Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 21, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Zarrinkamar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Ozra Tabatabaei-Malazy Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This remarkable and comprehensive work reports on the far-reaching consequences of metabolic syndrome in women after they enter the monophase, because it represents the main burden in the field of NCDs on the different dimensions of health. The results can highlight the importance of this risk factor and its potential impact on women after the fertility period in Iran. I have made a few comments on this manuscript, consideration of which may improve the quality and clarity of your reports: In the abstract, you should specify the exact time frame for the literature and database search, e.g. (August 2010 to April 2025). In the introduction, in lines 54 and 55, you mentioned the Burdens of MetS in Iran, for more clarity you need to give the year of this rate and statistics. Two more sentences about the components and criteria for MetS in the first paragraph of the discussion could be informative for readers and researchers. The exclusion criteria (number 4) for study selection should be rewritten and simplified, e.g. what you mean by “overlapping population” In the data extraction section (line;146), “number of postmenopausal females” should be replaced by “proportion of females….”. In the section on participants, you should specify the minimum age of female participants or the age of participants, as the start of the monophase in different population groups. Regarding the significant contribution of participant age to heterogeneity, a subgroup analysis based on age has been suggested to improve the significance of the pooled prevalence you report. The periods of the studies should also be considered in your subgroup analysis. Because if there is a trend in prevalence over time, it should be discussed further. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, The manuscript highlight the need for high quality evidence regarding the prevalence of metabolic syndrome in postmenopausal women in Iran - a subset of the general population which is often neglected despite an optimal availability for delivery primary primary health care services. The following recommendations for revisions are made in hopes that the final manuscript may better address the study aims: 1. A significant amount of time has lapsed since the previously mentioned systematic reviews of prevalence, and results from the PERSIAN cohort - although of high epidemiological value - are not the sole reason for the need of an updated appraisal of the evidence. Please highlight other newly published evidence in the introduction. 2. Please provide further justifications for targeting the prevalence of MetS in postmenopausal women in the manuscript introduction. Particularly, evidence regarding coverage of related services, control, and under-diagnosis - if applicable. Furthermore the introduction would benefit from inclusion of specific policies the current update might impact would impact. 3. Retrospective assurance of the inclusion of all studies included in previous review on this topic and the evaluation of each study's citing and cited literature is recommended for a comprehensive review - if not already performed. 4. Recent evaluations have shown possible fundamental errors in interpretation caused by the use of the LFK index as a measure of small-study bias. The use of Egger's test with a higher than conventional threshold of significance (< 0.1 or 0.2 depending on the number of included studies) might be more appropriate. Alternatively selection models may be employed to evaluate for publication bias. The heterogeneity found in prevalence reports from different studies may additionally be a significant factor in identification of small-study bias via plot asymmetry approaches. Smaller studies may indeed be affected by sampling bias (bearing in mind that these studies are usually not population-based) leading to skewed estimates. The suggestion of publication bias when the target effect is prevalence might in turn be less expected as higher prevalence reports might not directly motivate publication. Further evaluation of such a possibility and its incorporation into the manuscript discussion would be appreciated. - Schwarzer G, Rücker G, Semaca C. LFK index does not reliably detect small-study effects in meta-analysis: A simulation study. Res Synth Methods. 2024 Jul;15(4):603-615. doi: 10.1002/jrsm.1714. Epub 2024 Mar 11. PMID: 38467140. 5. Interpretation of meta-regression results when the number if included studies is insufficient (<10 per adjusted variable) might be subject to type II errors. Interpretations arising from subgroup analyses may be more appropriate under such circumstances. For example the proposition that age has no significant effect on the prevalence of MetS seems to be both counterintuitive and not supported by the evidence. Additionally, all subgroups evaluated have also demonstrated a high degree of heterogeneity (inconsistency) in their respective estimates. Therefore other possible sources of heterogeneity should be explored or discussed in review limitations. One such variables to explore are changes in MetS prevalence according to the timeframe of the included studies - as the identified heterogeneity may be in fact indicative of underlying trends in the prevalence of MetS. More recent reports may have similarly benefited from better methodology and reporting leading to the proposition of "higher prevalence in high-quality studies". At minimum a subgroup analysis stratifying studies by study time-frame seems to be warranted. 6. The review title highlight the PRISMA compliance of the manuscript. Appraisal of the quality of evidence (certainty) is an oft-neglected and essential step in ensuring PRISMA compliance. Although the broadly used GRADE approach may not be optimized for meta-analyses of prevalence, several modifications/alternatives may be explored. Use of GRADE with ad hoc modifications is similarly not without merit. - Yousefifard M, Shafiee A. Should the reporting certainty of evidence for meta-analysis of observational studies using GRADE be revisited? Int J Surg. 2023 Feb 1;109(2):129-130. doi: 10.1097/JS9.0000000000000114. - Borges Migliavaca C, Stein C, Colpani V, Barker TH, Munn Z, Falavigna M; Prevalence Estimates Reviews – Systematic Review Methodology Group (PERSyst). How are systematic reviews of prevalence conducted? A methodological study. BMC Med Res Methodol. 