were not similar presented. If all wants to shows three decimal points for 95%CI, please keep all the same (or two decimal points) 27) Table 3. I don’t think p-value adds any value or needed here, as simple logistic regression shows the similar bivariate association. (less reliance to p-values but more focus on the estimates) 28) Staff suggestions – had troubled understanding where this analyses came from. Refer to method, where this should be explicitly said what is the sentence in the survey that leads to this sections. Is it write whatever or guided like please write about financial, or support, management treatment, etc 29) Qualitative part: Findings from key informant… - years of experience does this imply working in the hospital, or in general, or in Lebanon 30) Page 19: "The dollar rate is increasing... and we are still getting our salary on the 1,500 rates... – what does the meaning of rates. 31) Two key informants mentioned the possibility of obtaining another 440 passport, which offers greater mobility and legal security….this sentence repeated twice in the same paragraph 32) Page 22: The quality of care is also affected…. – change to past tense. Also RN abbreviation needs the full name 33) Page 24: Flexible work schedules, thoughtful recruitment criteria,… - what is the meaning of ‘thoughtful recruitment criteria’ Discussion 34) Unlike prior studies that often concentrate solely on nurses or medical students [20-22], this research encompasses a broader spectrum, including physicians, allied 572 health practitioners, technicians, and administrative staff. By examining migration drivers across these diverse categories, this study provides a comprehensive understanding of Lebanon's healthcare workforce dynamics amidst economic and political challenges. These insights are essential for crafting targeted strategies to mitigate the impact of HCW migration on healthcare systems globally, ensuring sustained and high-quality healthcare delivery 577 despite workforce mobility. I feel like this is one of the strengths of this study, perhaps rearrange this to put it there? Cause the first paragraph should refer to the main aim, and I don’t think is the main point that should be raised. 35) Combining findings from the quantitative and qualitative data… - perhaps this fit much better as the first paragraph in discussion 36) Page 28: The quantitative analysis also identified the lack of a supportive environment as a reason for migration intention, a factor not mentioned inthe previous study.—which previous study. Same paragraph for this part: Effective management, collegial relationships, professional recognition, and emotional support are vital; without these factors, HCW may feel undervalued and isolated, prompting them to seek employment in more supportive settings abroad (any reference) 37) Page 29: ….higher proportion of nurses with bachelor's degrees decreased this likelihood. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, thank you for your thorough review of our comments. You have addressed each one, providing detailed responses and correcting them within the manuscript. Reviewer #2: Great work ! Thank you for addressing all the comments with good explanations and great elaborations. 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