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Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2025
Decision Letter - Sreeram V. Ramagopalan, Editor

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Reviewers' comments:

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

Reviewer #1: No

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?>

Reviewer #1: I Don't Know

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Reviewer #1: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1:  Liu and colleagues report their analysis of the integrity of real-time electronic health records (EHR) data for use in clinical research, in which they assess the stability and completeness of the recorded information in the Yale New Haven Health (YNHH) clinical data warehouse and conclude that a time lag of 4-7 days are required for records to stabilise to ensure validity for research. The work is interesting and has merit to other researchers who can utilise the framework in assessing the integrity of other local EHR systems, however I do feel the findings presented are likely to be very specific to the YNHH context, and thus the external validity of the results is uncertain.

Major comments

1. The methods section would benefit from further description of the YNHH dataset, e.g. patients that are included, sector of healthcare etc. How records enter the YNHH dataset, does each clinical encounter generate a new record, who inputs the data, etc?

2. The methods section would benefit from revision to make it clearer which samples of data used are in the analysis, currently the methods refers only to data between April/May 2025, however the axes of figures 3-5 shows data spanning July/Nov 2024, and results section also describes additional methods relating to data in November 2024. It’s not fully clear to me why the dates would change for these different assessments so this should be spelled out. It would also be helpful to know if there was any rationale for the choice of baseline dates selected and why 26 snapshots were used?

3. The results section is very descriptive and contains few statistical results, which are instead included in an appendix. I would strongly suggest adding more summary statistics to support assertions being made.

4. Conclusions “Our findings indicate that real-time EHR data require 4–7 days for discharge information stabilization and systematic monitoring of demographic field consistency to ensure research validity.” I would probably suggest revising this statement slightly to acknowledge that this is a finding within the YNHH dataset, as external validity is not proven.

Minor

5. The first benchmark assessment relates to ‘clinical actions such as additions, deletions, and merges’ – I would suggest defining exactly what ‘clinical actions’ means as it is not entirely clear to me and I’m assuming it refers to specific clinical events or healthcare encounters than have happened, and the additions, deletions or merges occur if an update has been made to either add a new event or more accurately reflect one which has taken place?

6. Race and ethnicity data were shown to be frequently updated, do you have any further insight into how race/ethnicity data are collected? Are they self-assigned or healthcare provider assigned categories? The latter tends be more prone to data quality issues therefore specifying this would be informative.

7. Careful review needed to check all acronyms spelled out at first use eg. BM-1 /consider if even needs to be abbreviated

8. Figures 3 and 4 – I am curious to understand if there is any explanations for the apparent spike in patient numbers on 09/27/24 ?

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Revision 1

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Decision Letter - Sreeram V. Ramagopalan, Editor

Dear Dr. Gong,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??>

Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?>

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??>

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Liu and colleagues have responded positively to all prior comments and the manuscript and its reporting is far strengthened by the revisions. One minor remaining comment I have relates to description of methods lingering the results section. For BM-2, it is suggested that this deeper analysis was conducted due the findings of BM-1. It would be helpful to state this earlier in the methods section, and ideally differentiate what analyses were pre-specified and which were post-hoc, which it sounds like BM-2 may have been.

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Revision 2

Per last comment, We thank the reviewer for their continued feedback and support. We have updated the Methods section to explicitly categorize BM-1 and BM-3 as pre-specified analyses, while identifying BM-2 as a post-hoc investigation sparked by the demographic instability observed in BM-1. We also relocated the methodological rationale for BM-2 from the Results to the Methods to ensure a clear separation of study design and findings. The Results section now opens directly with the quantitative findings regarding demographic updates in 2024. These revisions enhance the manuscript's clarity and adhere to the distinction between planned and exploratory analyses.

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Assessment of the Integrity of Real-Time Electronic Health Record Data used in Clinical Research

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