Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-50830Prevalence and associated factors with long COVID in the Brazilian populationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martoreli Júnior, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We would like to inform you that, in order to continue the evaluation process, it is necessary to take into account the observations made by the ad hoc evaluators. We therefore request that corrections be made in accordance with the notes received and that the new file be resubmitted within the established deadline. We ask that special attention be paid to highlighting all changes in yellow, in order to facilitate verification by the evaluation teams. We count on your collaboration and commitment to the success of this process. Sincerely, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Response: Partly. The study describes a relevant and important scientific inquiry. However, several aspects of the manuscript require clarification or revision to ensure technical soundness. a. The outcome variable is not clearly defined/operationalized. b. The statistical analysis section lacks clarity and proper sequencing. 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Response: Yes While the statistical methods mentioned are appropriate in principle, their presentation lacks the necessary rigor and logical flow. Revisions to this section are needed to ensure clarity and consistency. 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? Response: Yes The authors declared that all data are available without restrictions. 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? Response: No. The manuscript contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Examples include the use of future tense in both the abstract and methods sections, despite the study having been completed. The language should be revised to past tense throughout. Specifics 1. Abstract: Correct grammatical errors and revise sentences to reflect past tense since the study has been completed. Ensure OR and CI values are presented with consistent formatting (e.g., 95% CI: 1.23–2.45) and limit to two decimal places. 2. Methods Section: The subheading "Study Design and Settings" should include detailed information about the study settings. Specify the number of researchers involved in data collection and describe the process more explicitly. Clarify the difference between the data source and the data collection tool. Reference the tool appropriately. Provide details on how the pilot study was conducted, including the population used for testing. The outcome variable, "You had symptoms for four weeks or more," is ambiguous. Provide a clear and operationalized definition to ensure clarity for readers. Restructure the statistical analysis section. Start with descriptive statistics, then proceed to bivariate analysis, and conclude with regression analysis. 3. Results Section: Restructure the results to present descriptive statistics (demographic characteristics, independent variables characteristics, and outcome characteristics) first, followed by bivariate and regression analyses. Improve Table 3 for better clarity and alignment with the narrative. 4. Discussion Section: Enrich the discussion by comparing the study’s findings with existing literature. Provide possible explanations for the observed results, referencing relevant theories or evidence. 5. References: Review and revise the references to align with PLOS ONE guidelines. Reviewer #2: This is an important topic please clarify what 'Yesilar persistent symptoms' means The disease was caused by SARS COV 2 and COVID 19 is the disease please correct this. Not clear how many Brazilians are on social media and if they all had equal chance of being picked as 'seed' , if not then the findings are generalizable to only the social platforms user- let the title reflect this. REF (1) is not in English- please clarify if the data was from surveys Please define post covid / long covid. WHO defines Post covid as persistent or new symptoms after 12 weeks since onset of COVID 19 symptoms and lasting for 2 months. The sentence that reads “You had symptoms for four weeks or more” does not state from when. No attempts has been made to delineate symptoms caused by underlying disease as an explanation of the persistent There’s is a need to involve a statistician- post covid was over 50% of the population studied and therefore it will most likely be higher in most of the variables what one should have provided in the table is comparison group (ie alcoholic vs non alcoholic) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-24-50830R1Prevalence and associated factors with long COVID in the Brazilian populationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martoreli Júnior, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Authors Your review was excellent. However, the reviewer 02 asked one more important coorrection in the item 06. After this revision, send again your manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The comments have been adequately addressed The eerier parts of Conclusion section sounds like discussion- please consider rewriting it to sound like 'conclusion' ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-24-50830R2Prevalence and associated factors with long COVID in the Brazilian populationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martoreli Júnior, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Changes required for acceptance: Formatting and Language: - Review the entire manuscript for grammar, punctuation, and stylistic consistency, simplifying unnecessarily long or complex sentences. - The manuscript has improved substantially but remains somewhat verbose, with occasional repetition of results. Please revise the text for conciseness, especially in the Results section. - Standardize formatting for all headings and tables according to journal style (e.g., avoid all-caps titles). - Ensure consistent terminology throughout (e.g., use associated factors rather than risk factors). Title: Revise the title to better reflect the study’s main independent variables, emphasizing the assessment of healthy habits and