Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 11, 2024 |
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Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please check the reviewers' comments and modify the manuscript accordingly. I particularly support suggestions regarding the contextualization of this issue. You should compile data about previous efforts to standardize Clinical Practice Guidelines (CPGs) in Peru and other South American countries. Regarding discussion and conclusions, what actions should be expected in the following years? How could this study contribute to improving CPG management in Peru? Please add these topics in the discussion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: good work done by you and your team member and also congratulation to you. ............................................................................................................................. Reviewer #2: Overall this is a good one and address some of questions I interested in. The following is my opinion that I think can make it better: 1. Please onvert all dataset variable names from Spanish to English, as shown in the provided Excel file, to improve accessibility for international researchers. This translation will help external reviewers and collaborators better understand the variables and verify the data. 2. The introduction mentions deficiencies in methodology found in previous studies. To provide context, consider creating a table or a brief review summarizing these past methodological shortcomings. Then, compare these with the findings from your current study. This addition would be beneficial for future researchers by highlighting patterns and supporting efforts to standardize Clinical Practice Guidelines (CPGs) in South America. 3. What are the standards for CPGs in Peru versus other countries? Provide an overview of international standards for CPGs, if available, and discuss the differences with Peruvian standards. Consider sharing your perspective on what constitutes an ideal standard for CPGs, with a critical analysis. For instance, how might the CPGs from countries like Japan or the U.S. be considered superior, and what aspects could be improved? 4. Expand on the data collection process, specifically the consensus method. Include details on how consensus was reached, the criteria used, and the process undertaken to ensure quality in data collection. This additional information would help demonstrate the rigor applied to maintain data reliability. 5. In Table 3, in addition to the p-values and percentages, please include the standard deviation and 95% confidence intervals for each result. This added statistical detail will provide a clearer picture of the variability and confidence in the results. Reviewer #3: This is an interesting scoping review that describes the methodological characteristics of Peruvian clinical practice guidelines. To further strengthen the manuscript, please see the comments and suggestions below. Introduction • The Introduction lacks literature on previous studies. • Additional background and explanation on what is considered as an ideal/standard CPG and what is the standard content of CPGs would be helpful to provide additional context. Also, it would be helpful if the authors specify what methodological deficiencies are usually observed in local CPGs. Methods • Page 6, Line 80: Any rationale for considering 2018 as the start year for assessing the CPGs when the standardized methodology document from Ministry of Health was established in 2015? • Was the literature search not conducted in other search engines including PubMed, SCOPUS etc.? • Why were CPGs with partial updates not included? Wouldn’t the partial updates also indicate changes based on the 2015 standardized methodology from Ministry of Health? Results • Any reason the sample size (n) was equal to 85 and not 88 for Tables 2 and 3? Discussion • The Discussion should highlight the implications of this study and how the results would help in bringing positive changes related to CPGs. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the reviewer response already provided, please state in the limitations of this study your rationale for considering 2018 as the start year for assessing the CPGs and for not including Pubmed, Scopus, or other search engines. Please discuss more on suggestions to adress methodological issues in Peru, especially on how ESSALUD or Peruvian Health Minister could contribute to improve the elaboration of CPGs. Provide examples illustrating how the Peruvian first technical document lacked robust processes for formulating clinical questions or adapting guidelines. Please review the entire document ensuring all authors' comments are objective and highlight the methods used to identify shortcomings, specifying particular flaws where applicable. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Alexis G. Murillo Carrasco Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: This resubmission effectively addresses all of my and the other reviewers' previous concerns. The authors have demonstrated a thorough and systematic effort to resolve the issues raised, and the revised manuscript now provides a comprehensive overview of Peruvian CPG development and related methodological characteristics. I appreciate the detailed responses and thoughtful additions to the manuscript. However, upon further review, I believe the manuscript could be strengthened by explicitly acknowledging a potential bias in the search strategy. Specifically, as stated in the response: "In Peru, clinical practice guidelines are not required to be published as journal articles. When they are published in this format, they often present only a summary (a brief justification for each recommendation) of the guideline content rather than the complete document." This raises the concern that some relevant documents may not have been retrieved using Google as the primary search platform. There is a risk of missing guidelines that are either not indexed by Google or require access through less visible platforms or institutional repositories. I recommend adding a discussion point in the limitations section to explicitly address this potential bias and the limitations of the current search methodology. Furthermore, considering more comprehensive and systematic search techniques—such as web scraping or leveraging specialized databases—could be a valuable direction for future research. This approach would enhance the robustness of guideline retrieval and ensure better coverage. Overall, the authors have done an excellent job with this scoping review, and the manuscript offers valuable insights into Peruvian CPG development. I am confident in recommending it for acceptance with the above minor addition. