Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2025 |
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Kind regards, Johannes Schwabe Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): 1. Theoretical Foundation: I agree with both reviewers that the theoretical foundation for your work needs improvement, and this applies to the very grounding of your work all across to final discussion. It is okay to not derive specific hypotheses, but your work does not exist in theoretical vacuum either. Relational models theory, moral foundations theory, and even research on moral identity can be drawn upon in the introduction and speaks to why certain domains might be more or less important in judging others moral character. For example, Haidt speaks about how violations in certain domains can disproportionately undermine global judgments because they signal "core flaws" (e.g., dishonesty). Also consider the work done on differential judgments of deontological versus utilitarian wrong- and right-doers (e.g., Jim Everett's work on this). Your research is currently presented without much of this context, which makes it hard for readers to understand the significance of your work and how it speaks to other findings. 2. I agree with reviewer 2 that the way you arrive at the domains studied needs to be more transparent. The methods underlying the domain selection are not clear enough, and we should learn a bit more about why two and why exactly those two frameworks were chosen to begin with. 3. The authors report the supplementary analysis as evidence that "the patterns cannot account for the results of Study 1". I tend to disagree. There are clear differences, and I feel like these results underline a central problem. Just because the positive and negative variants of a behavior create more polarized ratings on moral characters, why can we infer that the associated domain is more central for moral character judgments? Especially in combination with the fact that the behaviors were not sampled from a representative pool of all behavior potentially representing each domain, but arrived at in a fairly untransparent bottom-up approach, I do not see how we can really infer between-domain comparisons. This needs to be addressed more comprehensively. 4. The lack of theorizing and embedding the research in the literature leads to a few issues. For example, in the pre-text to Study 2, the hypothesis appears, that there would be differences in how domain-specific behaviors influence participants' willingness to cooperate with social target. This is apparently purely data-driven, but there is a wealth of literature that would speak to that topic. This also relates to the findings how positive behaviors were perceived as driven more by targets' dispositions than negative behaviors. This conflicts with other studies consistently reporting that violations are given more weight in character judgments. Such apparent contradictions need to be transparent and discussed comprehensively. Minor comments 1. The power analysis of Study 1 is not well-founded. At this point, it is neither clear which exact effect you are interested in, which effect size would be reasonable to expect, neither which statistical test you are going to apply to test it. If this was just a convenience sample with no clear pre-specified hypothesis and power analysis, please just state that. If not, please describe the underlying assumptions more clearly. 2. The use of difference scores and the exact statistical method planned should be explained in the methods section, and not in the results. 3. The figures are not self-explanatory. The direction of the differences is not clear. 4. Please report tables detailing the Bonferroni-Tests in the supplementary material and refer to them when talking about their results. 5. When comparing means, report the means and their SD in-text, not just the mean difference and CIs. 6. Generally, please report the individual variables (positive and negative, actor versus situation attribution, etc.) in the supplementary materials, and potentially even replace the current bar charts by dumb bell plots or similar, depicting both individual values as well as the differences. 7. A clearer rationale for why we need the cognitive load paradigm is important would make it easier for readers to understand how Study 3 adds to the picture. 8. Please include standard means and correlations tables for all Studies, where possible based on individual variables, and add to the supplementary material if too clunky for the main manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Author, Thanks for your manuscript. It was a pleasure to read it as it is taughtfully wel written and conceptually well structured. At some point I found it a bit resumed and with a feeling that this could even fit in three seperate studies a bit more structured and detailed. As I was advancing in the review I missed an introduction to the moral domains and reflections through the studies how and why these moral domains had relatevely lower results then the Property and Equality domain. There was too much focus in these 2 moral domains throughout the study. I liked that you tought carefully in your limitations about the cultural landscape, but I missed the same carefull thinking on the characteristics of your participants (e.g. gender. In study 1 it amounted to 83.3% of the sample. Does this influeced the result?) Some minor reviews along the article: Introduction: - No refs. "Different days bring different moral tales..." -> ref here! - "Still remains unclear..." -> To whom? From which starting point? Ref. Morality And Social Life - "Violating the relational..." - ref Morality and Social Judgement - "These findings ..." - Well written - Good sub-chapter Ethics and Data availability - The first link is not well formatted. Remove the linking from the ')' Method / Participants - (Faul et al., 2009) - Ref bad formatted Materials / Moral Domains - "The current studies used a set of moral domains..." - Why? - Table 1 - Bad formatted, Table 1 should appear right after the reference. Study 2 / Participants - "Cognition check" - which check? Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled “Separate and unequal: Moral domains differ in corresponding social judgments of others” that was submitted to PLOS One. It deals with the question of whether different moral domains differ in their effect on social judgements and also examines differences in their effect on internal/external attributions and willingness to cooperate. I find the idea raised by the authors thought-provoking and the studies generally well-executed. However, I have some concerns that make me wonder whether this research is informative enough on its own to warrant publication. Regardless of the outcome, I wish the authors all the best for their future research on this intriguing topic. Major concerns 1. In the introduction, the authors state that there are distinct moral domains. However, they do not explain which frameworks exist in this regard and which one(s) they base their research on. More information regarding this is given in the Materials section of Study 1. However, since this information is relevant to all studies and important for understanding the basic idea behind the research, I suggest presenting it in the introduction section. Further information regarding the following questions should be added: Which are the most important frameworks of moral domains? Why were the two (Curry, Chesters, and Van Lissa’s MAC model and Rai and Fiske’s Relational Model) chosen? Why is the research based on both instead of choosing one? How is the theoretical idea underlying the present research (domains differing in their impact on social judgement) linked to the ideas presented in these frameworks? While the authors state that there is no research on whether the domains differ in their impact on social judgement, are there theoretically plausible ideas as to why some domains of the chosen frameworks might be more impactful than others? Adding this information would make a much stronger case for the theoretical idea and its translation into the methodology chosen by the authors. 