Peer Review History
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study addresses a significant gap in behavioral science and compliance literature by empirically examining lay understanding of behavioral mechanisms, a topic that has received limited attention despite its policy relevance. The use of a large, representative sample, multiple imputation for missing data, and strong statistical analyses (correlation, regression, rank-order comparisons) enhances the credibility of the findings. The integration of five distinct theoretical frameworks provides a comprehensive lens for understanding compliance. The study offers actionable insights into how public beliefs may support or hinder scientifically informed policy, with implications for behavioral interventions and public communication strategies. The manuscript is well-written, logically structured, and supported by clear tables and figures that effectively communicate the findings. Suggestions for Improvement - While the aggregate-level comparisons are compelling, the manuscript would benefit from deeper exploration of individual-level variability. Consider including clustering or latent class analysis to identify distinct lay belief profiles. - The study is context-specific. The authors acknowledge this, but a brief discussion of how findings might translate to other domains (e.g., tax compliance, environmental behavior) would strengthen the manuscript. - The study assesses perceived influence but not the depth or accuracy of lay conceptualizations. Qualitative follow-up studies could explore how laypeople understand the causal pathways of compliance mechanisms. This is a well-executed and insightful manuscript that makes a valuable contribution to behavioral science and policy research. I recommend publication pending minor revisions that address the points above, particularly the discussion of individual-level variability and generalizability. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the authors examine the correspondence between lay perceptions of the effects of various COVID restrictions on restriction compliance and the actual effects of these measures. The paper finds that members of the public think a variety of strategies for eliciting compliance successfully induce it, but do not distinguish much between tactics. As a result, while their perceptions of the effectiveness of different tactics corresponds in rank-order fashion to scientifically observed effects, perceptions of effectiveness often outweigh actual effectiveness. This is especially the case when one looks at the effect of policies over and above the effect of other policies. However, perceptions of effectiveness do not appear to be driven (much) by wishful thinking in that policy support corresponds in a fairly minor way to perceived policy effectiveness. There is a lot to like about the paper. It is able to integrate a range of disparate literatures to inform specific predictions as to what informs lay theories of compliance. It also lays out a helpful theoretical framework that separates rational choice-based, social learning-based, legitimacy-based, capacity-based, and opportunity-based reasons for compliance. The results are easily connected with theory and directly answer the research questions at hand. My suggestions are thus relatively minor. First, and most importantly, the authors compare absolute correlation coefficients (and later standardised regression coefficients) of actual effects of mechanisms on behaviour with lay perceptions of effects by rescaling the latter to span from 0-1. I am not convinced that this results in a 1-to-1 comparison effects. Namely, the endpoints of the scale for perceived effectiveness are 'disagree completely' and 'agree completely.' 'Agree completely' implies that a respondent thinks that there is an effect distinguishable from 0, but it need not imply a correlation of 1 - that an increase in use of the mechanism results in a perfect increase in compliance. 'Disagree completely' is a bit more murky, and could possibly mean 0 effect, or even a backfire effect. While it is too late to ask the respondents in this sample, one way to get a more accurate read is to see what kind of percentage change each tick on the scale corresponds to using an online sample of 100 or so. One can even convert these percentage changes into Pearson's r statistics, and thus for the correlations have a 1-to-1 comparison of perceived and actual correlations. This would also affect the analyses of perceived variability of effects as well. Second, I am not sure that the comparison between perceived effects and standardised regression coefficients is fair. The perceived effectiveness question is inherently a bivariate prospect. In order to ask about perceived effectiveness in a way that corresponds to regression coefficients, one would need to ask something along the lines of "Over and above [insert mechanisms here], mechanism X would induce compliance." Since this was not asked, there isn't really a 1-to-1 comparison that can be done between perceived effects and regression coefficients. While for transparency's sake I can support the items remaining in an Appendix, they likely should not be in the main text. Third, and tentatively, the authors mention in Lines 610-612 that they cannot estimate individual-level effects of policies and compare them to lay perceptions of effects. However, depending on whether the authors are willing to make some assumptions, Bayesian Causal Forests do estimate individual-level treatment effects, including with observational data (Caron et al. 2022). There is a package in R (bcf) that can run this kind of analysis. However, because the generated effects are based on assumptions that cannot be tested with real data, I can understand the authors being wary of this method. Fourth, and finally, a small sentence as to which insight from the behavioural revolution the authors are referring to would improve the clarity of that first paragraph in the manuscript. REFERENCES: Caron, Alberto, Gianluca Biao, and Joanna Manolopoulou. 2022. "Shrinkage Bayesian Causal Forests for Heterogeneous Treatment Effects Estimation." 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The People versus Behavioral Science: Alignment between lay and scientific understanding of compliance PONE-D-25-28768R1 Dear Dr. Reinders Folmer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Johannes Schwabe Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): You have addressed all reviewer comments comprehensively, and the manuscript is in great shape. I am pleased to accept it for publication. Congratulations on an excellent paper. Reviewers' comments: |
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