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Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. After careful peer review, your manuscript shows promise but requires major revision. Please address the reviewers’ and editor’s concerns, particularly those relating to study design, handling of missing data, statistical reporting, power considerations, and clarity of presentation. Detailed reviewer comments are provided below; I look forward to receiving a revised version that thoroughly incorporates this feedback. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This article delves into the value of a new inflammatory and all-cause mortality biomarker, NLR, in a large cohort of anemic patients. The authors demonstrate its independent value when analyzed this ratio as both a categorical variable (by dividing the study cohort into tertiles) and a quantitative variable, successfully identifying a cutoff point for increased mortality. The study also conducts subgroup analyses, finding that the biomarker's value is even more relevant in certain morbidities, such as diabetes and CHD (coronary heart disease). The importance of these findings leads me to recommend its publication in the journal, but I would like to suggest some minor changes to the authors * In the study design, only individuals with anemia were included. The study's message is that in anemic patients, this variable influences mortality. However, in my opinion, it cannot be concluded that anemia is causing this increase in mortality unless compared with a cohort of non-anemic patients. Would it be possible to conduct a comparative analysis between the selected anemic cohort and the excluded non-anemic cohort? In my opinion, this analysis would provide stronger evidence for the important role of anemia in these results. * As the NLR value was the criterion used to create the groups, it's expected that this value would differ between groups. Therefore, there's no need to state this in a sentence in the results (lines 163-165). * Table 1 shows that the percentage of non-smokers and non-drinkers is lower in Group 3, and this information is not presented in the text. * As explained in the statistical analysis section, the comparison between groups is performed using the ANOVA test for continuous variables. If the ANOVA result is significant (meaning you reject the null hypothesis that all group means are equal), then you'll typically need to perform post-hoc tests (also known as "multiple comparison tests") to identify exactly where those differences lie (e.g., is Group A different from Group B, or Group B from Group C, etc.). When authors say (lines 162-163): "Group 3 exhibited the highest prevalence of these conditions" after performing an ANOVA (which tells you if there's any overall difference between groups), it strongly implies they have performed post-hoc tests (also known as pairwise comparisons). To be able to say definitively that "Group 3 has the highest prevalence" in a statistically sound way, they would need to have compared Group 3 to Group 1 and Group 3 to Group 2 (and possibly Group 1 to Group 2 as well) using pairwise comparisons. These post-hoc tests adjust for the problem of multiple comparisons, preventing an inflated Type I error rate. Have the authors performed a post-hoc pairwise comparison? If a post-hoc test was used, it should be specified in the 'Statistical Analysis' subsection under 'Materials and Methods'. If was not performed, this sentece should be not appear in the results. Reviewer #2: This is a well-structured, observational analysis using the NHANES dataset to examine whether the neutrophil-to-lymphocyte ratio (NLR) predicts all-cause mortality in individuals with anemia. The study is timely, methodologically sound, and addresses a relevant clinical question. Reviewer #3: dear author, The paper is well written and the topic is interesting. The simple N/L ratio as biomarker of inflammation is easy to perform and available in every lab. A question remains under consideration which is the high rate of comorbidity in the group 3 with the highest N/L ratio which is the real cause of death in this group and not necessarily the high N/L ratio. I think its better to analyse a group of patients with the exact same comorbidity plus the anemia and then compare the N/L ratio to find out its real effect as a predictor of mortality. However, the paper is worth to be published. Reviewer #4: Rewrite abstract without abbreviation unknown. Follow journal stile. Rewrite references with journal stile. Rewrite abstract with know abbreviation. Increase figures number to clear fyi manuscript. Rewrite references with journal stile. Reviewer #5: A close reading of Cheng and colleagues' analysis of NHANES data (1999–2018) reveals a thoughtful attempt to define the neutrophil-to-lymphocyte ratio (NLR) as a mortality predictor in anemia. The authors drew on 3,212 anemic adults, modeled NLR continuously (breakpoint at 1.475) and by tertiles, and used Cox regression, spline analyses, and subgroup assessments to explore its prognostic value. The authors used appropriate statistical approaches to match their research goals. However, they didn't run an a priori power calculation