sociodemographic characteristics. Abstract: - Simplify the abstract for greater clarity and brevity, avoiding unnecessary methodological details (e.g., mention of basic descriptive analyses). - When presenting results from multivariate models, report adjusted odds ratios rather than crude values. - Include a concise statement identifying the knowledge gap that motivated the study, supported by references that contextualize the importance of investigating long COVID in Brazil. Introduction: Expand the contextual background to highlight the scarcity of national evidence on long COVID and the relevance of this study for public health planning. Materials and Methods: - Correct minor typographical and grammatical issues (e.g., “methdos” → “methods”) and improve sentence structure in sections describing ethical aspects and data collection procedures. - Provide additional information about the logistic regression model, including handling of missing data, model generation, and ROC curve construction. - Add appropriate references for the questionnaire used and its prior validation or adaptation. - Include references for the statistical software (R and Jamovi). - Explicitly incorporate the data availability statement into the main text for transparency and compliance. Results: - Reduce redundancy between the text and tables, focusing on key findings rather than restating all numerical results. - Remove the written-out numbers in parentheses (e.g., “5,950 (five thousand nine hundred fifty)”). - Shorten overly long sentences for clarity and verify that table references are consistent. - Clearly indicate reference categories for all variables in Table 3. - Revise Table 3 for clearer presentation — remove redundant columns, use standard English numeric formatting, and report exact p-values following journal statistical reporting guidelines. - Provide the sample size and complete data for each variable, ensuring all categories of education and occupation are clearly described. - Relocate the description of the ROC curve to the Methods section. Discussion and Conclusion: - Reorganize sections so that the Discussion precedes the Conclusion. - In the Discussion, acknowledge the unequal gender distribution and interpret sex-related findings with caution. - Standardize the reporting of odds ratios and confidence intervals (e.g., OR = 1.39, CI = 1.20–1.61). - Revise ambiguous or grammatically inconsistent phrases to improve readability. - Justify the inclusion of the Hosmer–Lemeshow test within the Methods section. - Condense the Conclusion to focus on the principal findings and public health implications, avoiding repetition of points already discussed. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 29 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Elma Izze Da Silva Magalhães Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: This is a much improved version (a little too wordy, repetition of results) but it can be published as is Reviewer #3: This revised manuscript presents a cross-sectional web survey detailing the prevalence and associated factors of long COVID in the Brazilian population. The authors have adequately addressed the previous reviewer comment regarding the conclusion section, revising it to summarize the key findings rather than presenting an extended discussion. The manuscript is now technically sound and clearly written, the statistical methods (Fisher's exact test and stepwise logistic regression) are appropriate for the data structure and objectives, however, the response to the data availability requirements, while present in the submission forms, needs to be explicitly integrated into the main manuscript text for clarity and compliance. Reviewer #4: The authors conducted a cross-sectional study using the web to examine the prevalence and associated factors of long COVID in the Brazilian population. They found that factors like sedative and alcohol use were linked to a higher risk of long COVID, while vaccination showed a positive impact. Overall, if the research questions examined in this study were to be replicated in numerous robust studies, the findings could be significant for implementing public health interventions during pandemics like COVID-19. With that in mind, this reviewer has the following to remark: 1. Abstract The abstract serves as a concise summary of the study. The text needs editing to make it more concise and improve readability. For instance, there is no need to state here, “Descriptive statistics were performed…” It’s a given that the authors start their statisical analysis with a look at descriptive statistics first, then move on to bivariate and multivariate analyses. 2. Matrials and Methods Under Ethical Aspects (lines 95-96), the authors write, “Regarding confidentiality and privacy, it is emphasized that these is maintained. The information is confidential, and participants is not identified at any time.” These sentences should be edited to improve their grammatical accuracy and readability. 3. Sample and data collection procedures The authors state (lines 126-129), “In total 39 of these researchers underwent four hours of pre-training to conduct an online survey The RDS method used in this study was implemented as follows: a random selection of a set of participants (seeds) was made.” Is this one sentence or two? If two, punctuation is missing. 4. Study variables 4.1 (Lines 169-185) One issue here is the outcome variable, specifically the four-week criterion used by the authors as a marker for ‘Long COVID.’ If there is a way to align the definition of ‘Long COVID’ with current guidelines, including the Delphi-approach consensus, it should be pursued because it would strengthen the study. In this context, I wonder if the participants provided more details that could help the authors refine their study from the data collected about their outcome variable. For example, after asking participants, “Did you have symptoms for four weeks or more?” were there follow-up questions like, “For how long have you had symptoms?” 4.2 (Lines 186-187) The authors state, “The independent variables were social and demographic characteristics which selected variables were: Education…” This is another sentence that needs editing for smoother reading. 