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| Original SubmissionJuly 27, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Reviewer report for PONE-D-25-40393-1 (Predicting Severe Stunting and its Determinants among Under-five Children in Eastern African Countries using the Demographic and Health Survey: A Machine Learning Algorithm) Summary recommendation •Recommend: Major Revision •Rationale: The study addresses an important RMNCH topic using a large, multinational DHS dataset and applies multiple machine learning models with SHAP interpretability. However, critical issues remain regarding methodological choices (data balancing with SMOTE, incorporation of DHS complex survey design, and external validity across 12 countries), reproducibility, and interpretation of results. These issues must be resolved with robust sensitivity analyses, transparent reporting, and careful framing of conclusions as associations rather than causal inferences. A. Major issues 1.Data provenance, harmonization, and study design •Comment: The manuscript uses DHS data from 12 Eastern African countries (2012–2022). While leveraging large, comparable datasets is valuable, cross-country DHS data vary in survey year windows, sampling frames, and measurement harmonization. The manuscript should clearly document how each variable was harmonized across countries, and provide a country-by-country appendix or table that shows the exact survey year, sample size, and variable coding for key predictors. •Recommendation: Include a comprehensive data dictionary mapping each predictor to its DHS source, harmonization decisions, and rationale. Add a flow diagram showing inclusion/exclusion criteria and the final analytical sample by country and year. 2.Handling of complex survey design and weights •Comment: DHS data are collected with complex survey designs (weights, primary sampling units, strata). The modeling workflow should account for these design features to obtain unbiased estimates and valid generalizability. Whether survey weights and clustering were incorporated into model training, evaluation, and calibration, or whether a design-based sensitivity analysis was performed, is unclear. •Recommendation: Provide a detailed description of how weights, clustering, and stratification were integrated into the machine learning pipeline. If weights were not used, justify why and discuss potential biases. Consider presenting results with and without weights, performing a design-aware modeling approach, and reporting any differences. 3.Data balancing with SMOTE and model validity •Comment: The study balances the data with SMOTE to address class imbalance before model training. While SMOTE can improve predictive performance on imbalanced data, it may introduce artifacts that affect external validity and lead to optimistic performance estimates if not carefully validated. •Recommendation: Present sensitivity analyses comparing SMOTE-balanced models to alternative approaches (e.g., class weighting, threshold tuning, stratified sampling) and to models trained on the original imbalanced data. Report performance metrics (AUC, sensitivity, specificity, accuracy) on held-out data without synthetic samples to gauge generalizability. 4.Model evaluation and overfitting •Comment: Eight models were trained with 10-fold cross-validation, but it is unclear whether a separate hold-out test set was used beyond cross-validation. Without an independent test set, there is a risk of optimistic bias in reported performance. •Recommendation: If feasible, include a truly independent test set (e.g., hold-out countries or years not used in training) to provide an unbiased assessment of predictive performance. If not possible, provide rigorous cross-validation design details (fold stratification by country/year, nesting of hyperparameter tuning within folds) and discuss potential overfitting. 5.Interpretability and SHAP results •Comment: SHAP explains model predictions and is a strength of the study. However, interpretation should be cautious about across-country heterogeneity and potential confounding factors not captured by the predictors. •Recommendation: Present SHAP results separately by country where feasible or report whether global SHAP patterns are consistent across countries. Include a supplementary table/figure showing country-specific top predictors. Discuss limitations in attributing causal interpretation to SHAP-derived associations. 6.Causal language and policy implications •Comment: The manuscript occasionally implies determinants cause severe stunting. Given the cross-sectional design, causal claims should be avoided. •Recommendation: Reframe conclusions to emphasize associations and potential mechanisms, with explicit caveats about temporality and confounding. When discussing policy implications, frame them as hypotheses for targeted interventions that require experimental or longitudinal validation. 7.Reproducibility and code availability •Comment: Reproducibility is essential, particularly for ML workflows on DHS data. The manuscript should provide access to code and a detailed computational appendix. •Recommendation: Include a dedicated reproducibility section with links to a code repository (DOI or URL), a README describing dependencies, data processing steps, model training, and SHAP analysis, and instructions to reproduce the results. Clearly state any data restrictions and how to access the DHS data used (with proper permissions). 8.Reporting clarity and structure •Comment: The abstract and some sections should more precisely reflect the study design and key results. The abstract currently reports multiple numerical performance metrics without context for generalizability. •Recommendation: Update the abstract to include study design (cross-sectional DHS data across 12 countries, 2012–2022), primary outcome (severe stunting), main modeling approach (eight ML models with SHAP), and the most robust finding(s). Ensure tables and figures have self-contained captions and align with the text. B. Minor issues 1.Terminology and variable definitions •Comment: Ensure consistent terminology for predictors (e.g., “birth size,” “birth weight,” “birth order”) and provide explicit category definitions. 2.Figures and tables •Comment: Some figures (e.g., SHAP plots, ROC curves, feature importance) should have high-resolution formats and clear axis labels. •Recommendation: Ensure figure captions describe what is being shown, axis scales, and units. Consider including a supplementary figure that summarizes country-level results. 3.Data availability statement •Comment: Data from DHS is controlled; provide a data availability statement that describes access permissions and any restrictions, plus details on code availability. 4.Ethical considerations •Comment: The manuscript uses publicly available, de-identified DHS data. Include a brief ethics statement confirming that the study used secondary data and did not involve direct human subject contact, with reference to DHS approvals. Reviewer #2: I have gone the manuscript thoroughly, and my review feedback as followed. 1.The Title of the manuscript could be more innovative and more concise. 2.The best model Randomforest estimated an accuracy was 92%, which is very high accuracy and sensitivity as on a few features or variables. Author should recheck this model performance. You should use only test dataset to test the model performance instead of all datasets (training and test). Accuracy estimate with both data will be more informative and reliable. 3.Burundi analysis is good for cumulative features scores. I recommend authors to analyze feature important score and present a bar graph with scores for each feature. 4.Machine learning models predict a score for positive and negative classes and then author classify the scores based on a cutoff value (like 0.5) which is depend on the best combination of a set of factors. However, the best set of factors not ensure causal factors. Authors may find out more vulnerable children by using independence conditional estimator (ICE) analysis. 5.In SHAP analysis, I used country as a predictor and it highlights most important factors. It may a cluster factor but considered as a key important factor is not possible. Authors have used some categorical variable as a continuous variable and figure out the most important factors. It difficult to interpret. Authors should use as categorical variables in the models like Wealth index, mother education, toilet types etc. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Predicting Severe Stunting and its Determinants among Under-five in Eastern African Countries: A Machine Learning Algorithm. PONE-D-25-40393R1 Dear Dr. Jemil, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Olutosin Ademola Otekunrin Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thanks you, for addressing all comments correctly. I recommend you that you should study on causal analysis in the stunting because machine learning predictors do not ensure causal relationship between factors and outcome. Thanks, Probir ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Probir Kumar Ghosh ********** |
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