Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 25, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-40604The Relationships Between Box Turtle Gut Microbiomes and PersonalityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Harlow, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 20 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have created a very interesting, detailed, and well-written manuscript with the commendable objective of providing novel information to assist in the management and protection of the threatened Eastern Box Turtle species. Although the sample size is quite limited, this is understandable given the species studied. It is also appreciated that the discussion acknowledges the need for increased sample size overall and the need to balance sexes in future studies. The paper is acceptable, however there are several minor notes: The references section does not include numbers that would correspond to the in-text citations. In addition, page numbers are missing. It is stated that a total of 12 turtles were collected but only 11 total turtles deemed bold/shy (first mentioned in Figure 1) with no mention of the 12th. It could be confused that this was either the turtle that supposedly did not emerge after 600 seconds where the trail was terminated (is it not mentioned if this turtle was included with the list of shy individuals or not), or the immature unknown sex individual for sex comparison studies, although only the 10 adults had their sexes determined; so this could be more clearly stated. In addition, cloacal, oral, and skin samples were not taken from all 12 turtles (only either 10 or 11) with no apparent mention for this reason, even though it is mentioned that samples were taken from each encountered individual. In regards to Figure 2: Is there a reason only the Bray-Curtis distance analysis is shown in a figure and not the other tests for beta diversity? Additionally, this figure may work better if “Skin”, “Oral”, and “Cloacal” were shown by their respective A-C designated letters as was included in Figure 1. The text also includes “combined” as a sample type for this test which does not appear in the figure. Lastly, the ellipses are not “shaded”. Side Note: Although not required, consider en dashes for ranges, and not starting a sentence directly with a bracketed citation. Reviewer #2: This interesting study investigates the relationship of Eastern Box Turtle behaviour and their microbiome, on a sample of 12 turtles, collected from several testing sites and tested in a time-to-head-emergence essay that was linked with microbiome analyses from the turtles’ cloacal, skin and oral swabs. The Authors found that females and shy turtles had significantly higher alpha microbiome diversity than males and bold turtles, and there was no significant difference in beta diversity. The Authors also found several overabundant microbial taxa, pathways and modules that differed between bold and shy turtles. The steroid biosynthesis pathway was overrepresented in bold turtles, whereas bile acid biosynthesis pathway and purine degradation to urea module were overrepresented in shy turtles. While the results are overall interesting, I could not identify the main “take home messages” and conclusions of this manuscript. There are many aspects of the manuscript that should be improved before it can be considered for publication, and I list these major and minor point below, hoping they will be helpful for the Authors in revising their manuscript. Major points. Labelling throughout the manuscript should be improved. As the Authors did not conduct repeated testing (L181), labelling behaviours as ‘personality’, ‘boldness’ or ‘shyness’ is misleading, instead of using ‘personality’ as a term, the Authors should use ‘behaviour’. Furthermore, why do Authors make a distinction between “microbiome” and “microbiota” (L76-78) and then use them interchangeably in the text? Was the overall aim of the manuscript just to get more data on Eastern Box Turtles because they are “reptiles and long-lived, non-model organisms” (L28) or that “and that they were used because of “the dire need for more data on their behaviour and microbiome as reptiles and non-model organism” (L15-151). This is a bit weak reason. Methods and data collection are unclear. For instance, it seems that some turtles were already captured and tracked beforehand (“many turtles encountered in this study had been previously captured and tracked” L157-158; “some turtles” L164), but how many turtles were captured of the ones tested in this manuscript is not precisely given. Further, how were the tests done, was the “time-to-head-emergence” test conducted first, then the measurements, then the swabs or did you follow other order of data collection? How were the turtles located? What motivated your decision to label turtles “bold” if they emerged in less than 10 and “shy” in more than 10 seconds – was there any biological reason for this? Why did the Authors conduct only one behavioural test, when they knew that repeated testing is needed to assess personality? Statistical analyses should be carefully conducted and results discussed with taking a small sample size that the Authors collected in mind (only 12 turtles, uneven number of females and males, comparisons with differing numbers e.g. 7 versus 2 animals, etc). Statistical details should not be reported under Figure and Table descriptions, but instead in the main text of the manuscript. The analyses conducted with linking behaviour and microbiome are not very clearly described, so the reader will be left somewhat puzzled what was done where. Do these analyses refer to L210-212? Which analyses were done to check the effect of personality, sex, age etc on microbiome? L250. What kind of interaction was found in terms of personality type & sex? L333-334. Here it seems that sex effects are convoluted with age, as IDs of unknown sex were also the juvenile and subadult ones? Please clarify. Literature coverage was made somewhat superficially, without giving specific examples. This is particularly true for Abstract (very generally written without discussion and conclusion sentences, giving general claims on phenomena that are quite underexplored; e.g. L21-22, L23-24, L24-25, L44-45). In general, details of previous studies are missing from the manuscript. Related point is that it is not clear from the Discussion what the Results represent and why they are important. Conclusion and overall messages that the reader can get from the manuscript are not clearly conveyed. References are very messy and unnumbered which makes it difficult to follow numbering in text. There is no consistent style in capitalization of words within a title. Editor names are given for journal articles which is not needed, links that are not doi identifiers, species names are not in italic, journal names are not capitalized etc. Minor points. L50-51 is redundant with L61-64. L54. “to explain variation in personality” can be omitted. L135. What does it mean that “the microbiomes will have significant beta diversities”? Fig 1. N=7 bold individuals? L275. Delete first “bold”. L301. “by personality” -> “between bold and shy”. L309. “project” -> “study” L312-313. “there would be significant beta diversities between them” -> beta diversities would significantly differ between them” L313. Delete second “predicted” L319-320. Delete “or show significant beta diversity” and exchange to “but did not differ significantly in alpha or beta diversity.” Delete “group” and “also”. L324. Exchange to “the resulting heightened levels of cortisol can lead to…” L326-327. Higher corticosterone than who? Also, please distinguish sentence on previous study and new finding from this study as otherwise it is confusing. L343. Male and female juveniles, or males and females? Please clarify why. L356-357. Latin name of species should be in italic. L377-378. Did you mean “were more abundant in oral and skin swabs of bold turtles” ? L388. Add a comma after “behavior” L390. Delete “for this taxon” L407. Delete “predicted” L410. Add “in” before “current study” L412. “study” -> “investigation” L431. Do you mean “cloacal swabs” instead of “gut microbiome swabs”? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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