Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I found this study intriguing and valuable in exploring the associations between gut microbiome compositional clusters and cardiovascular risk. However, I have some concerns regarding potential confounding variables. Upon examining the patient characteristics, there appear to be several significant differences between Cluster L and Cluster H, particularly in variables such as age, BMI, and other clinical parameters. These are known confounders in gut microbiome analyses and may influence the observed associations independently of microbiome composition. To strengthen the robustness of the findings, I would suggest incorporating additional statistical methods to control for these covariates. In particular, MaAsLin2, a comprehensive multivariable association tool in R, would be highly appropriate for this kind of population-scale analysis. It allows for adjustment of multiple covariates and can help disentangle microbiome-feature associations from confounding influences. Including such an analysis could enhance the interpretability and reproducibility of the study's conclusions. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled "Gut microbiome compositional clusters in association with cardiovascular risk: An observational cohort study" addresses an important question linking gut microbiota to atherosclerotic risk. The rationale is well motivated by prior evidence that gut dysbiosis is associated with cardiovascular risk factors and disease. However, there are several issues needs to address. 1. Similar approaches have been applied to metabolic phenotypes (e.g. Li et al. 2024 found microbiome-based high/low risk clusters; 10.1016/j.lanepe.2024.101195). Discuss the major distinct findings in this study compared to prior studies 2. Figure 3 is of bad quality and the bacterial taxa name is incorrect. 'Firmicutes' is now 'Bacillota'. Please change all the bacterial taxa name with its correct name (https://lpsn.dsmz.de) 3. Microbiome data are only available upon request, which may hinder reproducibility. Public repository deposition (e.g., SRA) would improve transparency. 4. Participants were drawn from two different study settings (angiography patients and a dietary supplement trial). This introduces heterogeneity and potential selection bias. Pooling these groups without extensive stratification may confound results. 5. Gut microbiota were measured once at baseline. Since the microbiome is dynamic and influenced by diet, medications, and lifestyle changes, a single snapshot may not fully capture long term microbial patterns relevant to cardiovascular risk. 6. The Cox regression adjusted for some clinical risk factors, but sex, exercise, diet, and medication use also differed between clusters and were not fully accounted for. These could confound the observed associations. 7. Several drugs (beta-blockers, antidiabetic agents) were associated with cluster assignment. These may alter gut microbiota independently of cardiovascular risk and could drive clustering. 8. All subjects had at least one cardiovascular risk factor (CAD, hypertension, hyperlipidemia, or diabetes). While this focuses on a relevant patient population, it means there is no truly healthy control group. The authors should note that findings reflect variation within an at-risk population, which may limit generalizability. Also, the cohort is almost entirely White (∼98%); this should be stated as a limitation. 9. Hierarchical clustering (Ward’s method) using Bray–Curtis distances is reasonable. The manuscript states that the Silhouette method indicated two clusters; it would improve transparency to report the actual Silhouette score or show the clustering tree (dendrogram) in a supplement. Details on preprocessing should be explicit: for instance, how were OTU counts normalized or rarefied before clustering? Additionally, assessing cluster stability (e.g. by bootstrapping or using an alternative method like k-means) would strengthen confidence that the two-cluster solution is robust. 10. he predominant genera (e.g. higher Bacteroides/Alistipes in the lower-risk cluster, higher Blautia/Clostridium in the higher-risk cluster) are interesting. The discussion could be enriched by relating these to known physiology or prior studies (for example, some Bacteroides species are linked to leaner phenotypes). This would highlight the novelty of identifying these genera in a cardiovascular risk context. 11. The manuscript is generally well-organized, but some areas could be clearer. Define the cluster labels (‘Cluster H’ and ‘Cluster L’) at first mention to avoid confusion. Consider using descriptive terms (“high-risk” vs “low-risk”) alongside the letters. 12. Kindly Re-run the Cox models including sex and other differing baseline factors (exercise, diet category, medication use) to confirm the cluster effect is independent. Report the full multivariable results (in Supplement) to demonstrate which covariates were significant. 13. The finding that clusters predicted MACE mainly in patients without established CAD is interesting. It could be explored further or at least discussed (is it due to sample size or a real difference?). If feasible, test interaction between cluster and CAD status. 14. Please analyze taxa at the species/ASV level for the top genera. This might reveal which specific microbes drive the associations. 15. Clarify whether microbiome samples were taken once (at baseline) and how far in advance of events. If only a single timepoint is used, note this limitation as microbiome can change over time. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Gut microbiome compositional clusters in association with cardiovascular risk: An observational cohort study PONE-D-25-17306R1 Dear Dr. Lerman, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Prof. Satish G Patil, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The term “Bacteroid” is taxonomically imprecise and does not represent a valid bacterial genus or species. The correct and accepted term is Bacteroides, which is a recognized bacterial genus. Using “Bacteroid” may lead to scientific ambiguity and could be flagged by reviewers or editors. Reviewer #2: Thank you for your efforts in revising this manuscript. All comments have been carefully addressed, and the manuscript has been revised well. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Hajar Fauzan Ahmad Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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