Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 21, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-33939Cyclodextrin reduces cholesterol crystal uptake by circulating monocytes in patients undergoing coronary angiography.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Luebbering, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please be sure to address all the points raised by the expert reviewers and quoted below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors investigated uptake of cholesterol crystals of human monocytes of patients undergoing coronary angiography and the influence of cyclodextrin treatment. They observed reduction of cholesterol crystal uptake under cyclodextrin treatment with different response depending on individual patients risk factors providing import evidence for cyclodextrin as potential therapeutic strategy in the future to reduce CV events. I recommend to accept the manuscript with major revisions stated below: 1. The authours should provide information on concomitant medication of investigated patients and should discuss potential medication confounders affecting uptake of cholesterol crystals. They also should discuss potential influence of medication used during acute coronary syndrome like aspirin or heaprine. 2. Was a dead-and-alive staining included into the flow cytometry analyisis? If not please comment on this in the discussion section as dead cells included in the analysis might influence SSC shift for cholesterol crystal uptake. Reviewer #2: The authors present an ex-vivo analysis of human PBMC investigating cyclodextrin, an FDA-approved drug carrier, has shown atheroprotective effects by enhancing cholesterol metabolism and reducing inflammation and cholesterol crystals. The authors show that cyclodextrin reduces cholesterol crystals uptake in patients undergoing coronary angiography. They hypothesize that these findings supports the role of cyclodextrin in inhibiting phagocytosis of cholesterol crystals and thus, promoting cholesterol efflux. Further, the authors state that observed ex-vivo effects are due to transcriptional changes While the topic is highly relevant, there are major flaws that limit the quality of the manuscript. Major remarks 1. The authors use circulating monocytes for the experiments. This model is significantly flawed, as resident cells in plaque tissue may have different characteristics. Circulating monocytes are usually not in contact with cholesterol crystals, thus greatly limiting the biological rigor of the finding. 2. Sideward scatter is a very general measure that can indicate a lot of things, e.g., different granules. The authors do not show that the increase in sideward scatter is in fact induced by cholesterol. This must be demonstrated. 3. The authors should provide data on the association of CC uptake and plaque burden and cholesterol levels in patients. 4. Calcified plaques are the most common finding in coronary atherosclerosis – yet, calcium was not assessed here which is a significant limitation towards the real situation. 5. The statistical analysis lacks assessment of normal distribution and appropriate testing of non-normally distributed values 6. Page 8: The sentence “CD-143 incubation of PBMC for six hours before CC-stimulation allows for internalization of CD by monocytes and may lead to transcriptional changes as described above” should also be moved to the Discussion section. Since internalization of CD was not directly validated (only surface markers were assessed via FACS), this causal claim cannot be supported by the current data. Likewise, any mention of transcriptional changes should be either substantiated with transcriptomic evidence or clearly stated as a hypothesis based on previously published findings (with appropriate references). 7. Calculation of CCΔCD introduces another step of calculation that may lead to bias. The authors should argue, based on current literature, why this value was introduced rather than showing normalized or raw data. 8. In several points in the manuscript, the authors refer to gene expression changes, this is not backed up by the data and should be removed. 9. The conclusion “CD has shown potential as a novel therapeutic strategy for atherosclerosis” should be reframed. Given that the current study is based on ex vivo analyses, such a therapeutic claim is not substantiated. A more appropriate phrasing would acknowledge that “CD may represent a potential candidate for further investigation as a therapeutic approach in atherosclerosis.” Minor remarks 1. Please include standard deviations and percentual values where appropriate throughout the manuscript. Additionally, indicate the sample size (n = xy) adjacent to percentage values for transparency. 2. Please rephrase the sentence “The relative number of monocytes that incorporated CC varied individually between 8 and 37%” to “The relative number of monocytes that incorporated CC ranged between 8–37%.” 3. Page 8: The statement “which validates the hypothesis that CD reduces CC-phagocytosis” should be relocated to the Discussion section, as it represents an interpretation rather than a result. 4. The statement “40 patients displayed an individually significant CCΔCD while nine patients developed an increase in CC-uptake after CD-stimulation” requires revision. As the experiments were conducted ex vivo, it would be more accurate to state that “PBMCs derived from 40 patients demonstrated a significant CCΔCD, whereas cells from nine patients exhibited an increase in CC uptake following CD stimulation.” 5. Throughout the manuscript, please replace the term “heart catheterization” with the more precise and clinically appropriate term “coronary angiography.” 6. The sentence “Additionally, CD increases CC solubility and promotes the formation of oxysterols, which activate liver-X-receptor (LXR)” should be either supported by a reference or removed, as there are no LXR-related experiments reported in the current study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Cyclodextrin reduces cholesterol crystal uptake by circulating monocytes in patients undergoing coronary angiography. PONE-D-25-33939R1 Dear Dr. Luebbering, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marc W. Merx, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: no further comments, the authors have addressed all points of concern from the original submission adequately Reviewer #2: The authors have targeted all remarks from Reviewer 1 and me in a point-by-point rebuttal document. Most points were adequately targeted and the manuscript has improved. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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