2020 Apr 26;20(1):96. doi: 10.1186/s12874-020-00975-3. Kind regards, Reviewer Reviewer #3: This manuscript explores an important topic in women’s health by systematically reviewing and quantifying the prevalence of metabolic syndrome (MetS) among Iranian postmenopausal women. The inclusion of recent data from large-scale cohorts and the effort to update and improve on prior reviews are notable strengths. Additionally, the use of subgroup and meta-regression analyses to explore heterogeneity adds analytical depth. However, there are several areas where revisions are necessary to improve clarity, interpretability, and overall scientific rigor. Abstract • Improve clarity by explicitly stating the role of study quality, setting, and age as sources of heterogeneity. • The conclusion could extend beyond screening to mention broader public health or preventive implications. Introduction • The background is comprehensive but could be more concise and focused on the rationale for this study. • Better articulation is needed regarding how this study improves upon previous reviews. Avoid simply citing inclusion of the PERSIAN cohort—highlight methodological differences more explicitly. Methods • The POLIS criteria should be defined more clearly and not just listed as an acronym. • While the decision to prioritize the NCEP ATP III definition is acceptable, a brief note on its limitations (e.g., generalizability or sensitivity) would strengthen the justification. • Clarify whether study selection and data extraction were done independently by two reviewers. • The scoring thresholds used for the JBI tool (e.g., 7–9 = high quality) should be referenced or justified. Results • The pooled prevalence estimate is clear, but the interpretation should be more cautious given the extreme heterogeneity (I² > 98%). • While sensitivity and publication bias analyses were conducted appropriately, their implications deserve more emphasis. • Figure 2 (forest plot) needs to be regenerated in higher resolution. Font size and axis clarity are insufficient for publication. • In Table 2, regional labels (Region 1–5) should be linked clearly to Supplementary File 2 or relabeled more meaningfully. Discussion • The discussion covers relevant comparisons across countries and possible mechanisms, but some sections are overly speculative (e.g., attributing prevalence differences to national dietary patterns). These need to be rewritten with more caution and supporting evidence. • The biological discussion, while accurate, is too detailed in parts and detracts from the epidemiological focus of the paper. • The interpretation of meta-regression findings should better acknowledge the limitations of covariate-level analyses with small numbers of studies. • Greater attention should be given to why study quality and setting were associated with different prevalence estimates. Implications and Limitations • The suggestion to incorporate routine screening into clinical practice is reasonable, but discussion of real-world feasibility, resource constraints, and specific implementation pathways in the Iranian context would add value. • The limitations section is appropriate but could be expanded to discuss misclassification of menopausal status or potential biases in self-reported age at menopause. • The time span across studies may reflect secular trends in MetS prevalence, which is not fully addressed. Language and Presentation • Numerous grammatical and stylistic issues are present throughout. The manuscript would benefit significantly from professional English editing. • Figures and tables require formatting improvements for consistency and legibility. Conclusion • The conclusion appropriately summarizes the main findings but could be expanded slightly to mention the need for targeted public health policies or future longitudinal research. Reviewer #4: 1. In the introduction, it would be helpful to also provide a global perspective on the issue. This way, we can see it is particularly important in Iran compared with the global context. 2. In the Methods section, it is mentioned that one of the eligible study designs was clinical trial. Could you please explain this. 3. In the table, there are some abbreviations that do not seem to be commonly used. Please write the full term instead. (for example, instead of 'AAM,' write 'mean menopausal age). Also, please mention the units for all variables and use a consistent number of decimal places throughout the table. 4. Please clarify the institution based and public based definitions in methods section. Also briefly discuss the five regions of Iran in methods section. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Dear Dr. Zarrinkamar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 20 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for sharing a revised and improved manuscript. It now has scientific and methodological quality for the insight of other researchers. Reviewer #2: The manuscript revised perfectly, and all revisions are made. The revised version should be accepted .................................................................................................................................................. Reviewer #3: The authors have made clear improvements in response to earlier feedback. The revised manuscript is more coherent, methodologically transparent, and analytically detailed, especially regarding heterogeneity and the influence of study quality and setting. Nevertheless, several important issues remain that should be addressed to strengthen interpretability, contextual depth, and overall presentation quality before publication. • How might the authors expand the conclusion to better describe how these findings inform public health or preventive strategies in Iran? • What are the main limitations of the NCEP ATP III definition in this context—particularly regarding sensitivity and applicability to Middle Eastern populations? • Given the very high heterogeneity (I² = 98.6%), should the pooled prevalence be interpreted more cautiously as an approximate national estimate rather than a precise figure? • Are there plans to improve the resolution and legibility of the figures, especially the forest and Doi plots, for publication quality? • Can the biological explanation in the Discussion be further streamlined to maintain focus on epidemiological interpretation and variability across studies? • What factors might explain the association between study quality, study setting, and prevalence estimates—such as sampling design, representativeness, or analytical rigor? • Would it be possible to include a brief discussion on the feasibility of implementing routine MetS screening in Iran, considering resource constraints or access challenges? • Have the authors considered potential misclassification of menopausal status and bias in self-reported age at menopause, and how these might influence subgroup or meta-regression findings? • Could the temporal span of the included studies have introduced secular trends in lifestyle or healthcare access that partly explain heterogeneity? • Might it be helpful to mention that future research could use longitudinal or time-stratified analyses to explore temporal changes in MetS prevalence? • Will the authors review tables and figures for consistent formatting and ensure sufficient clarity in labels and legends? • Is another round of professional language editing planned to address the remaining minor grammatical inconsistencies? • Finally, would the conclusion benefit from a short statement emphasizing the need for longitudinal monitoring or national-level interventions to address the high burden of MetS among postmenopausal women? 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