Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2025 |
|---|
|
Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please carefully address all the suggestions raised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 21 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Arne Johannssen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please note that PLOS ONE has specific guidelines on code sharing for submissions in which author-generated code underpins the findings in the manuscript. In these cases, we expect all author-generated code to be made available without restrictions upon publication of the work. Please review our guidelines at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/materials-and-software-sharing#loc-sharing-code and ensure that your code is shared in a way that follows best practice and facilitates reproducibility and reuse. 3. Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: “This work was supported by 1. the National Natural Science Foundation of China (Grant No. U21A200276). 2. Beijing Major Difficult Diseases Collaborative Research Project of Traditional Chinese and Western Medicine ( 2023BJSZDYNJBXTGG-014 )” Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please update your submission to use the PLOS LaTeX template. The template and more information on our requirements for LaTeX submissions can be found at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/latex. 5. Please note that your Data Availability Statement is currently missing a direct link to access each database]. If your manuscript is accepted for publication, you will be asked to provide these details on a very short timeline. We therefore suggest that you provide this information now, though we will not hold up the peer review process if you are unable. 6. PLOS requires an ORCID iD for the corresponding author in Editorial Manager on papers submitted after December 6th, 2016. Please ensure that you have an ORCID iD and that it is validated in Editorial Manager. To do this, go to ‘Update my Information’ (in the upper left-hand corner of the main menu), and click on the Fetch/Validate link next to the ORCID field. This will take you to the ORCID site and allow you to create a new iD or authenticate a pre-existing iD in Editorial Manager. 7. Please include a separate caption for each figure in your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript addresses an important clinical question but I have concern on the fundamental methodological and results reporting. Abstract: -The use of abbreviation "NHANCE" without spelling in full. Please check as the abbreviation should be NHANES (National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey). Introduction: 1. The last paragraph includes a description of the methodology, which would be more appropriately placed in the Methods section. Methodology 1. Describe how Hep B was diagnosed to be entered in the database. 2. Any rationale why use random Forest for feature selection? 3. I am not clear if dataset were split into training and test dataset. Describe clearly on this 4. Cross-validation strategy and hyperparameter tuning not explicitly described. Generally the methodology section need major revision to improve the clarity. Results 1. Providing a summary of the final sample’s sociodemographic characteristics would greatly enhance understanding of the dataset. It is also unclear whether the final sample includes only adults or also includes children—this should be clarified. 2. Consider limiting discussion statements in the Results section, as it currently includes substantial discussion that would be more appropriately addressed in the Discussion section 3. It is advisable to present the results separately for the training and test datasets to facilitate comparison and assess model performance. This is particularly important given that overfitting is a common concern in machine learning algorithms. 4. While the MLPClassifier achieved high accuracy and strong performance metrics, the poor calibration curve may indicate overfitting or that the model's predicted probabilities do not align well with actual outcomes.?? 5 Overall Calibration plots suggest poor calibration despite high AUC?? Discussion 1. Include discussion on model overfitting. 2. Limitation of small sample size/ likely cross-sectional dataset 3. Potentially overstated claims about model performance and clinical utility...may need in-depth explanation/discussion General concern: -The strong performance metrics observed, despite the limited sample size, may be overly optimistic and warrant caution when interpreting the model’s reliability. -If feasible, obtaining a larger sample and rerunning the analysis would enhance the robustness and generalizability of the findings. Reviewer #2: The authors have chosen an interesting topics. 1. How many participants with hepatitis B viruses were recruited in your study? 2. Data preprocessing and feature screening For numerical variables, the mean was used for filling. but, the main drawback of using the mean is its sensitivity to outliers or extreme values in the dataset. These extreme values can disproportionately affect the mean, making it a potentially misleading representation of the typical value, especially with small sample sizes. So do you generalize with this limitation? 3. Your discussion at all is not supported by the existing evidences. i.e it lacks references. Please rewrite it. