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| Original SubmissionOctober 3, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Kindly address the reviewer comments and submit the modified manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a multi-stage optimization framework for skin cancer classification using the HAM10000 dataset. The authors first identify Xception as the best-performing baseline, then apply a novel layer-wise sparsity-based pruning method to create a lightweight model. To address the dataset's significant class imbalance, they subsequently employ SMOTE and data augmentation. The framework's novelty is further emphasized by integrating an Avg-TopK pooling layer, which collectively results in a final model with 91.47% accuracy and a 35% reduction in parameters. The methodology for data splitting versus augmentation/oversampling is critically flawed. The text describing Figure 5 implies that SMOTE and data augmentation were applied to the entire dataset before it was split into training and test sets. This introduces severe data leakage, as synthetic or augmented versions of training images would be present in the test set, making the test results invalid. All oversampling and augmentation must be applied only to the training fold after the initial train-test split. The application of SMOTE directly in the high-dimensional pixel space is methodologically unsound. SMOTE is designed to interpolate in a feature space, not the raw pixel space. Averaging the pixels of two different skin lesions (e.g., one 'mel' and one 'nv') does not create a new, valid medical image; it creates a nonsensical artifact. This approach does not help the model generalize to real-world data and may, in fact, teach it to recognize these artifacts. The "novel" pruning method (Algorithm 1) is a simple heuristic that lacks robust validation and theoretical justification. The algorithm proposes removing all layers subsequent to the single layer with the highest activation sparsity. There is no evidence provided that high sparsity in one layer implies that all following layers are redundant. This method must be benchmarked against established pruning techniques (e.g., magnitude pruning, structured pruning) to prove its effectiveness. The title and abstract claim the model is "lightweight." However, the final "pruned" model still contains 13.5 million parameters. This is not a lightweight model by modern standards; for comparison, the authors' own baseline table shows MobileNetV2 has 2.3 million parameters. This claim is an overstatement and should be removed or heavily qualified. The baseline performance of the Xception model (84.62% accuracy) is relatively low compared to other modern results on HAM10000. Using a weak baseline overstates the relative improvements achieved by the authors' pipeline. The state-of-the-art comparison in Table 7 is misleading. The table mixes results from studies using different dataset sizes (e.g., 10,015 images vs. 39,060 images) and different augmentation protocols. This "apples-to-oranges" comparison does not allow for a fair assessment of the proposed method's performance. The table should be revised to only include studies using the same baseline 10,015-image dataset and a standardized evaluation. The manuscript is incomplete and not ready for peer review. The "Author summary" section contains "Lorem ipsum" placeholder text. The ablation study detailing the step-by-step improvements (Table 3 vs. Table 4 vs. Table 5 vs. Table 6) is useful, but the order of operations (Pruning, then SMOTE, then Augmentation) seems arbitrary. The authors should provide a justification for this specific pipeline order. The pruning results in Table 4 are not well-explained. The table only shows the results for 8 specific layers. To validate the "max sparsity" heuristic, a more systematic analysis is required. For example, what was the performance when pruning at the layer with the second-highest sparsity? The current table does not provide enough evidence that the block12_sepconv3_act layer was a uniquely optimal pruning point. The ethics statement "N/A" is insufficient. While HAM10000 is a public dataset, it consists of de-identified human data. A proper ethics statement should at least cite the original dataset paper and confirm that its data collection protocol was approved by an appropriate IRB. The Grad-CAM visualizations (Figure 6) are a good inclusion for interpretability. However, their value would be significantly increased by showing visualizations for misclassified images (like the 'mel/akiec' example from Figure 7). This would help diagnose why the model fails, rather than just confirming that it focuses on the lesion for correct classifications. The manuscript blurs the line between "pruning" and "architecture search." The model is not fine-tuned after pruning; it is completely retrained from scratch (Algorithm 1, line 10). This is a different process and should be described more accurately as a heuristic-based neural architecture search rather than traditional model pruning. The introduction and related works sections provide a good overview of standard techniques (GLCM, ANNs, SVMs). However, the literature review on SOTA deep learning methods for HAM10000 specifically could be more comprehensive to better position the paper's contribution. The use of Avg-TopK pooling is presented as a key part of the framework. Since this is an existing method (Ref 10), its contribution to the final 1% accuracy gain (90.52% to 91.47%) should be analyzed more deeply. Is this small gain worth the added complexity? A comparison with standard Global Average Pooling should be included. The introduction should be updated to include more recent 2025 state-of-the-art literature concerning deep learning for skin cancer and other oncological applications to better emphasize the field's current successes and provide a more current context for the work. A novel hybrid ConvNeXt-based approach for enhanced skin lesion classification A comprehensive comparison of convolutional neural network and visual transformer models on skin cancer classification https://journals.adbascientific.com/aiapp/article/view/92 https://journals.adbascientific.com/aiapp/article/view/89 https://journals.adbascientific.com/aiapp/article/view/90 Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a promising lightweight approach to skin cancer classification integrating pruning, SMOTE, and Avg-TopK pooling. The topic is relevant, and the methodology is generally well-structured. The pruned Xception architecture achieves competitive performance and meaningful parameter reduction, which is valuable for deployment in constrained environments. Major Concerns 1. Pruning methodology lacks robustness — sparsity is computed from a single test image, which may not represent general layer activation patterns. Consider evaluating sparsity across a validation batch. 2. Statistical validation is insufficient. Provide variance measures (CI, standard deviation) and statistical significance when comparing with benchmarks. 3. Claims of clinical application are premature without real clinical trials or physician-validated evaluation. 4. Literature review is extensive but repetitive—some sections can be condensed. Minor Issues 1. Numerous grammatical issues and awkward phrasing; manuscript needs language polishing. 2. Figures should include clearer labels and higher resolution. 3. Ensure consistent notation across architecture sections. Strengths 1. Significant parameter reduction (35% fewer parameters) with minimal accuracy loss. 2. Well-structured experimental pipeline. 3. Novel application of Avg-TopK pooling improves feature retention. With revisions addressing the concerns above, the manuscript has potential for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Prof.(Dr.) Farheen Siddiqui ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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