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| Original SubmissionMarch 27, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled “Evaluation of risk-promoting effects for age-related macular degeneration by estradiol” describes how biological or ovariectomy-induced estradiol deficiency promotes mechanisms that lead to age-related macular degeneration. Further, the authors documented, the estradiol-dependent promotion of cellular senescence is more pronounced than that of cellular inflammation. Importantly, the authors documented, the estradiol deficiency probably acts as a modulator that increases susceptibility to retinal degeneration rather than initiating a direct pathological cascade leading to age-related macular degeneration. Overall, the manuscript is well written with few errors. I have one major concern, although the authors have shown nice images of hematoxylin and eosin staining, exhibiting photoreceptor degeneration and a reduction in the ganglion cell nuclei count in ovariectomized rats. I suggest performing immunohistochemical analysis employing rod and cone photoreceptor antibodies to further confirm the photoreceptor degeneration. A few minor comments are below. 1. Introduction section, line 96. Incorporate a reference related to hormone therapy during menopause. 2. Materials and methods section, line 143. Write the confluency of the cell culture as a percentage. 3. Materials and methods section, line 148. It should be “The primer sequences are provided in Table 1.” 4. Materials and methods section, line 150. Italicize the gene name throughout the manuscript, including the table. 5. Figure legends 2, 3, and 5. Write the magnification of the images captured. Reviewer #2: This is a well-written and carefully executed study that investigates the contribution of estradiol deficiency to age-related macular degeneration (AMD) risk, with a focus on retinal degeneration, inflammation, and cellular senescence. The authors employed two rat models: naturally aged Lewis rats (22 months) to mimic biological estradiol decline and rats ovariectomized at 8 months, analyzed at 22 months, to model early menopause. Six-month-old rats served as controls. Methods included serum hormone analysis (ELISA, LC-MS/MS), qPCR for gene expression, immunohistochemistry for protein localization, AI-based image analysis for retinal cell density and inflammatory markers, and in vitro assays using ARPE-19 cells to assess ER function. The study provides compelling evidence that estradiol deficiency does not directly cause AMD but promotes retinal degeneration, inflammation, and senescence, thereby increasing AMD risk. Importantly, the data also point toward broader hormonal influences, with DHEA-S potentially contributing to photoreceptor degeneration in early menopause. While the manuscript is strong, several limitations should be addressed to strengthen its conclusions: Comment 1: The manuscript provides convincing structural evidence of retinal alterations; however, the absence of functional vision assessment (e.g., ERG) limits translational impact. Electrophysiological characterization would determine whether hormonal deficiencies result in measurable visual dysfunction, thereby enhancing clinical relevance to AMD progression. Comment 2: The link between estradiol deficiency and p16/p21-driven senescence in ERβ-expressing retinal populations is compelling but requires deeper mechanistic insight. Single-cell RNA sequencing of retinal cell types (RGCs, INL cells, and RPE) from estradiol-deficient models could delineate cell type–specific senescence programs. Comment 3: The study associates global hormone status (progesterone, corticosterone, DHEA-S, alongside estradiol) with retinal degeneration, inflammation, and senescence. However, the individual contributions of progesterone or corticosterone to the observed phenotype remain undefined. Clarifying their specific roles in retinal degeneration, inflammation, or senescence markers would strengthen the conclusions. Comment 4: The use of 6-month-old rats as controls for both 22-month-old (aged) and ovariectomized 22-month-old rats may not adequately account for age-related changes independent of estradiol deficiency. An age-matched control group would better isolate the effects of estradiol loss from normal aging. Comment 5: The authors propose that photoreceptor degeneration and cellular senescence in ovariectomized rats may occur through ERβ-independent mechanisms, potentially mediated by DHEA-S reduction. However, this interpretation lacks direct experimental support. Additional validation—such as DHEA-S supplementation studies or downstream pathway analyses—would provide mechanistic clarity and strengthen claims about non-estradiol hormonal influences on AMD risk. Reviewer #3: In this