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Original SubmissionJuly 11, 2025
Decision Letter - David Zhu, Editor

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The article by Mbavu et al. reports a study on the economic impact of loiasis in Gabon. This is likely the first study addressing this question, and although the approach is somewhat partial, it merits publication. There are no line numbers, which makes referencing specific comments difficult. Some references are unclear or not entirely appropriate—for example, references 12–15 for Gabon (Takougang and Pinder seem not well suited). This occurs in several parts of the manuscript. Similarly, the introduction lacks precision: it is unclear which references support the statement about USD 58. Shorter, clearer sentences and precise citations would help readers unfamiliar with loiasis to follow the logic and evidence. The manuscript also lacks the ethical approval number and any administrative authorization.

Regarding sampling, beyond the total target of 1,100 individuals, it is not clear if there was a minimum number of participants per village or a minimum proportion required. Concerning loiasis status, some results suggest different roles for microfilariae versus adult worms. Perhaps it would have been useful to include a sensitivity analysis using the same methodology applied to only mf+ vs mf- and RAPLOA+/mf- vs RAPLOA-/mf-. Adding this or discussing it in the discussion could provide additional insight.

From a methodological perspective, I am not an expert in health economics, but several points are worth noting. The study uses a solid approach with entropy balancing and generalized linear models (GLM), which is generally accepted in cost-of-illness studies. The distinction between direct medical, direct non-medical, and indirect costs is clear. Including both formal and informal healthcare expenditures, such as traditional healers, is particularly valuable given the local context. Using national health insurance data (CNAMGS) to validate self-reported expenditures and converting to USD adds transparency.

However, there are some limitations. The cross-sectional design only captures short-term costs and cannot assess causality. Chronic or secondary complications, such as renal problems, neurological effects, or other organ dysfunctions, are not included, which may underestimate the total societal burden. It would be helpful for the authors to clarify whether the goal was to measure short-term individual costs or broader societal costs, and especially to discuss how long-term complications might change the estimates.

The indirect cost estimates rely on self-reported data on days missed or reduced productivity, which may not be precise. It is also unclear how the authors assigned a monetary value to the work of participants without a fixed salary, such as subsistence farmers. Additionally, it would help to clarify whether these costs are calculated from the perspective of the individual, the household, or society as a whole.

Another concern is comorbidities. While malaria is included as a covariate, other common conditions like Mansonella perstans or chronic diseases may also affect both infection and healthcare costs. Clarifying whether these were considered would strengthen the analysis. Differences in cost distribution by gender or wealth could also be explored.

The authors tested the robustness of their GLM results by comparing different distributions (gamma vs. negative binomial) and alternative covariate specifications. This is reassuring, although it would be useful to briefly comment on whether these alternatives produced notably different results or just minor changes. Village fixed effects are included, but potential spatial correlation between villages is not discussed. How hospital and outpatient costs were constructed at the unit level could also be clarified: were expenditures broken down by consultations, diagnostics, medications, etc.?

Overall, the methodology is strong but could benefit from a clearer explanation of perspective, more details on productivity loss measurement, and discussion of cross-sectional limitations and excluded chronic complications.

Results and discussion are generally clear. The presentation of both aggregate and stratified analyses is helpful. However, the interpretation of USD 40 annual additional cost per person could be clarified: does it include only short-term costs, or could longer-term complications change the estimate? The higher costs observed among women and younger adults are interesting, but alternative explanations such as labor patterns or care-seeking behavior could also be discussed.

The discussion on including loiasis in insurance packages is relevant. Extrapolation to national costs is reasonable but should account for uncertainty; sensitivity ranges would help. Limitations are well acknowledged, but endogeneity between infection status and health costs could be discussed further.

In summary, this study provides valuable empirical evidence on the economic burden of loiasis using appropriate methods for a cost-of-illness study and deserves to be published. Its main limitations are the short-term focus, reliance on self-reported data, and exclusion of severe complications. Including discussion or estimates of these additional costs, and clarifying perspective and measurement details, would strengthen interpretation and policy relevance.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript is on an important topic for the disease of concern.

In general, the manuscript is well written and easy to follow.

