Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 14, 2025 |
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Strengths • Correct statistical models (Poisson with robust SEs) → avoids overestimation of effects. • Survey weighting accounted for representativeness. • Both cross-sectional and longitudinal perspectives strengthen causal interpretation. • Results clearly reported with confidence intervals. ⸻ Limitations / Points to Flag 1. Limited confounder adjustment – only age and education were included; other structural factors could influence results. 2. Small TGD sample size – increases risk of Type II error; underpowered for some outcomes. 3. Assumption of stable sexual identity over 3 years may not reflect reality. 4. Job satisfaction dichotomization loses nuance; ordinal or linear models could provide more detail. 5. Potential multiple testing issue – many outcomes tested, but no adjustment for multiple comparisons (risk of false positives). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript, “Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study.” The manuscript addresses an under-researched topic for LGBTQ+ individuals and warrants continued study. Overall, the manuscript was well written and structured. The findings were clear, interesting, and provides a foundation for additional research. The discussion conceptualized the findings through established research-informed understandings of the community. This reviewers had minimal recommendations and questions. - Page 7, Line 144: Recommend including an example or two of responses that were “inadequately described.” - Page 9: I appreciated the explanation for why adjustments were not made for gender identity in the sexual identity analysis and similarly for sexual identity in the gender identity analysis. The rationale was clear and proactively addressed a question readers may have (i.e., what about individuals who identify as both non-heterosexual and TGD). - Page 10, Lines 221-224 and Page 14, 279-280: How does the study’s sample sizes (% of non-heterosexual and TGD) compare to national population estimates? If possible, this reviewer recommends including that detail. - Page 17, Line 329: The authors briefly reference self-disclosure hesitancy in surveys. This reviewer recommends expanding this as a potential limitation of the study because the findings do not capture those who chose not to self-disclose. It also may be worthwhile to include commentary about reasons for hesitancy to self-disclose on surveys. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the article “Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study”. This novel article examines work participation disparities among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer, and other sexually and/or gender diverse (LGBTQ+) adults in Australia. Here are some doubts/suggestions for consideration/reflection: In line 77, instead of “facing”, I think the authors mean “regarding”. Regarding the categorization of the sexually diverse participants, I find it contradictory and rather invisibilizing that in the introduction, the authors point out the fact that previous studies, and I quote them literally: “group LGBTQ+ workers together rather than disaggregating by sexual or gender identity, making it difficult to draw firm conclusions about the experiences of specific subgroups” and when they proceed to the analysis section, they go and do the same thing. I think that if the authors are writing a manuscript titled “Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study”, it doesn’t make sense that 94% of the sample they use is composed of heterosexual participants. I understand that LGBTQ+ people compose about 4.5% of the population in Australia, and obviously, heterosexual people are going to be the majority. However, as a researcher who also works in the field of sexual diversity, I believe that this article is poorly conceived. I think it would make much more sense to focus on the number of “non-heterosexual” participants (which I see is 929 people), divide them so that each category (bisexuals, lesbians, gays) can have the visibility it deserves, and take an equivalent sample of heterosexual people for comparison. In this way, the article would take on a more positive connotation than the ‘otherness’ it currently appears to have. I think the authors should consider this and modify it. Regarding the Results and Discussion sections, I think the authors should first reconsider the consequences of comparing “otherness” or “non-heterosexual” and heterosexual participants before stating any outcomes that may be biased on the sample size used. Overall, I think this manuscript is well written and could be useful. The authors should address the reviews, and then the manuscript will be greatly improved. Reviewer #3: While I do not have the statistical analysis skills to evaluate this manuscript from that perspective, I can say with confidence that the subject is logically presented, the rationales given for the verbal conclusions and recomendations appear well-reasoned, and the references and supporting articles cited represent a comprehensive sample of the relevant literature. This reviewer finds the article informative and insightful and supports its publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study PONE-D-25-34839R1 Dear Dr. Dunya Tomic, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ozan Karadeniz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript titled "Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study" has been accepted for publication in Plos ONE. Your submission demonstrated a significant contribution to understanding employment disparities within the LGBTQ+ community in Australia, and we commend the rigor and clarity of your analysis. The manuscript will now proceed to the production stage, and our editorial team will contact you shortly regarding proofs, final formatting, and publication timelines. We appreciate your contribution to advancing research in this important area and look forward to sharing your work with our readership. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript, “Work participation disparities among LGBTQ+ Australians: insights from a nationally representative cohort study.” The authors were clear in how they addressed each reviewer’s feedback and noted location in the manuscript. The incorporated feedback in the manuscript appropriately expanded the acknowledged limitations, provide additional context for findings and interpretations, reflects diversity of the identity categories, and has enhanced readability from rephrasing targeted sections. This reviewer supports publication and believes readers will find the manuscript informative. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to re-review this article. The authors have addressed correctly all comments made previously and I have no further comments. Reviewer #3: This reviewer appreciates the Authors' detailed responses to all the reviewers' comments and their revisions to the original rext. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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PONE-D-25-34839R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Tomic, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of MD Ozan Karadeniz Academic Editor PLOS One |
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