Peer Review History

Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2025
Decision Letter - Abayeneh Girma, Editor

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Reviewers' comments:

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1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: N/A

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors, thank you for sharing this work. Integrating an online forum on the topic of interest in order to get information about consumer’s view seems to be a feasible alternative. Using a natural language processing (NLP) seems plausible, although raising some questions about selection bias. Adding some references about this would help to get information about that. Generally, it would be expected that people with very bad experiences or people being very satisfied with a certain intervention would be overrepresented. Are the publications regarding this kind of bias and how to deal with it using internet platforms on medical topics? Would be helpful to add this.

255 ff: “the study findings were assessed for relevance and accuracy by these professionals. “ � were there any criteria?

Discussion: you carefully ventilating possible pitfalls and dangers of using public forums like you did. You underline that a human should assess each AI step. How could you identify fake input in dokter.NL ?

Adding some aspects mentioned above may help this work to be even more practice relevant.

Reviewer #2: General comments

This manuscript presents a novel and timely application of natural language processing (NLP) to analyze patient experiences shared online for the purpose of informing clinical guideline development. The study is well-designed, methodologically sound, and addresses a significant gap in the integration of patient experiential knowledge into guidelines, particularly for conditions like scabies where traditional patient engagement methods are challenging. The findings are impactful, leading to tangible changes in the Dutch public health guideline for scabies.

1. Generalizability: While the method is promising, the study focuses solely on scabies and a single Dutch forum. The authors should briefly discuss the potential applicability to other diseases or cultural contexts.

2. Patient engagement: The lack of direct engagement with forum users (e.g., validation of themes) is noted as a limitation. A brief discussion on how to mitigate this in future studies (e.g., involving patient advocates) would strengthen the manuscript.

3. Technical details: The preprocessing steps (e.g., stop-word removal, stemming) are described, but additional details on model validation (e.g., inter-rater agreement for topic labeling) would enhance reproducibility.

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Revision 1

Dear Editor,

Thank you for considering our manuscript and for the opportunity to resubmit a revised version of this article to PLOS ONE. We appreciate that both reviewers value the manuscript and consider it a good fit for PLOS ONE.

We would also like to thank the reviewers for providing valuable comments and feedback. We were able to incorporate most of the suggestions and believe that these have significantly improved the quality of our manuscript. As requested, we have uploaded a clean revised manuscript to the editorial management system, as well as a document that highlights the tracked changes made to the original submission.

Please also find a point-by-point response to all comments provided by the reviewers uploaded in the editorial management system.

Should you have any further questions or require additional clarification, please do not hesitate to contact us. We hope that our changes to the manuscript reflect the suggestions well and thank you for considering this resubmission.

Sincerely, on behalf of all authors,

Lea Lösch

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Decision Letter - Abayeneh Girma, Editor

Including patient experiences from online sources in guidelines: A natural language processing study on scabies

PONE-D-25-04246R1

Dear Dr. Lösch,

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Kind regards,

Abayeneh Girma

Academic Editor

PLOS One

Additional Editor Comments (optional):

Accept for publication.

This manuscript represents a valuable contribution to interdisciplinary research at the intersection of digital health, NLP, and evidence-based guideline development. It is innovative, ethically conducted, well-executed, and clearly communicated. The study advances both methodology and practice, offering a replicable model for future guideline developers seeking to incorporate patient voices in a scalable, low-burden manner.

Reviewers' comments:

None

Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Abayeneh Girma, Editor

PONE-D-25-04246R1

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