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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: POND-D-25- 20352 "Exploring the dimensionality of the Positive Youth Development 5C Very Short Form using Rasch Measurement Theory in Swedish Upper Secondary School Contexts.". General Introduction The manuscript explores the background to Positive Youth Development (PYD) where the most commonly used model was that with the five dimensions of Competence, Confidence, Character, Caring and Connection. To this end a PYD 5C questionnaire was developed that has been used internationally to measure youth development. The original PYD 5C instrument consisted of 78 items (13), with a 38-item short form (PYD-SF) and a 17-item very short form (PYD-VSF) created to enhance practical usability. It is this latter version which is the subject of the reported study. Each dimension is a subscale consisting of three or four items that are argued to function on their own using an average of included items or adding up all 17 items and calculating a mean to represent the overall total. Each item is scored on a 5-point Likert scale. Methods The study comprised two elements; a) an adaptation of the questionnaire into Swedish using a dual panel approach with cognitive debriefing and b) a psychometric analysis based upon Rasch Measurement Theory. 148-149. Note that these statements are targeted at the fit statistics in the RUMM2030 programme, and is not the case if, for example, conditional chi-square fit is used. 162 It might be helpful to the readership if a more structured description of methodology is provided. Given the way in which the scale is used, one would initially expect results from the summation of the 17 items, and then for each separate dimension, or vice-versa. Consequently, some statement along the lines of “For the 17 item scale and each subscale the following aspects of Rasch model compliance were examined”. Item Monotonicity Initially ( but not subsequently when testlets are used) what were the threshold patterns of the items. Local Item dependency (LID) Definition. What was the extent and pattern of LID if present. If so, how did this relate to the five dimensions Item & Person Fit Definition. The Chi-square fit and item residuals, reported at the item level. Person fit reported at a group level if misfit present. Summary item-trait Chi-Square. 164. Why if the Chi-Square fit not considered here? This is the fit most often reported, and the comment about sample size is based upon the Type 1 error rate of the Chi-Square fit. Differential Item Functioning (DIF) Definition. What contextual factors are chosen to examine DIF Unidimensionality Definition. Method and parameters to identify multi-dimensionality Approaches to resolve problems when apparent (or alternatively the options could be specified within each of the sections above. What options are available to resolve any problems found. For example, rescoring, testlet construction. The method for each option should be described. It should also be noted that in the context of any two-testlet result, a conditional chi-square test of fit is provided. 190. It is not clear as to whether or not this strategy was a result of the findings of the analysis to-date, i.e. item-level, or determined a-priori. If the former, then it is a result, not method, implying that multidimensionality had been found. If the latter, then should be clearly explained in the options section, but without necessarily pre-judging which item sets will be grouped. 195. The authors may like to review their interpretation of C in the context of Andrich’s example in the paper: “Table 2 also shows that because of a relatively large value for c (0.722), the summary latent correlation between different subscales is a relatively low 0.658. Nevertheless, A α (the proportion of the scale common variance relative to the common and unique variance, that is, the proportion of the non-error variance), is a relatively high 0.9 (0.886). This indicates that the subscales were, in general, correlated sufficiently highly that, together with the four subscales, the greatest component of variance is the true, common variance. …….. This high proportion of true common variance of the scale suggests that for the purposes to which ASAT was put, using a single score was generally justifiable. Thus they need to review their findings and the implications for the analysis that follows. 200. There is some risk here that any observed multidimensionality is simply the result of local dependency. Indeed, at this stage it is becoming unclear as to which item sets are grouped. Does this analysis follow from the 17 item set, or dimension-based testlets. Results 210. As the items have not yet been introduced they need explicit identification. 222. It would be helpful if it was made clear that the analysis following related to the item level analysis of the 17 item scale 225. A Table reporting chi-square and residual fit statistics for the 17 items should be provided to give the reader the staring point for the analysis. Also the summary item-trait interaction Chi-Square and reliability should be reported here, and also for each subsequent analysis revision. 231. These three items belong to the same subscale, indicating potential LD 234. Removal of items should normally be a last resort but in light of the explanation given, this may be correct in this instance. As they belong to different subscales their removal should not compromise individual subscale analysis. However, it would have been informative if they also showed serious misfit within each subscale, which would have added to the veracity of the decision to remove them. Furthermore, individual item fit may be confounded by the presence of LD and the subscale level analysis may help inform on this. 237. The problem with item 5 should be picked up in the discussion as it reflects on the adaptation process, i.e. double negatives should not have arisen. 244. Is this related to subtest analysis within each subscale, or at the subscale level for the whole scale? For the interpretation of the result, see the comment at 195 above. 254. Give the above (195) the multidimensionality conclusion is not correct, but the residual correlations of the subtest is informative, and the subsequent two domain result 262-263. The two domains, taken, together, have been shown to fit the Rasch model. Essentially the testlets have absorbed the LD and its influence upon individual domain fit. Using the test-equating procedure on RUMM2030 the authors could now produce a transformation table for the total score, and each domain, all on the same metric (reminding readers that two items from the 17 were removed). The issue then arises, why try and analyze the item set of each domain without resolving any of the problems that arise? This leaves the readers with the conundrum of having seen the two domains emerge in the testlet analysis with apparently good fit etc., but now showing poor fit at the item level! For purposes of revealing the reliability of the new domain, this may be best resolved in future analysis involving a test-retest situation Discussion 343. Where is the results for item fit of each subscale which supports this conclusion? 378. This implies satisfactory fit of each domain, yet the analytical conclusion is one of misfit . Reviewer #2: The authors translated and cross-culturally adapted the 5C Positive Youth Development Very Short Form (PYD-VSF) in 430 upper secondary school pupils. Their results showed that the data did not fit the Rasch model. Below my comments More information should be provided about the translation process. What were the competences of these 6 lay people? How was the translation process carried out? How many reviewers translated the version from English to Swedish and how many people from Swedish to English? What was the composition of the expert panel that evaluated the translations? How was the final Swedish version developed? Report the demographic characteristics of the 15 pupils involved in this process. The authors decided to delete items 3 and 5 due to poor fit to the Rasch model. Why did the authors make this drastic choice? I do not agree with their choice. First of all, considering that the scale is already published and is used with this structure, I would try to modify the scale without deleting themt, but with the creation of subtests of items that show local dependence to try to avoid eliminating items 3 and 5. If this attempt fails, then I would eliminate the items that misfit the model. The authors found disordered thresholds in six out of nine items in the Self-worth subscale and no items in the pro-social subscale. How did they solve this problem? The authors found a uniform DIF by gender for 3 items in the Self-worth subscale. How did they solve this problem? Overall, it seems that the authors did not adequately address the problems of the scale (disordered thresholds, local dependence, presence of DIF); probably the lack of fit to the model that the authors report is due to these unresolved problems of the scale. I recommend resolving the local dependency (trying not to remove any items), resolving the messy thresholds, and re-evaluating the model fit. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Leonardo Pellicciari ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Exploring the dimensionality of the 5C Positive Youth Development very short form using Rasch Measurement theory in Swedish upper secondary school contexts. PONE-D-25-20352R1 Dear Dr. Bergman, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Karl Bang Christensen, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 464 Table 9 is, in effect, the key findings of the study. A testlet based analysis of the two conceptual groupings. Their justification for retaining the two-dimensional solution, albeit when the reported result is essentially a unidimensional solution retaining 80% of the variance, is nevertheless valid, as it will clearly inform further exploration of the relationship between the two domains and potentially inform interventions to improve PYD. 613 Conclusion – very well written and informative. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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