and relied on complete-case analysis rather than imputing missing values, risking a selection bias. On the plus side, they frame anemia's public health impact, make a solid case for examining NLR, and report their effect estimates alongside confidence intervals in a straightforward, easy-to-interpret manner. Writing is generally lucid, but occasional imprecisions, like labeling correlations as "mechanisms," distract readers. The Discussion situates findings among related disease contexts and notes design limitations; however, expanding on socioeconomic and other confounders would strengthen transparency. The authors are invited to consider the following suggestions: 1. Sample Size & Power = Acknowledge the lack of an a priori calculation; if feasible, add a retrospective justification or sensitivity analysis to reassure readers of adequate power. 2. Missing Data and Robustness Checks = Clarify how much data was missing for each key variable and why those cases were excluded. At least, run a sensitivity analysis comparing complete-case results with a simple imputation approach or, ideally, apply multiple imputations to show that your main findings hold. = To further demonstrate stability, try alternative NLR cut-points or adjust for a few extra covariates and collect these extra models in a brief supplement. 3. Validating the Prognostic Model = Verify the proportional-hazards assumption using Schoenfeld residuals or time-interaction tests, and if you spot any violations, consider stratified Cox models or allow key covariates to vary over time. = Add calibration measures (for example, calibration slopes or plots) so readers can see how well predicted risks match observed outcomes, and, if possible, include a decision curve or net-reclassification analysis to illustrate real-world utility. 4. Competing Risks and Hidden Confounders = Acknowledge that deaths from non-cardiovascular causes could influence your all-cause mortality results; if you have cause-specific data, a Fine–Gray competing-risks model would clarify those nuances. = In the Limitations section, mention unmeasured factors, such as socioeconomic status, nutritional status, medication use, or inflammatory conditions, and, where you can, adjust for proxies like income-to-poverty ratio. 5. Reporting Standards = In your Methods, note that you've adhered to the STROBE checklist, covering ethics approval, participant selection, missing data handling, and sensitivity analyses. = For the NLR threshold work, reference RECORD (data-linkage validation) and TRIPOD (any internal validation you performed, such as bootstrapping or cross-validation). 6. Evidence Certainty = In the Discussion, be upfront about the overall certainty, "Low to Moderate" by GRADE and Level 2 under Oxford CEBM, to help readers see how design, bias potential, and indirectness shape your conclusions and their placement in the research hierarchy. 7. Generalizability and Future Directions = Acknowledge that NHANES excludes institutionalized or ill individuals, which may limit external validity within more general populations. = Suggest validating the identified NLR cut-point in other cohorts (clinical registries) or building a multivariable prognostic score that combines NLR with other biomarkers. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. lin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #6: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #7: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #8: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #9: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #10: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #6: Partly Reviewer #7: Yes Reviewer #8: Partly Reviewer #9: Yes Reviewer #10: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes Reviewer #8: No Reviewer #9: Yes Reviewer #10: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: No Reviewer #8: Yes Reviewer #9: Yes Reviewer #10: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes Reviewer #8: Yes Reviewer #9: Yes Reviewer #10: Yes ********** Reviewer #6: Hello This is a good study and it has examined good data. Considering the results of the study and the relationship between mortality and NLR levels, more studies should be conducted in this field to find the main and final cause of this relationship. It is a good study to start with, but more studies are definitely needed in the future. Good luck. Reviewer #7: In comparing the original and revised manuscripts, it is clear that the authors have improved both scientific accuracy and clarity of terminology. In the first submission, the study was framed as a “cross-sectional” analysis, which was technically incorrect since the use of mortality follow-up data from NHANES defines the design as a retrospective cohort study. This has been appropriately corrected in the revision. Terms such as “neutrophil-to-lymphocyte ratio (NLR)” are consistently defined at first use, and the revision more precisely introduces NLR as an “inflammation index derived from leukocyte counts,” which is a scientifically correct framing. Abbreviations (e.g., CKD, CHD, DM) are now consistently defined and used, whereas in the original draft, definitions were inconsistently