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Agmas Wassie Abate ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Arne Johannssen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I appreciate the authors’ considerable efforts to revise the manuscript and address the earlier reviewer comments. The revised version shows clearer organization, expanded methodological descriptions. However, despite these improvements, the study still suffers from fundamental limitations in methodological rigor, data adequacy, and interpretability of the model. The revise discussion did not address the clinical application of the model. I still have concerns regarding the conceptual framing of the model. The fundamental conceptual issue remains unresolved: the model is repeatedly presented as predicting “risk,” yet it is derived from a cross-sectional dataset incapable of temporal prediction. This conflation between classification and prediction weakens both the methodological soundness and the interpretative validity of the findings. I commend the authors for their efforts and suggest that this work to expand the dataset, validate the model externally, and incorporate interpretable machine learning techniques to enhance transparency and understanding of feature contributions. With these enhancements, the study could evolve into a stronger methodological contribution suitable for journals emphasizing pilot or exploratory AI applications in health research. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Agmas Wassie Abate ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 2 |
|
Construction of a depression risk prediction model for hepatitis B patients based on machine learning strategy PONE-D-25-15290R2 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Arne Johannssen Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #3: Thank you for addressing all reviewers comments and concerns. Your efforts are highly appreciated and we value your work Reviewer #4: In the manuscript by Wang et al, the authors have developed and compared 5 machine learning (ML) models that predict the risk of depression in subjects with Hepatitis B (HBV) using data from the NHANCE database. They observe that the Multi-layer Perceptron (MLP) Classifier method performed best among the 5 methods tested and propose that such models can be used at the clinical level to better predict the risk of depression in HBV patients. The following points were raised from the first round of revision: 1. Clinical relevance In response, the authors have added a discussion on the possible clinical applications of ML models as automated screening tools to identify high risk patients and initiate early interventions. While many studies currently apply machine learning approaches for predictive analyses, there are very few that have been directly used in patient care. However, the use of such models can be clinically useful in the future after rigorous prospective validation. The authors do well to advise caution against direct interpretation of their findings and clearly state that further studies are needed before clinical application. Therefore, the revisions are acceptable. 2. Methodological rigor, sample size and model interpretability In response, the authors justify the use of multiple ML algorithms and cross-validation to improve methodological rigor and cite several previously published studies with comparable sample sizes. Further, to support the clinical interpretability of their models, the authors describe the use of feature selection to identify clinical variables that have most predictive potential. Although the sample size is limited in the current study, the authors mention that it is a preliminary study that requires further validation. Also, the statistical measures taken by the authors to obtain methodological rigor are widely accepted. Therefore, the authors’ justification is acceptable 3. Use of cross-sectional data to build a predictive model In response, the authors have refined the wording of the manuscript and added a discussion addressing the limitations of using cross-sectional data in prognostic prediction. The revised wording and the added discussion appropriately clarify the limitations and also warn against using the results for causal interpretation. The revisions are therefore acceptable. Overall, the authors have satisfactorily answered the queries raised by the previous reviewers and made suitable changes in the manuscript. The revised manuscript is suitable for acceptance. I have added a few additional comments that can be addressed to further enhance the scientific and clinical interpretability of the study. 1. The authors may include a table with the comprehensive clinical characteristics of the study population (e.g. mean ± SD or median [IQR]) to allow better clinical interpretation of the predictive features identified by machine learning. The authors have mentioned sociodemographic characteristics in the results and provided the raw data in the supporting information, but it will be helpful to also present the distributions of laboratory parameters and physiological measurements when feasible, either in the main manuscript or as supplementary material, since these features were directly used to identify the predictive features. 2. The authors can elaborate on the number of depression positive patients present in the original dataset before and after the application of SMOTE for enhanced transparency and understanding of the robustness of the machine learning framework. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Reema Banarjee ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-25-15290R2 PLOS One Dear Dr. Wang, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Profesor Arne Johannssen Academic Editor PLOS One |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .