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If applicable, please specify in the figure caption text when a figure is similar but not identical to the original image and is therefore for illustrative purposes only. 5. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Nice and innovative work! This is a novel and qualitative piece of work that blends science and art to explore how evolution may have influenced the spine and contributed to the progression of back pain in the human race. Please find my minor comments below: • Page 4, second paragraph: The letter ‘T’ is missing in the sentence beginning “hese profound societal changes coincided with increased spinal strain, repetitive tasks, and urbanization, all contributing to a discernible rise in spinal and musculoskeletal disorders [9-11].” • Methods section: Please add figure numbers to the text for clarity, as it is currently difficult to determine which figure is being referenced. • Discussion section: Some words are unnecessarily bolded; this formatting should be removed. Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents an interesting and visually engaging concept linking spinal evolution with posture and low back pain. However, to enhance its clinical and biomechanical depth, the authors could integrate the concept of myofascial continuity and muscle chains that maintain postural stability. The current version focuses mainly on skeletal evolution, whereas muscular and fascial adaptations play a crucial role in chronic overload and pain syndromes associated with poor posture. Fascial and Myofascial Chain Perspective Consider referencing Thomas W. Myers’ “Anatomy Trains” model or Stecco’s fascial continuity research, which demonstrate how dysfunctions in one segment (e.g., thoracolumbar fascia, multifidus, quadratus lumborum) propagate tension throughout the kinetic chain. Chronic seated or flexed postures typically cause shortening of the hip flexors and thoracolumbar fascia, inhibition of the multifidus, and compensatory overactivity of the quadratus lumborum and upper trapezius—mechanically linking the pelvis, sacroiliac joint (SIJ), and shoulder girdle dysfunctions. Trigger Points and Postural Overload Introduce the role of myofascial trigger points (TrPs) as a micro-level consequence of prolonged overload or static posture. Citing Travell & Simons could strengthen the pathophysiological basis: sustained seated posture → ischemic muscle zones → TrP activation in the multifidus and quadratus lumborum → referred pain mimicking spinal disorders. The addition of ultrasound (US)-based confirmation of TrPs and US-guided dry needling (US-DN) (Bubnov R., Ultrasound Med Biol, 2011; https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/1878-5085-3-13) would provide a modern pathophysiological bridge between evolutionary mismatch and clinical manifestations of low back pain. Comparative Functional Anatomy The authors could contrast human static sitting posture with that of non-human primates (e.g., chimpanzees), which maintain a flexed hip and mobile lumbar spine position even when seated (see https://doi.org/10.1016/j.applanim.2021.105417; https://doi.org/10.1016/0163-6383(91)90022-K). This comparison would show that humans’ prolonged sitting with posterior pelvic tilt and loss of lumbar lordosis is not “evolutionarily optimized,” unlike dynamic squat resting seen in apes. Additionally, anthropological practices such as carrying loads on the head, common in African populations, naturally maintain spinal alignment through balanced axial loading. Including such examples would illustrate cultural mechanisms that promote postural correction and dynamic equilibrium. Finally, the authors might briefly acknowledge modern behavioral adaptations—such as the slightly head-down posture that improves social perception but may alter cervical–thoracic load distribution (see https://oa.mg/work/10.1016/j.actpsy.2022.103602)—to highlight ongoing tension between evolutionary optimization and modern psychosocial demands. Clinical Relevance and Preventive Outlook Discussing interventions that “re-align” with evolutionary and myofascial principles—dynamic posture, ergonomic squatting, fascial stretching, or core stabilization—would add translational value. A schematic figure or appendix linking the sequence evolutionary posture → fascial adaptation → trigger point formation → chronic pain loop would help visualize the proposed concept and enhance its educational and preventive potential. Reviewer #3: This article was an interesting study. This study extrapolated from postures depicted in figurative paintings to contemporary research on spinal load dynamics in corresponding positions. It examined the dichotomy between spinal evolution and modern lifestyle through an artistic lens and was groundbreaking and mind-blowing in its methodology. This study provided an evidence-based alert regarding biomechanically unsustainable modern habits. However, I think there need add some scientific data in this article. The results show different positions were associated with intradiscal pressures. If the authors provided some data of intradiscal pressure under different position. These data can help to clearly tell the reader which position were risks of low back pain. The figure 2 provided paintings from ancient Egypt. But people in some pictures were not workers. This could not show the people’s daily tasks. Although the arts from ancient Egyptian are few. I still suggest the author provide more pictures of workers. In figure 1-6, please label alphabetic markers in subfigures, like A, B, C, et al. In ancient records, it limited historical documentation on low back pain, which inferred its association with poor posture through artistic depictions appears methodologically indirect and lacks substantive foundation. Why did the authors not prioritize analyzing direct correlations between occupational postures and lumbar pathology in contemporary populations? ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. Abdullah Emre Taçyıldız, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript presents an original and engaging concept linking spinal evolution, posture, and low back pain, supported by rich visual material. The authors have improved structure and contextual clarity and partially integrated functional anatomy and cultural aspects as suggested in the previous round. However, some issues remain: Conceptual Balance While the manuscript argues that civilization and modern posture negatively affect spinal health, the examples introduced (e.g., primate posture, chimpanzee lumbar mobility, and cultural balancing practices such as head-load carrying in African populations) actually demonstrate that posture adaptation is multifactorial and not always detrimental. This complexity slightly contradicts the paper’s main narrative and should be acknowledged briefly in the discussion. Functional and Clinical Integration To strengthen translational value, the authors could still expand on the functional anatomy aspects—particularly the role of the thoracolumbar fascia, multifidus, quadratus lumborum, and pelvic chain—and how chronic overload leads to myofascial dysfunction. Reference to treatments based on understanding biomechanics via myofascial trigger points, ultrasound diagnostics, and US-guided dry needling (US-DN) would help illustrate how the evolutionary–postural concept translates into clinical understanding and intervention. Practical Perspective The discussion would benefit from a short preventive and rehabilitative outlook, referring to dynamic posture training, fascial stretching, or core stabilization, US-DN, to connect evolutionary theory with clinical application. Overall, this is an interesting and creative paper, presenting a thought-provoking view that stimulates interdisciplinary discussion. It could be further refined indefinitely, but the current version already makes a valuable conceptual contribution. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Viewing low back pain through the lens of spinal evolution: Understanding the morphology and limits of the human spine PONE-D-25-38294R2 Dear Dr. Abdullah Emre Taçyıldız We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Holakoo Mohsenifar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have responded thoroughly and thoughtfully to all previous comments. The revised manuscript now demonstrates a substantially improved conceptual balance, clearer integration of comparative anatomy, and an enhanced connection between evolutionary posture, myofascial physiology, and clinical relevance. The additions addressing: evolutionary mismatch vs cultural/environmental adaptation, the thoracolumbar fascia, pelvic chain, and functional anatomy, myofascial trigger points diagnostics/treatment, preventive and rehabilitative strategies, are comprehensive and appropriate. The new discussion paragraphs effectively resolve the concerns raised earlier, especially regarding the need for conceptual nuance and translational context. Importantly, the authors have succeeded in clarifying that examples such as chimpanzee lumbar mobility or African head-load carrying do not contradict their thesis, but rather illustrate the complexity of spinal adaptation and help frame the idea of evolutionary–environmental mismatch in modern sedentary contexts. This refinement strengthens the manuscript and removes the prior conceptual tension. The clinical translation component (myofascial dysfunction, dynamic posture, fascial mobility) is now clearly articulated and adds meaningful value without overwhelming the conceptual nature of the paper. Overall, the manuscript is now cohesive, scientifically sound, and intellectually stimulating. No further major issues remain, and the paper could be revised indefinitely without essential improvement. Recommendation: Accept ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rostyslav Bubnov ********** |
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