placed. The revision also improves the accuracy of statistical language, distinguishing “odds ratio (OR)” from “hazard ratio (HR)” according to the regression type, a critical refinement that ensures terms are not misapplied. The statistical methodology terminology has also been strengthened. In the first draft, the authors mentioned that Group 3 “exhibited the highest prevalence of comorbidities” after ANOVA testing, which was methodologically inappropriate, as ANOVA alone does not justify post hoc claims of “highest.” This statement was removed in the revision, reflecting better use of statistical terminology. Furthermore, the revised version clarifies the use of “restricted cubic spline” and “breakpoint analysis,” ensuring these specialized terms are explained and applied correctly. In the original, “non-linear regression” was used without elaboration, potentially confusing readers; now, the explanation links spline modeling directly to the identification of a threshold (NLR = 1.475), aligning terminology with accepted epidemiological practices. The proper distinction between “multivariable adjustment” (indicating multiple covariates in a single model) and “multivariate analysis” (implying multiple outcomes) is observed in the revision, which corrects a subtle but important terminological misuse common in biomedical literature In terms of results reporting, terminology has shifted from vague to precise. The original abstract conclusion used the phrase “substantially higher mortality,” which is both non-quantitative and subjective. The revision replaces this with a quantified risk statement (“25% higher mortality above the threshold”), which is methodologically correct and uses terms appropriately. The authors also now differentiate “tertiles” of NLR (a categorical stratification) from “continuous spline modeling” (a parametric approach), avoiding the earlier blending of categorical and continuous risk language. Subgroup analysis is now described with correct use of “effect modification” and “interaction terms,” whereas the original loosely described stratified findings without clarifying the formal statistical test. This distinction is essential and shows improved maturity in statistical reporting Nevertheless, some issues persist in scientific terminology. For example, the revised manuscript still describes the study as identifying a “critical threshold” at NLR = 1.475. While the statistical model indeed suggests an inflection point, epidemiologically this should be framed as a “data-derived threshold” or “risk inflection point,” since true biological thresholds require external validation. Similarly, while the authors appropriately report “all-cause mortality,” they occasionally imply prognostic causality that goes beyond observational design limits. Terms such as “predictor” are acceptable in a cohort context, but phrases suggesting “prognostic biomarker” should be moderated with acknowledgment of residual confounding. Finally, while the revision provides “sensitivity analyses,” it still does not employ multiple imputation for missing data, and thus the claim of “robustness” should be qualified. These minor terminological refinements would further enhance the scientific precision of the work. Reviewer #8: The scientific scope of using only anemia as a predictor to the mortality rate in patients with NLR defects is untenable. Extensive data analysis on anemia and other parameters is needed to validate relevance of this study. Reviewer #9: The authors present a compelling analysis on the prognostic value of the Neutrophil-to-Lymphocyte Ratio (NLR) in anemic individuals, using a large population-based cohort. The strength of this paper lies in its clear hypothesis, sound methodological approach, and the clinical importance of identifying simple, readily available biomarkers for risk stratification in this patient population. The manuscript is well-written, with a logical flow and clear presentation of results, including comprehensive tables and figures. The statistical analysis appears rigorous and appropriate for the study's objectives. It is evident that significant effort has been invested in ensuring the quality of this work. I have reviewed the authors' point-by-point responses to the previous reviewers' comments and the corresponding revisions to the manuscript. The authors have addressed all concerns thoroughly and effectively, strengthening the paper. In its current form, the manuscript is of high quality and makes a valuable contribution. I support its publication without any further revisions. Reviewer #10: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #6: No Reviewer #7: Yes: Alireza Abbasi Reviewer #8: Yes: PRINCE ANIM ADDO Reviewer #9: Yes: Weaam Abdallah Reviewer #10: Yes: Sarah Samy Abdelghany ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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The Neutrophil-to-Lymphocyte Ratio as a Predictor of All-Cause Mortality in Individuals with Anemia: A Population-Based Study PONE-D-25-19337R2 Dear Dr. lin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Afshin Heidari, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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