2. Furthermore, I am missing some more information on why attributions were chosen as an additional dependent variable. This should be explained in the introduction as a basis for understanding the goal of the present research. 3. When the authors describe in the Materials section of Study 1 how the domains were chosen, it is not clear to me whether this was based on a separate pilot study. This should be made explicit. Furthermore, the authors used a bottom-up approach to choose their moral domains (i.e., having participants generate behaviors pertaining to the domains from the two frameworks from Curry et al. and Rai & Fiske and subsequently choosing and omitting some of the domains based on other participants’ ratings of these behaviors and potential overlaps). Why is this approach more informative for the author’s research question than choosing one of the frameworks and creating behaviors for all domains that are part of this framework? This would have enabled comprehensively examining one full framework instead of having an incomplete picture of both. An explanation of this should be given in the respective section of Study 1 and the potential drawbacks of picking some but not all domains from each of the frameworks (e.g., different scope of the domains from the two frameworks, risk of not covering all potentially relevant moral domains) should be discussed as a limitation in the General Discussion. 4. While the findings show that there are consistent differences in the effect of the chosen domains on social judgements, the authors did not investigate why some of the domains might be more important for social judgements than others, and the use of some but not all domains from two different frameworks makes it more difficult to deduct potential explanations. As the research is exploratory, the authors do not provide any theoretical explanation as to why some domains should be more impactful than others, either. In the General Discussion, the authors discuss this; yet, the research they cite does not provide a convincing explanation as to why some domains should be *more* impactful than others. They merely emphasize that the Equality and Property domains should be relevant for judgements that people make. An additional study investigating why some domains are more impactful than others could make this research much more informative. I leave it to the Editor to decide whether this is a necessary addition to the present research. If this is not further empirically investigated, I would be interested in a more detailed explanation in the General Discussion as to why the Equality and Property domains might be more impactful than the others. Minor concerns 1. According to the study materials for all three studies, an additional two items were assessed together with the attribution items that were reported in the manuscript. Were these originally part of the attribution measurement and left out post hoc (if so why) or were they used to measure a different construct? 2. The main text states that that difference scores were calculated for the correspondent inferences. Yet, the y-axis in the graphs is titled Estimated Marginal Means and does not include any negative values. 3. A different term was used for the Equality/Fairness dimension in the main text compared to the graphs. Please consistently use one term. 4. While the preregistration for Study 3 states that there will be “two between-subjects conditions: one condition where cognitive load is increased by presenting moral stimuli alongside a span task, or one with just the moral stimuli presented alone”, both groups in Study 3 were confronted with a digit memorization task. This deviation should be acknowledged in the manuscript and the reason(s) for the deviation should be explained. 5. There seems to be a mistake in the following sentence: “We suspected that correspondent inferences, or inferences based on others’ behavior [16], made following domain-specific behaviors might highlight variations in how heavily these domains are considered when judging others” (p. 4, lines 79-81). Please correct it or otherwise make the sentence easier to understand. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Pedro Miguel Viegas Fernandes Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Dear Dr. Adams, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. I was able to receive a review from one of the original reviewers. The reviewer was pleased with your changes in response to the reviewer comments. However, they still identified a few questions they would like to see addressed in a final version of the paper. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 07 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this revised version of the manuscript “Separate and unequal: Moral domains differ in corresponding social judgments of others”. Overall, the authors have improved the manuscript. The reworking of the introduction and parts of the study descriptions have made the manuscript much easier to understand. Nevertheless, there are two points that have not been sufficiently addressed. Before raising my remaining concerns, I would like to address one general point: For future revisions, please structure the response letter more clearly: Indicate which points were made by which reviewer and number each of the points made by the reviewers. For any changes you made in the manuscript, please indicate the page numbers and directly quote the changed text. Without doing so, reviewing your changes is very time-consuming and I cannot say with certainty that I have identified each of the (potentially multiple) passages you changed in response to a specific comment. Remaining concerns: 1. The authors now mention that attributions are an additional DV in the introduction section. Apart from mentioning that this should play a role in person perception, however, they do not explain how this is linked to their theoretical idea. Why should different moral domains elicit different attributions? Given that attributions are one of the main DVs, this should be given more weight in the introduction. 2. Regarding your discussion of the different effects of the domains: So far, you have not added a suggestion as to why some domains should be *more* impactful than others. As you rightly point out on p. 26, “differences in how these moral behaviors manifest and their functions within social communities may influence how they are used in social impressions.” Yet, in your previous explanations on pp. 25f., you do not contrast the different manifestations or functions of the domains/behaviors corresponding to domains. You simply point out why the Property and Equality domains are relevant to daily life. However, the interesting factor would be: What differentiates them from the other domains? While you cannot answer this question based on your research and much of your research is exploratory to begin with, it would be interesting to at least derive some assumptions on the differences between the domains in the discussion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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