Peer Review History
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports on methods to assess and evaluate changes in DXA derived bone outcomes over time. In particular, differences in hip BMD when the mean of both hips is analyzed vs both hips separately, differences in change between hip and LS BMD, and differences in change between LS BMD and TBS. Generally, the study seems well conducted, although I do not fully agree on the interpretation of the data. Generally: Sometimes the story is difficult to follow, especially the hip comparison. The authors use: mean bilateral total hip BMD vs. total hip BMD of both hips. I would recommend using: mean bilateral total hip BMD vs. total hip BMD of each hip separately. Introduction: “However, the ISCD does not mention how to interpret BMD changes when both the regions are scanned during follow-up BMD measurements. Therefore, discordant results may be obtained when simultaneously monitoring BMD changes in the spine and hips.” Is this really a problem? There are many factors involved in BMD changes over time. For example, different (un)loading patterns of the spine and hip may strongly influence the magnitude and direction of change for both sites. General for entire introduction: Yes there can be discordance in the magnitude or direction of change between BMD of different scans or different sites. But I am not sure whether this is really important. In many case, the discordance can be explained by specific loading patterns or interventions that can affect some sites or outcomes more than the other. This also justifies the rationale to conduct multiple scans. The interpretation of the results can than be based on multiple scans…. The theoretical framework would be strengthened by a more comprehensive integration of the relevant literature. Methods: Cohort: What was the median or mean follow-up time? BMD changes have been reduced to an ordinal scale. Have the authors also considered to address the agreement between changes on a continuous scale? In this case, also the magnitude and direction of changes between outcomes can be assessed. Results: Table 1: Can you also provide T and Z-scores for sites? This provides an indication how participants’ BMD can be interpreted relative to general population. Was it a cohort characterized by osteoporosis? Table 2: Table legend needs to be improved. I assume that the symbol between brackets indicate the right and left hip? This is nowhere explicitly mentioned. Table 2: Alternative explanation: When using the mean of both hips, 5.5% shows no change, while a decrease would have been detected if both hips were analyzed separately. When using the mean of both hips, 4.8% shows no change, while an increase would have been detected if both hips were analyzed separately. In other words, 10.3% (+1.0%) of the participants has and undetected change when the mean of both hips is analyzed, compared with both hips separately. Imo, this shows that analyzing both hips separately is more sensitive for changes than using the mean. But this cannot be regarded as poor agreement. Table 3: Imo, it does not really does not really make sense to compare the hip with LS. Both sites respond differently to similar loading stimuli and interventions. The outcomes should also be interpreted as such. Anyhow, it does not mean poor agreement. Table 4: BMD and TBS are two different outcomes. Imo, the Table indicates that TBS is less sensitive to changes over time than LS. But that does not mean poor agreement per se. It could indicate, however, that TBS is less suited to evaluate or monitor BMD status. Conclusion: “Additionally, the discordance percentage was 43.5% between the monitored spine and the mean bilateral total hip BMD, which indicated poor agreement.” This statement is not justified. You would never aspect good agreement between both sites. “We also compared changes between the monitored spinal BMD and TBS in follow-up BMD measurements; the discordance percentage was 58.0%, which also showed poor agreement” This statement is also not justified. When one measurement is not sensitive to changes over time, while the other is relatively sensitive, I would never expect good agreement. “When the LSC of the mean bilateral total hip BMD was used to compare the differences in follow-up BMD measurements, the discordant percentage was 11.3%.” Is this really discordance? When taking a mean of two measurements, it just becomes less sensitive. Thus, a true change in of two hips, may go undetected when taking the mean of two hips. My interpretation is that when high sensitivity is required, it could be more beneficial to monitor and interpret both hips separately. The discussion would be strengthened by a more comprehensive integration of the relevant literature. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Comparison of different methods for monitoring changes in bone mineral density during follow-up measurements PONE-D-25-13444R1 Dear Dr. Teng, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gaetano Paride Arcidiacono Academic Editor PLOS One |
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