However, I do have some minor comments:

1. The funding statement has to be consistent throughout the manuscript: Sometimes no funding, and sometimes there is funding. Please proceed to update the manuscript throughout.

2. In the introduction section, page #2, the following statement (According to the authors’ preferred specifications, loiasis resulted in treatment costs of 58 United States Dollar (USD) per person per year) needs a reference:

3. In the core manuscript, the ethical approval number is missing, while this is mentioned in the submission system.

4. Figure 1, Panel A The map can be included in the Country Gabon map, including the names of localities, if possible.

5: To better weigh the burden of the additional cost of Loaisis on health expenses, it will be interesting for the author to report on the average annual income of the population of interest, including any in-kind and cash income, if available.

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The economic burden of loiasis: a comprehensive cost-of-illness analysis of regionally representative, individual-level data from rural Gabon

Responses to the academic editor and reviewers

December 06, 2025

Dear academic editor Mr. David T. Zhu,

We thank you for the opportunity to revise and resubmit our manuscript to PLOS ONE. Moreover, we would like to express our gratitude to both reviewers and you for the time taken to review our manuscript and for the constructive comments everyone offered.

In our revised re-submission, we have sought to address each reviewer’s insightful comments. Ultimately, we believe that the revised version of the manuscript constitutes a stronger contribution to the field.

In what follows, we detail two main changes we implemented on the manuscript before providing a line-by-line response to each of the reviewers and you. Please note that we refer to reviewers in terms of the journal’s numbering: Reviewer #1 and Reviewer #2.

1. Additional analyses: both reviewers provided valuable input on how to further explore and underscore the robustness of our results. In response to these comments, we expanded our robustness checks in multiple ways. We briefly summarize these as follows:

a. Measurement of loiasis (I): RAPLOA positive vs. RAPLOA negative

b. Measurement of loiasis (II) Migratory vs. non-migratory loiasis

c. Alternative model specification: Controlling for respondents’ chronic diseases

d. Heterogeneous effects (I): Impact of loiasis on different socio-economic groups

e. Heterogenous effects (II) Impact of loiasis by work status

f. Sensitivity analysis around the uncertainty of parameter estimates used in the extrapolation of Gabon-wide costs

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We thank you for this valuable contribution. We reviewed the references list and ensured that it is complete and correct. We made one formal change to the sources by adding the names “Alleyne GA, Cohen D” in the publication on “Health, economic growth, and poverty reduction” by the WHO (line 704).

Two references have been deleted:

• The former reference [21]: WHO. ESPEN 2019 Annual Report. World Health Organization, 2019.

• The former reference [33]: Group WB. World Development Indicators 2023 [cited 2025 05 March]. Available from: https://databank.worldbank.org/source/world-development-indicators.

Two other references have been added:

• Reference [12]: Ramharter M, Schlabe S, Hubner MP, Michelitsch P, Kurth F, Belard S, et al. Diagnosis, management and prevention of loiasis: guideline of the German Society for Tropical Medicine, Travel Medicine, and Global Health (DTG). Infection. 2025;53(3):851-72. Epub 20250521. doi: 10.1007/s15010-024-02443-2. PubMed PMID: 40397272; PubMed Central PMCID: PMCPMC12137371.

• Reference [20]: Kelly-Hope LA, Hemingway J, Taylor MJ, Molyneux DH. Increasing evidence of low lymphatic filariasis prevalence in high risk Loa loa areas in Central and West Africa: a literature review. Parasit Vectors. 2018;11(1):349. Epub 20180615. doi: 10.1186/s13071-018-2900-y. PubMed PMID: 29907117; PubMed Central PMCID: PMCPMC6004093.

Lastly, we did not cite papers that have been retracted.

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Decision Letter - David Zhu, Editor

The economic burden of loiasis: a comprehensive cost-of-illness analysis of regionally representative, individual-level data from rural Gabon

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Dear Dr. Priebe,

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The authors did an excellent job responding to Reviewer 1 and Reviewer 2's comments, providing a detailed response letter, clarifications to the methodology and limitations, and additional analyses based on reviewers' comments (e.g., case definition based on RAPLOA and migratory status). After considering these revisions and the updated manuscript, I am pleased to accept it for publication.

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Formally Accepted
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