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| Original SubmissionJanuary 23, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Summary Paragraph The paper titled "Normative Data for Learning and Memory Test (TAMV-I) Based on Item Response Theory and Linear Mixed Models" evaluates the psychometric properties of the TAMV-I test using Item Response Theory (IRT) and Linear Mixed Models, generating normative data from a sample of 1,640 participants across three Latin American countries and Spain. The study aims to provide robust normative data and explore the interaction of sociodemographic variables with performance. Results suggest that variables such as age and country of origin significantly influence test performance, indicating a need to carefully interpret results based on these factors. Overall, the study addresses an important issue in neuropsychological testing: the lack of access to standardized and high-quality neuropsychological assessments and the limitations of traditional statistical methods (e.g., Classical Test Theory, CTT) in generating reliable normative data. However, the discussion regarding country-specific effects and the variability in normative data interpretation remains underdeveloped. The study raises a critical question: If performance varies significantly across demographic factors, how should normative data be applied effectively in diverse populations? Major Issues 1. Results are incomplete and difficult to interpret from figures. • The presentation of results is unclear, making it challenging to extract key findings. • Figures should be more structured and detailed, with improved resolution for readability. Add notes explaining the main features of figures. 2. Methodology • Sampling Procedure: o It is not explicitly stated how participants were selected. o Was the sample size for each country predetermined, or was it subject to availability? o What was the attrition rate (statistical death)? • Data Collection: o Were questionnaires filled out on paper or online? 3. Results • Country-Specific Data Not Reported: o The study claims that performance varies by country, but country-specific analyses are not shown in the results section. o Adding a comparison table by country (e.g., means, SDs, effect sizes) would improve clarity. • Normative Data Calculation: o The example provided is useful, but the online calculator should be demonstrated visually. o What does the calculator output look like? (e.g., a figure, table, or graph comparing the individual score to normative data). o How was the calculator validated? Are there key parameters that need to be reported for its use? 4. Discussion • Impact of Sociodemographic Variables: o The authors mention that age, country, and gender influence test performance, but the implications of these interactions are not fully discussed. o How should clinicians and researchers adjust their interpretations if these factors significantly affect results? • Educational System Differences: o The sample includes countries with diverse education systems (low-, middle-, and high-income settings). o Could differences in educational background explain some of the performance variation? o Would it be useful to control for education level as a covariate when establishing normative scores? • Comparison to CTT, IRT, and Rasch Modeling: o The study criticizes CTT but does not extensively discuss why IRT provides a significant advantage over traditional methods. o Adding a brief theoretical discussion comparing CTT, IRT, and Rasch models would strengthen the paper. Minor Issues 1. Title • The title should specify the target population (e.g., "Normative Data for Learning and Memory Test (TAMV-I) in Latin America and Spain"). 2. Introduction • Line 90-91: There is a typo with an unnecessary period. • Line 93: The author's last name should appear before the citation. • Clarify Study Contribution: o The introduction discusses the limitations of previous neuropsychological test standardization but does not explicitly state whether: � Prior normative data are unreliable. � The new approach offers an entirely different framework for interpretation. � The study only improves the statistical methodology without changing the core interpretation of the test. o The authors should explicitly clarify how their results improve practical test interpretation. 3. Figures and Tables • Figure 2: o The resolution is too low, making it difficult to read. o Consider replotting the figure with better formatting (e.g., larger font size, clearer legends). Overall Assessment The paper addresses an important issue in neuropsychological assessment—the need for better normative data using advanced statistical methods. The use of Item Response Theory (IRT) and Linear Mixed Models is a strong methodological choice that improves upon traditional Classical Test Theory (CTT). However, several key aspects require improvement: 1. Results need clearer presentation—figures should be improved, and country-specific data should be explicitly reported. 2. Discussion should explore the implications of sociodemographic effects in more depth—especially regarding country, age, and education. 3. The normative data calculator should be better described—including its validation process and output format. Recommendation: Major Revision Required • The paper has substantial theoretical and methodological contributions, but unclear presentation and insufficient discussion weaken its impact. • Addressing these issues will significantly improve clarity and practical applicability for clinicians and researchers using the TAMV-I test. Reviewer #2: First, I would like to thank the esteemed researchers for their considerable effort in designing and conducting this study. I would like to offer a few suggestions to help improve the overall quality of the research: 1- The abstract lacks specificity, and there is no well-defined hypothesis or research question, making it difficult to understand the significance of the study. Without a clearly stated aim, it is challenging to assess the appropriateness of the methodology or the relevance of the findings. It should clarify the focus of the research, its importance, and the gap it intends to address or solve a problem or improve the way things are currently being done. 2- The writer has used certain non-mesh keywords. 3- In the final paragraph of the Results section (line 307), the symbols "@@@" are used, which are unclear. The same issue is repeated in the Discussion section at line 401. 4- Lines 408 to 412 state that normative data cannot be generalized to an entire region due to varying influencing conditions. Doesn’t this statement itself call into question the validity of the entire study, whose primary aim was to establish normative data? 5- In the Data Collection and Sampling Method section, it is unclear what measures were taken to ensure randomization. Robust sampling practices are essential for the generalization and reliability of findings, and the absence of details regarding randomization raises concerns about potential bias of the sample. 6- Some tables are missing units of measurement, have too many decimal places, or show numbers in inconsistent formats. These small details can make the data harder to follow and take away from the overall clarity and professionalism of the presentation. The quality of visual data presentation is substandard. Figures are at times too low in resolution, poorly labeled, or lack clear scale bars, keys, and legend information necessary for independent comprehension 7- There are no disclosures of potential conflicts of interest, funding sources, or data management protocols that would assure readers of the adherence to established ethical norms Then major revision required prior to resubmission. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Normative Data for Learning and Memory Test (TAMV-I) in Latin American and Spanish Children: An Item Response Theory and Linear Mixed Models Approach PONE-D-25-02804R1 Dear Dr. Orozco-Acosta, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alejandro Botero Carvajal, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I have reviewed the revised manuscript and find that the authors have responded appropriately to the reviewers’ comments, with clear improvements in clarity and presentation. I recommend accepting the manuscript as revised. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Cesar Acevedo-Triana ********** |
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