Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 8, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-65430-->-->Social norms vs socioeconomic vulnerability: gender identity and female labor force participation in Ecuador-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Yepez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 13 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This paper examines how gender norms relate to married women’s labor market outcomes in Ecuador using an adaptation of the probability-based measure from Bertrand et al. (2015). The authors construct a counterfactual indicator of whether a wife would outearn her husband, conditional on demographic characteristics, and examine its association with labor force participation, formality, working hours, and job stability. The paper also explores heterogeneity by educational attainment and provides several robustness checks. The empirical strategy is transparent, replicable, and grounded in previously published methodology. The results are well organized, coherently discussed, and contribute descriptive evidence to our understanding of gender norms in a highly informal labor market setting. The heterogeneity analysis adds depth and policy relevance. Major Comments Interpretation. The baseline positive association with labor force participation (LFP) is interpreted as evidence against breadwinner norms. However, the constructed regressor captures both potential earning capacity and exposure to norms. Standard labor supply responses (higher potential earnings → higher LFP) could generate similar patterns. The paper should avoid causal or mechanism language (e.g., “impact”, “effect”) and frame results as associations or patterns consistent with certain hypotheses. Heterogeneity. The education-split results are informative: LFP associations are driven by low-skilled women, while intensive-margin outcomes (formality, full-time work, tenure) are more pronounced for high-skilled women. This helps interpret the baseline coefficient. However, measurement error in informal earnings and assortative matching by education may confound these comparisons and should be acknowledged. Identification and Limitations. While the empirical strategy follows recent literature, several identification issues remain. Potential confounding arises from: a) Marriage market sorting: Women who anticipate lower labor force attachment may sort into marriages with lower-earning men, generating a mechanical correlation between the breadwinner probability and labor supply choices that does not reflect normative behavior. b) Unobserved heterogeneity: Ability, ambition, and occupation-specific preferences affect both potential earnings and employment outcomes but are not directly observed. Although the controls reduce this concern, they do not eliminate it. c) Labor demand constraints: In Ecuador’s highly informal labor market, observed outcomes such as part-time or informal work may reflect labor demand or institutional constraints rather than normative adaptation. Without separating supply from demand channels, causal attribution remains unclear. These issues do not invalidate the descriptive analysis but should be made explicit in a short limitations section. The current draft hints at these issues but does not present them directly and transparently. Reproducibility. To enhance transparency, the authors should clarify (i) whether earnings distributions are computed by year, (ii) how informal earnings are measured, and (iii) how missing data are treated. Providing replication code would further improve reproducibility. Robustness. The paper includes thoughtful robustness exercises (alternative earnings distributions, child splits, macro periods). The authors should note that non-married women are not a random benchmark, and anticipation effects may limit child-split interpretation. Minor Comments Briefly justify the clustering level for standard errors. Standardize terminology (e.g., “formal sector”, “full-time”, “tenure”). The literature review section could be more concise. Reviewer #2: This paper investigates gender norms on Ecuador’s labor market, specifically examining how the "male breadwinner" social norm correlates with labor force participation, formal versus informal employment, full-time versus part-time status, and job tenure. This paper is methodologically sound and effectively builds upon established literature, adding to its credibility/robustness. The robustness checks are sound and further contribute to demonstrating the replicability of these findings across multiple specifications. In the following lines, I recommend a series of minor revisions aimed at improving the transparency and clarity of certain sections. 1. In line with the principles of open science, I recommend the authors share their analysis code via a public repository (e.g., OSF). This practice enhances transparency and facilitates a more efficient, cumulative scientific process. 2. I recommend reporting the full set of regression coefficients for all variables included in the models. Providing these estimates—rather than only the primary variables of interest—allows readers to more accurately assess the model specification and identify potential issues. 3. The manuscript defines full-time employment as requiring at least 40 hours (page 9), yet references a 36-hour threshold for part-time status (page 10). The authors should clarify how workers falling between 36 and 40 hours are classified. If they are not classified as either full-time or part-time employees, the authors should clarify how their findings apply to them. 4. The first paragraph of page 9 provides an ambiguous explanation of the economic rationale behind this study. I recommend the authors revise this section to more precisely present the theoretical framework, ensuring that it aligns with the empirical design implemented in the analyses. 5. Regarding the linear probability model in Equation 2, the authors should clarify how the controls for "wife’s potential income at each 5th percentile" are constructed. It is unclear whether these variables represent the mean income, the maximum income, or another measure of income within the 5-percentile band. 6. The manuscript contains typos. For instance, at the end of page 15, the authors state "the estimate is reduced to -0.6," (should be -0.06). Similarly, in page 20 the authors write “a woman earning 2more than her husband”. 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