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Kind regards, César Félix Cayo-Rojas, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The manuscript is solid and good. I recommend this to the journal. I believed this topic will give some new perspective to the field. Reviewer #4: 1. Potential selection bias toward tertiary-level guidelines The study appears to be skewed toward clinical practice guidelines (CPGs) developed for tertiary-level care. It is unclear whether this is a reflection of availability or if there was an intentional search strategy targeting this level. The authors should clarify whether their inclusion criteria or sources were likely to miss guidelines developed for primary or secondary care. 2. Institution-based classification vs. Health sector grouping The decision to classify guidelines by specific institutions (e.g., IETSI, AUNA) may fragment the analysis and limit broader policy implications. Grouping by major health system sectors—such as social security, Ministry of Health, or private sector—could provide a more comprehensive and policy-relevant perspective. 3. Absence of a critical appraisal of methodological quality beyond grade While the focus is on GRADE components, the lack of a broader critical appraisal (e.g., AGREE II domains) limits the understanding of the overall methodological rigor of the guidelines. Including or at least discussing this could offer a more balanced assessment. 4. Lack of contextual data on developers' capacities The authors attribute deficiencies to limited methodological capacity but do not provide data to support this claim. Information on the availability of trained personnel, institutional mandates, or access to GRADE training would strengthen the interpretation. 5. Need for exploration of policy or regulatory drivers The manuscript could benefit from examining whether national regulations or incentive structures influence the adoption of GRADE components. This might help explain heterogeneity between institutions or sectors. 6. Unclear justification for excluding non-grade guidelines Excluding guidelines that did not claim to use GRADE may overlook potentially methodologically sound documents. The authors should clarify the rationale and implications of this exclusion on the comprehensiveness of the review. 7. Limited Exploration of Guideline Topics and Their Alignment with National burden of disease The paper does not analyze whether the guidelines reviewed align with national health priorities or the burden of disease in Peru. This would help assess their relevance and strategic focus. 8. Narrative synthesis could be strengthened with quantitative visualization A table or heatmap comparing GRADE components across institutions would enhance the clarity and accessibility of the findings, particularly for policymakers and non-specialist readers. 9. Insufficient discussion of implications for end-user utility While the absence of Summary of Findings (SoF) tables and EtD frameworks is highlighted, the practical implications for clinicians or decision-makers are not fully elaborated. This connection should be strengthened. 10. Need for a forward-looking roadmap or recommendations The discussion section would benefit from a more detailed set of recommendations or a roadmap for improving CPG development capacity in Peru, including possible institutional partnerships, technical training, or policy reforms. Reviewer #5: Results The table format should follow the journal's guidelines. It is recommended to adhere to the journal’s specific instructions or protocols for creating descriptive tables. In row 142, it is not necessary to explain what CPG stands for, as it has already been defined in the introduction and abstract. Please verify that all percentages add up to 100%. For example, in Table 1 (“Local organizations…”, “Area addressed”), the total is 100.1%. In Table 3, for the first variable (“Search engines used”), data from 76 CPGs is used, and 13 are marked as excluded. This presents an inconsistency with the stated total number of included CPGs (n = 88). Discussion Why are the results related to methodological differences in the “Identification of SoF tables” and “EtD and criteria for resource use and cost-effectiveness” not presented or discussed? (This also applies to the results section.) Although the focus is on CPGs from Peru, it is recommended to broaden the scope or highlight the relevance of the findings so that they may serve as a reference for other countries. Additionally, consider including as a limitation the fact that only CPGs with publicly available full-text versions were included. In Figure 1, please indicate the main reasons why the 206 documents were excluded. In Figure 2, include the percentage values for each color segment of the columns. This will make the figure easier to interpret. It is also important to show the sample size (“n”) for each year, as the results are currently presented in grouped form. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Methodological characteristics of Peruvian clinical practice guidelines, 2018 - 2023: a scoping review PONE-D-24-51671R3 Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Saravana Kumar Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: This is my third time to review the paper. Overall, I think this paper is interesting and meet the requirement for publication. I still have a little bit humble advice to improve the paper: Consider some data visualization to make the paper more readable and attractive (for example, a heatmap for Table 3, a distribution graph for the level of care or sector of care). Insert Peru-specific data, or explicitly state that such data are unavailable, in Discussion or Limitations part. Just a single word should be enough. The third little comments is to make implications or policy tangible for clinicians. For example, give one brief example where missing EtD hampered implementation. This will make your article more meaningful. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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