Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 9, 2025 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Your study is a clinically relevant, retrospective study evaluating the prognostic utility of the thromboelastography (TEG) MA/R ratio in patients with acute respiratory failure (ARF) admitted to the ICU. The manuscript has clinical significance that addresses a crucial clinical question with high applicability in intensive care and emergency settings. It is clearly written, generally acceptable. However, abstract section and particularly tables/figures require clarification/revision. The corrections I suggested are attached as a Word file. Reviewer #2: This retrospective study aims to evaluate the prognostic value of the Thromboelastography (TEG) MA/R ratio in predicting mortality among patients with acute respiratory failure (ARF). The study concludes that the MA/R ratio can rapidly identify coagulation dysfunction in ARF patients and offers greater clinical relevance in predicting prognosis compared to traditional markers. A low MA/R ratio is identified as an independent risk factor for mortality in ARF. Overall, the manuscript is well-written and presents valuable findings. However, several critical issues need to be addressed to enhance the quality and clarity of the manuscript. 1. Please provide a detailed statistical analysis of the MA/R ratio under the TEG parameters entry in Table 1, specifically for the non-survival and survival groups. Please clarify and analyze the findings and highlight the differences between these two groups. 2. The rationale for classifying the MA/R ratio into four categories needs to be clearly explained in both the Methods and Results sections. Please elaborate on why a four-category classification was chosen over a three-category or two-category classification. 3. There appears to be a discrepancy between the number of patients mentioned in Line 125 (445 patients) and Figure 1 (476 patients). Please verify these numbers to ensure data accuracy and consistency throughout the manuscript. 4. The Results section would benefit from a more structured presentation. You should break down the results into bullet points or subheadings to improve readability and make it easier for readers to follow the study’s findings. 5. The manuscript would be significantly strengthened by including Receiver Operating Characteristic (ROC) curves comparing the MA/R ratio with other conventional biomarkers (such as PCT, L-lactate, etc.). This analysis may provide a clearer picture of the diagnostic and predictive efficacy of the MA/R ratio in ARF patients in the ICU setting. Reviewer #3: General comment� This manuscript retrospectively analyzed 371 patients with acute respiratory failure to determine the prognostic value of the Thromboelastography (TEG) MA/R ratio in this population. It suggests that the MA/R ratio can identify coagulation dysfunction in patients with acute respiratory failure, thereby informing clinical treatment decisions. However, based on the study methodology and results, the use of the TEG MA/R ratio as a predictor of 28-day mortality in these patients has certain limitations. Consequently, the manuscript requires major revisions before it can be considered for acceptance. My review comments are as follows: 1�The grouping criteria for the MA/R ratio in Table 3 are not clearly defined. 2�Given the high emphasis on research reproducibility in the medical field, the unavailability of data significantly diminishes the potential impact and societal value of this study. Even if data cannot be shared due to compliance reasons, contact information (e.g., the corresponding author's email) should be provided for future researchers to request access under the same terms. This is now a fundamental standard in academic publishing. 3�In the multivariate regression model predicting outcomes, both the "APACHE II score" and "creatinine" were included as variables. However, the APACHE II score is a composite score that already incorporates "creatinine" in its calculation. Including both a variable (creatinine) and the composite score (APACHE II) that contains it in the same model introduces serious statistical multicollinearity. This means the effect of creatinine is effectively counted twice: once directly as the "creatinine" variable and once as a component of the APACHE II score. This will lead to biased model estimates, making the Hazard Ratios (HRs) and confidence intervals for both creatinine and the APACHE II score unreliable and difficult to interpret. 4�Acute respiratory failure is a clinical syndrome that can result from various etiologies. These underlying causes can have profoundly different effects on the coagulation system. The same MA/R ratio value may stem from entirely different pathophysiological states, making it unable to accurately distinguish the underlying cause. This lack of specificity weakens its predictive value for mortality. It is recommended to increase the sample size and perform analyses stratified by the different etiologies of acute respiratory failure. 5�The MA/R ratio is susceptible to influence by the patient's inherent condition and therapeutic interventions. Its value may be more associated with the severity of the underlying primary disease rather than the coagulation state itself. 6�The conclusions of the study require further validation through prospective research. 7�Coagulation is an extremely complex and dynamic process. The MA/R ratio only extracts two parameters from specific time points, potentially overlooking other crucial information. For instance, hyperfibrinolysis is associated with bleeding risk, while hypofibrinolysis is linked to hypercoagulability. Relying solely on the MA/R ratio loses these critical distinctions, which could lead to clinical misinterpretation. A comprehensive interpretation of the entire TEG tracing is far more valuable than using a single ratio. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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<p>The Prognostic Value of Thromboelastography MA/R Ratio in Predicting Mortality in Acute Respiratory Failure Patients PONE-D-25-29080R1 Dear Dr. Zhang-Sheng Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rehab Al-Ansari Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed most of the concerns raised in the previous rounds of review. I have carefully examined the revisions made to the manuscript and would like to acknowledge that the quality has significantly improved. Overall, my attitude is positive ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Yiheng Wang ********** |
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