Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 9, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-18701-->-->Do 'leaders' in change sound different from 'laggers’? The perceptual similarity of New Zealand English voices-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Sheard, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents an important contribution to sociophonetics and perceptual sociolinguistics. It offers a novel approach to understanding how listeners differentiate between speakers based on ongoing phonetic change in New Zealand English. However I have certain questions in my mind, which are as follows: (i) Why was a two-dimensional solution chosen for the MDS analysis without reporting standard diagnostics such as stress values, a scree plot, or Shepard diagram? (ii) Given that the GAMM explains only 18.4% of the variance, have the authors considered including additional predictors such as voice quality features (e.g., H1-H2, jitter, shimmer) or lexical/semantic content to improve model fit? (iii) The term "markedness" is central to the discussion of pitch and articulation rate—how is this concept operationalized or validated in the study? (iv) Have the authors conducted formal statistical tests (e.g., permutation MANOVA or cluster validity indices) to assess whether the perceptual clusters identified via MDS (e.g., leaders vs. laggers) are statistically distinct? (v) How evenly were the 703 speaker pairs distributed among participants, and how might any imbalance have affected the construction of the perceptual similarity matrix? (vi) Given that the final sample size (n = 133) falls short of the preregistered goal (n = 180–200), has a post hoc power analysis been conducted to assess the impact of reduced sample size on the reliability of findings? Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "Do 'leaders' in change sound different from 'laggers’? The perceptual similarity of New Zealand English voices" presents a perceptual sociophonetic study exploring whether listeners perceive systematic differences between speakers positioned as 'leaders' or 'laggers' in ongoing vowel changes in New Zealand English. Through a well-designed pairwise similarity rating task using spontaneous speech from a controlled speaker group, the authors use Multi-Dimensional Scaling (MDS) and Generalized Additive Mixed Models (GAMMs) to investigate the perceptual salience of vowel systems, articulation rate, and pitch. The study contributes both methodologically and theoretically to sociophonetics and sociolinguistic perception research. Strengths Innovative Design: The use of spontaneous speech in a pairwise similarity task is commendable, avoiding the artificiality of matched guise techniques and reflecting natural listener judgments. Robust Statistical Analysis: The combination of MDS and GAMM offers a multifaceted understanding of how pitch, rate, and vowel changes contribute to perceptual similarity. Clear Theoretical Framing: The manuscript builds well on prior work in NZE variation (e.g., Brand et al., Hurring et al.) and links production data to perceptual salience. Transparency and Open Science: Pre-registration and full availability of data and code via GitHub enhance replicability and credibility. Clarity and Structure: The writing is well-structured, with careful explanation of technical methods, aiding interdisciplinary comprehension. Weaknesses and Suggestions for Improvement Back-Vowel Configuration Interpretation: The null finding for back-vowel configuration is acknowledged but remains somewhat under-explored. The authors could enrich the discussion by more explicitly considering how perceptual salience may differ across vowel classes or whether methodological limitations (e.g., short stimuli) may have obscured perceptual effects. Social Meaning Attribution: While the paper remains agnostic about whether pitch and rate are socially evaluated versus acoustically salient, a clearer separation or operationalization of these constructs (perhaps in future work) would improve clarity. Sample Size and Power: The authors mention falling short of the preregistered participant target. Although analyses are still valid, a brief power analysis (even retrospective) would help assure readers of the robustness of perceptual inferences. Stimulus Contextual Control: Although spontaneous speech enhances ecological validity, were there any checks for potential lexical or topical influences (e.g., emotionally marked words) that might bias perception? Figure Interpretability: Figures 2C and 3–4 could benefit from more intuitive legends or speaker clustering highlights to help visually align MDS output with theoretical interpretations (leaders/laggers, pitch, rate). Minor Points Some citations in the literature review could be updated with more recent perceptual sociophonetic studies from other English varieties or multilingual contexts for comparative value. Ensure consistent terminology (e.g., “speaker pitch” vs. “mean pitch”) throughout for clarity. Recommendation Accept with Minor Revisions This is a high-quality, thoughtfully executed manuscript that significantly contributes to sociophonetic perception research. I recommend minor revisions focused on strengthening discussion points and clarifying visuals rather than methodological changes. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Urooj Fatima Alvi, Assistant Prpfessor, Applied Linguistics urooj.alvi@ue.edu.pk ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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PONE-D-25-18701R1-->-->Do 'leaders' in change sound different from 'laggers’? The perceptual similarity of New Zealand English voices-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Sheard, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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