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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript by Kosuke Nitta et al investigates association between delirium and neutrophil percentage to albumin ratio (NPAR) in patients with cervical spinal cord injury (CSCI). The authors performed statistical analysis on a previously collected case-control study and found a significant association between high NPAR on the day of injury and delirium in CSCI. The study addresses an important clinical question and is largely well written. However, some methodological aspects require attention. Methods & Results 1) Study design and subject: The patient exclusion text is unclear, with implications for the results text, the tables, the abstract and potentially some of the analyses: The text on Page 5 suggested “147 patients were divided into two groups: surgically treated and conservatively treated. Of the patients treated conservatively, those with bone injuries not requiring surgery were excluded”. However the Figure 1 flowchart shows “CSCI with minor cervical fracture that did not require surgery: 20 cases”. The authors have stated that these 20 patients were excluded in which case the total number of patients investigated should be 127. However Figure 2 appears to show 147 patients in total (in the ‘whole’ bar). The figure legend for figure 2 is rather unhelpfully placed IN the results text and before the tables. In any case, the legend states that n=147. Likewise tables 1 and 2 appear to contain n=147 and tables 3 and 4 don’t specify. This is a significant discrepancy. The authors need to be clear as to whether they analysed 127 or 147 patients. If the 20 patients that did not require surgery are excluded the graphs need to be adjusted as well as references to 147 patients in the abstract, results text etc. Importantly, it needs to be absolutely clear as to the data actually used in the analysis (tables and figures) so this needs careful attention in every part of the paper. 2) Definition and prevention of delirium: The incidence of delirium is the primary outcome for the study. It is stated that upon admission, a mental evaluation has been conducted by the nurses and referred to psychiatrist if suspected or had a sudden deterioration. The authors should give some information about WHEN delirium was diagnosed by the psychiatry department. Although it is not always practical to have delirium diagnosis on admission, and it is likely that the formal diagnosis was made at different times for different patients, it is pertinent to current association with acute inflammation as to when the patients were assigned to the delirium group and how that time related to when blood samples were collected for analysis. Is ‘day of injury’ sampling done at time of admission? Is day 1 done at 24 hours post-surgery or some wider range relative to surgery (the same information is needed for day 3)? The authors need to clarify whether the analysis is ‘delirium anytime’, or delirium at some specific time, related to blood markers at days 0, 1 and 3. 3) Since some patients were deemed high risk and had delirium prevention measures applied this could obviously affect the incidence of delirium so it would seem important for this to be specified and perhaps taken into account in the analysis. This seems especially important since the incidence rate of delirium was actually higher in those who underwent conservative treatment than those who underwent surgery, which is somewhat surprising. 4) Statistical analysis of results: We do not have extensive experience in statistical analysis, but from a conceptual point of view, since, pneumonia, deep vein thrombosis and alcohol use were associated with delirium in univariate analysis (table 1), it would seem important to know whether albumin, neutrophils and other inflammatory indices are strongly associated with those categories and whether this has significant bearing on the conclusions of the study. For example, the only blood parameter associated with delirium in this cohort, NPAR has a p value of 0.037 while the association with Pneumonia reaches a much higher level of confidence (p=0.005). Both alcohol use and DVT are also significantly associated with delirium at a similar level of confidence to the association with NPAR. This needs explicit consideration in the paper. 5) Since there was no mention of an investigation into the relationship between alcohol use and delirium in the introduction or the methods sections of the manuscript nor any mention of why alcohol is singled out here when pneumonia appears to be a much stronger association, the authors should clarify in the methods section whether alcohol use was a pre-specified exposure variable or a secondary outcome of interest. If alcohol was included in the multivariate analysis (while pneumonia was not) this suggests that the authors have quantitative data on alcohol rather than simply categorical (as might be the case for pneumonia). If this is the case, then shouldn’t some continuous variable for alcohol be included (blood alcohol level?) 6) The calculation of the cut off value for each analyte/ROC curve and how sensitivity and specificity values for the ROC curve were calculated might be explained a little more clearly. Is the value of 22 for NPAR in the normal range or is this actually a high NPAR value? Related to this, what is the normal range for NPAR (i.e in non-spinal cord injury individuals) and how does the raised NPAR value arise? i.e. the higher NPAR value could arise from raised neutrophil numbers or from lowered albumin levels. Knowing the absolute values for neutrophil numbers (per blood volume) and albumin concentration will provide insights that are useful to understanding the biological processes at play (and therefore useful to the delirium field). 7) The significant association between delirium and NPAR is stated clearly in the results section on Page 9 and shown in Figure 3 and Table 3. The Table 3 of ROC curve analysis also shows significant association with CRP on injury day (AUC=0.65 and p-value= 0.033). The authors ought to mention this in results and discuss its importance in the discussion. Discussion: 8) Line 225 “was not significant in this study.” The age difference is not significant (p-value= 0.056) but very close to being significant. In addition, since it is not clear whether the conservative treatment group is 77 patients or 97 patients, then the association between age and delirium may be affected by whether the patient group size is 127 or 147. Irrespective of this, it would seem conservative to state this relationship since that relationship is likely to be significant in a larger study (only n=15 patients with delirium means very limited statistical power). 9) Limitations of the study have been listed in the last paragraph of the discussion. It would be nice if authors would propose solutions to overcome these problems and provide future perspective. 10) The authors mention neuroinflammation and appear to infer that NPAR is either an indicator of neuroinflammation or a driver of neuroinflammation (bottom of page 15). The NPAR is an index of systemic inflammation and the authors present no information as to its relationship with neuroinflammation. There is a tendency in the field to assume that since delirium is a brain outcome and some indices of inflammation associate with delirium that that indicates that neuroinflammation is the relevant perturbation. The authors have no data on blood brain barrier, nor on neuroinflammation and should be explicit about having only data on systemic inflammation. If they have information to support their suggestion that NPAR is an indicator of CNS inflammation they should present it or else they should clarify that their statement is entirely speculative. 11) The authors conclusion is that NPAR may serve as a simple measurable biomarker for predicting delirium in patients following CSCI. However the association is weak, is absent for NPAR at days 1 and 3 and the association is weaker than other parameters measured in the current study (such as pneumonia). The authors should discuss the extent to which NPAR is simply a marker of severity of systemic inflammation. IL-8, for example, the main neutrophil chemoattract, and in other studies, IL-6, are also associated with delirium. Acknowledgement: 12) Financial support for the study should be acknowledged. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Colm Cunningham ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Association between delirium and neutrophil percentage-to-albumin ratio in patients with cervical spinal cord injury :A single-center, retrospective study PONE-D-25-32009R1 Dear Dr. Kumagai, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pedro Kallas Curiati, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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