manuscript, authors have utilized two different rat models to study estradiol deficiency-related changes that could potentially be associated with AMD. Some of the information provided in the abstract (line 47-48) was not seen in the manuscript, please remove that or else add the data in the manuscript or supplemental. Authors are requested to address the following issues: 1. Methods section is poorly written: improper structure and missing information. It should be structurally written method-wise along with #catalogue, brand information (wherever necessary). Line 189-191: Briefly mention RNA isolation from RPE/choroid eye cups with suitable reference. State clearly if retina was removed or included in lysate preparation for RNA isolation/qPCR. Line 218-219: RPE flat mount preparation is not similar to that of sample preparation for RNA isolation, as written by authors. State the flat mount procedure briefly and provide suitable reference for the method used. Not sure which method they have referred to, but I do not think 12-hour long permeabilization is recommended. 2. Statistical analysis: Why the authors did not use two-way ANOVA, since age is another parameter that needs to be addressed while comparing 6mo control vs 22mo naïve, Sham and OVX groups. 3. Use rat gene nomenclature throughout the manuscript. 4. Results section: Needs structure. Fig. 2A: The ONL nuclei reduction seen in 22mo old rats vs 6mo control is probably due to aging (as reported earlier: INL, ONL thinning happens normally with aging), but what is surprising is the reduced thickness of the whole retina (especially INL) in 6mo old rats as compared to 22mo-old Sham rats. Explain. Additionally, considering the significant expression of estrogen receptors in INL, I am not sure why INL quantification was not performed in these groups? Fig2A (6mo, RPE): shows a huge white gap between IS/OS. Is this gap normal? Replace with a representative image. Mention scale bar in legends. 5. Fig 2B: Since serum estradiol levels did not show significant change (in fact an increased pattern was seen in Fig 1C), what is the reason for the striking change in GCL and ONL nuclei? Explain in text. 6. Results: Fig 3, Does extreme left panel show merged image, please mention. Low quality images, replace with better resolution and higher magnification images. In the abstract authors have mentioned more p16-positive photoreceptors were seen in 22mo OVX rats compared with Sham (line 46-48). Did the authors perform p16/p21-staining on 22mo OVX rats to see if estradiol deficiency induces more cellular senescence? If not, remove this section from abstract/discussion. 7. Line 294: ‘…RPE cell density in retinal flat mounts.’ Were these (Fig 4A) retinal or RPE flat mounts? State clearly. 8. Fig 4A: Add original phalloidin staining of these respective RPE regions above the segmentation panel. The RPE flat mounts analyzed here (Fig 4A-B) represent which region: central, equatorial or peripheral? This is important since the RPE size/shape varies with different region. So, all three images compared here should be from same region. Add this important information in figure and legends. 9. Fig 4B: Increase text size of X-/Y-axes legends, too small to comment anything on this panel. Apart from mean area, authors should add shape parameters like solidity, extent/eccentricity etc. Fig 4 legends: correct ‘PRE’ typo. 10. Line 332-334: Add graphical analysis of fluorescence intensity for Fig 5D (with sufficient N number). Replace with higher resolution (Fig 5B-D) and higher magnification images (for inner retina panel). Scale bar info in legends seems incorrect for RPE panel. 11. Line 353: mention dose/duration for TNF-alpha treatment. 12. Fig 5B and 6A: Why the N number for Arpe19+estradiol were so low (almost half) as compared to control group? Estradiol group has a huge variation that questions the findings. Where is the vehicle group for the in-vitro assay? Did the authors carry out validation of estradiol treatment in Arpe19 cells? 13. Add the transcriptional marker changes (RPE lysate) in different rat groups. 14. Line 356-357: It’s hard to say this. Not sure the increase/decrease seen in C5 and PGF are due to huge variation. Authors could resolve this by increasing the N number (for Estradiol group) and keeping N number same in both groups. 15. Same thing goes with IBA-1+ cell analysis (Fig 6D,E: in figures panel); huge variation. 16. Fig 6C: Macrophages are usually absent in the subretinal space unless in pathogenic state. Considering Fig 6C: IBA-1+ cell IHC on RPE flat mounts, it is concerning that the 6mo old control rat showed large number of macrophages. This questions the health state of the 6mo control rat, which further questions the rest of the analysis. 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