5. Results 5.1 (Line 214) The title is in all caps, which doesn’t follow the overall layout of the paper. 5.2 (Line 215) The authors state, “In total, 5,950 (five thousand nine hundred fifty) people were interviewed.” Adding the text in parentheses is unnecessary; some readers may find it redundant. 5.3 (Line 218) The authors write, “...4,231 (four thousand two hundred thirty-one)…” Again, there is no need to add the text in parentheses. 5.4 (Lines 223-226) The authors state, “Fisher's exact test was subsequently performed with the dichotomous variable "Have you had symptoms for a period of 4 weeks or more?" and the other variables in the form, presenting p-value < 0.05 with the variables in Table 2, note that some participants did not respond to all questions presented in this tables, consequently, the total count for each variable may vary.” This sentence is too long and confusing. Do the authors mean Table 2? If so, why do they say “this tables” in line 226? It would be advisable to edit this sentence. Make it at least two sentences. The first one could end with “Table 2,” a complete sentence. It would seem best to create a new sentence for what follows: “Note that some…” 5.5 (Lines 230-235) This paragraph could benefit from editing and paraphrasing: Answering “No” for “Have you had symptoms for a period of four weeks or more,” educational attainment varied, with 0.17% having no education or never completing any grade, 1.03% with incomplete elementary education, and 1.20% having completed elementary education. Additionally, 3.26% had incomplete high school, while 21.61% completed high school. Incomplete higher education was reported by 29.33%, and 19.38% completed higher education, with 13.03% holding a specialization. 5.6 (Lines 237-238) The authors state, “In terms of sex, females comprised 89.88%, while males accounted for 10.12%.” This clearly indicates a skewed sample, with females being more interested in this survey than males. 5.7 (Lines 241-242) The authors state, “Antibiotic use was reported by 55.23%, while 44.77% had not received them.” The second portion of this sentence is unnecessary and can be deleted. 5.8 (Lines 278-279) The authors write, “For each variable included in the final model, the specific response category associated with the outcome..” Double punctuation? 5.9 (Lines 283-285) The authors write, “It is observed, at a 95% confidence level, when analyzing the likelihood of experiencing COVID symptoms for 4 weeks or more, that a male individual has a 36.46% higher chance compared to a female (OR = 1.36 CI= 1.17-1.58);” As mentioned in comment 5.6, we are dealing with a skewed sample, with males making up just over 10%. Therefore, any conclusions drawn about males versus females in this analysis should be taken with caution. I suggest the authors elaborate on this in their discussion section. 5.10 (Lines 295-297) The authors write, “Furthermore, an individual who has heard of the term has a 54.34% higher chance of experiencing COVID symptoms for 4 weeks or more compared to someone who has not (OR = 1.54 CI= 1.31-1.81); To clarify, the authors should specify here which term they are referring to. Therefore, the sentence could be rewritten as: “Furthermore, an individual who has heard of the term ‘Long COVID’ has a 54.34% higher chance of experiencing COVID symptoms for 4 weeks or more compared to someone who has not (OR = 1.54, CI = 1.31-1.81);” 6. Discussion/conclusion 6.1 (Line 313) It is advisable to place the conclusion section after the discussion section, rather than the other way around. 6.2 (Lines 317-318) The authors write, “It was observed that men have a 36.46% higher chance of developing what is termed long COVID compared to women (OR = 1.36 CI= 1.17-1.58).” Please refer to my comments 5.6 and 5.9. 6.3 (Lines 345-346) The authors write, “The use of antibiotics (OR = 1.3948 CI= 1.20-1.61) and antivirals (OR = 1.3035 CI= 1.12-1.51) was also associated with a higher risk of persistent symptoms.” The reported odds ratios should follow the same style as confidence intervals. So the sentence could be edited to:“The use of antibiotics (OR = 1.39 CI= 1.20-1.61) and antivirals (OR = 1.30 CI= 1.12-1.51) was also associated with a higher risk of persistent symptoms.” 6.4 (Lines 351-354) The authors state, “Additionally, the use of home remedies was associated with a 30.38% increase in the risk of prolonged symptoms (OR = 1.30 CI= 1.12-1.51), suggesting that these treatments may, in some cases could not be effective.” This sentence needs attention. 6.5 (Lines 357-358) The authors write, “Individuals who were hospitalized for COVID-19 presented a 331.92% increase in the probability of persistent symptoms (OR = 4.3192 CI= 2.53-7.87)…” As mentioned in comment 6.3, the reported odds ratios should follow the same style as confidence intervals, which means that the above sentence could be edited to “Individuals who were hospitalized for COVID-19 presented a 331.92% increase in the probability of persistent symptoms (OR = 4.32 CI= 2.53-7.87)…” 6.6 (Lines 384-406) These lines could be presented as a conclusion section. In other words, line 313 should become “Discussion.” I hope this review is helpful and wish the authors the very best with their research! Reviewer #5: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Title: The manuscript's title addresses general factors associated with long COVID. However, the methods section describes a set of characteristics or independent variables, specifically healthy habits and sociodemographic characteristics. Therefore, I recommend modifying the title to align with these independent variables. Abstract: The authors state in line 86 on page 4, "In Brazil, there are few studies that have assessed long COVID, making the objective of this investigation to evaluate the prevalence and associated factors of long COVID in the Brazilian population." However, the absence of references and a clear gap in knowledge regarding long COVID is not evident. Sample and data collection procedures: While sampling was described, the sample size was not provided. 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