Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 24, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting your manuscript. After careful review, the manuscript has been evaluated as requiring Major Revisions before it can be considered for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for targeting this novel idea. To my knowledge, this is the first study evaluating TyG-BMI in a palliative care cohort against a broad panel of indices. However, there are several considerations regarding the development of the model and overfitting, and parallel effective mechanisms as well as your strong and rigid tone, writing about the potentials of this association you found. Since it is a single center study with limited population and so many variables to be included; your interpretation should be more cautiously. In addition, the manuscript does not quantify how many were excluded or assess and how this might bias results. As I told you aforementionedly, the multivariable models adjust for age, sex, diagnosis category, and several comorbidities. However, only 30 patients died (9.4%), yet the regression models include many covariates (at least 1 index + age + sex + ~6 comorbidities + diagnosis categories). This yields a very low events-per-variable ratio (~3 events per variable), which risks overfitting and unstable estimates. For example, the adjusted OR for TyG-BMI predicting 30-day mortality is reported as 2.38 (95% CI 1.78–3.18), but this may be unreliable given model complexity versus only 30 events. The authors should acknowledge the limited events and consider simplifying models or using penalized regression. TyG-BMI is inherently related to glucose metabolism and thus to diabetes. The main multivariable models include diabetes as a covariate, yet the key finding is that TyG-BMI works especially well in diabetics. Adjusting for diabetes may attenuate TyG-BMI’s effect or introduce multicollinearity (since many high TyG-BMI values will come from diabetics). It may be more appropriate to present models without including diabetes as a covariate when evaluating TyG-BMI, and then separately discuss differences by diabetes status (as the authors do). TyG-BMI had higher AUCs (e.g. 0.87 vs 0.78 for mortality), with p<0.001. While statistically significant, the practical importance of these differences should be addressed. For example, an AUC difference of 0.09 (from 0.78 to 0.87) may be modest in clinical terms. The authors describe this as a “clinically meaningful improvement”, but they should explain how this translates into patient care or decision-making. Your paper identifies TyG-BMI cut-offs (220 for mortality, 235 for sepsis) based on Youden’s index in this sample. It is of course useful for hypothesis-generation, but these thresholds are data-driven and likely overfit. It is optimal to validate them in an external cohort (as you mentioned in your study as well) before clinical use and before a strong interpretation. So I recommend softening language (e.g. “potentially useful thresholds”) and emphasizing validation. The text comments that TyG-BMI’s OR is “50%” higher than AIP’s OR (2.38 vs 1.58). This relative comparison of ORs across models can be misleading, since ORs depend on the distribution of indices and adjustment factors. It might be clearer to report that TyG-BMI had a larger effect size than any other index, without using percentages of ratios. The focus should remain on confidence intervals and significance rather than on the 50% figure. In discussion section, there is an inconsistency in the manuscript. In Results, 30-day mortality is 30 patients (9.4%), but the Discussion incorrectly refers to a “30-day mortality rate of 30%”. This appears to be a typo. This should be corrected, as it could mislead readers about the cohort’s risk level. The Discussion provides a strong rationale for TyG-BMI’s performance (insulin resistance, inflammation, etc.). While plausible, these explanations are speculative. The authors should clarify that mechanistic links are hypothetical given observational data. They do note that causality cannot be inferred, which is good, but some phrases (e.g. “pathophysiological plausibility”) should be presented as suggestion rather than fact. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. This is a strong and well-executed retrospective study addressing an important and underexplored question in palliative care. The comments below are intended to enhance clarity, reproducibility, and interpretative balance, taking into account the inherent constraints of retrospective data. Specification of Units in Index Formulas While the formulas for the cardiometabolic indices are clearly presented, units are not consistently specified for all components. Because several indices are unit-dependent (e.g., lipid measures and blood cell counts), explicitly stating units for each formula would improve reproducibility and facilitate external validation. Redundancy and Overlap Among Indices Several of the compared indices share overlapping biological or mathematical components (e.g., TG/HDL, AIP, CRI indices; NLR, PLR, SII). While this does not detract from the comparative analysis, acknowledging this overlap in the Discussion would help readers interpret why certain indices perform similarly and contextualize TyG-BMI’s relative advantage. Adjustment for Acute Illness Severity The multivariable models appropriately adjust for demographic factors, primary diagnosis category, and major comorbidities. It is recognized that additional markers of acute illness severity (e.g., organ dysfunction scores, ICU-level interventions) may not have been uniformly available in this retrospective dataset. The authors are encouraged to explicitly acknowledge this limitation and discuss the possibility that TyG-BMI may partly reflect acute physiological stress at admission rather than baseline metabolic risk alone. Interpretation of ROC-Derived Cut-offs The identified TyG-BMI cut-offs are clearly derived using established methods. However, as these thresholds are sample-specific and lack external validation, the language describing them as “actionable” could be tempered and framed as hypothesis-generating pending validation in independent cohorts. Mechanical Ventilation as an Outcome In palliative care settings, the decision to initiate mechanical ventilation may be influenced by goals-of-care discussions and institutional practice in addition to disease severity. Clarifying this context and briefly discussing its potential impact on interpretation would strengthen the manuscript. Fasting Status of Laboratory Measurements The TyG index assumes fasting glucose and triglyceride measurements. Given the palliative care context, where true fasting conditions may not always be feasible, a short clarification or discussion of this potential source of variability would be helpful. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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