Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 24, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-38894-->-->Human emotional odours influence horses’ behaviour and physiology-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jardat, I have consulted with two researchers whose expertise closely aligns with your manuscript topic. Both reviewers acknowledge that your study is innovative and has the potential to enhance the field of human-animal interaction research. However, Reviewer 2 raises important concerns about the transparency of your methods and limitations, as well as your interpretations of the results (that do not align with your actual findings). They also encourage you to consider the practical applications of your research in greater depth. Meanwhile, Reviewer 1 has provided some minor grammatical suggestions that can be addressed during your revision process to incorporate their feedback. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 30 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: PLOS ONE Manuscript Number: PONE-D-25-38894 Human emotional odours influence horses’ behaviour and physiology I recommend publication of the manuscript after minor revision Comments The text needs some improvement. Some of the mistakes are mentioned below. Line 113 Human axillary sweat odour was collected from 30 adult participants. Were all participants women? If yes, mention it in the text. If no, mention how men and women were distributed. (I assume men and women smell different, especially in frightening situations.) Line 186-187 Change ‘second assistant were blind to the condition’ to ‘second assistant was blind to the condition’ Line 193 Change ‘in’ to ‘of’ Line 221 Change ‘were’ to ‘was’ Line 252 Change ‘were’ to ‘was’ Line 285 Change ‘an chi-square test’ to ‘a chi-square test’ Line 357 Change ‘on’ to ‘of’ Line 395-389 The sentence is a bit long. Change to ‘However, results indicate a gradient in horses’ reactions across the Joy, Control, and Fear groups, as depicted in graphical representations (Fig3a-d&f); and the detection of significant differences between the Fear group and the Joy group but not between the Fear group and the Control group. This result suggests that horses’ reaction to the control odours was not equivalent to that to that of the odour from the joy context.’ Line 404 Change sentence ‘…suggests physiological responses to interspecific fear-related odours do occur,’ to ‘…suggests that physiological responses to interspecific fear-related odours do occur,’ Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, This study addresses important and increasingly relevant topic in animal cognition and human–animal interaction, investigating the role of human emotional chemosignals in interspecific communication with horses. Overall, the study is well-conceived and conducted, and most results support the authors’ hypotheses, providing novel perspectives on cross-species emotional transmission. However, several aspects require substantial clarification and revision before the manuscript can be considered for publication. Major Revisions Required 1. Clarification on Horses’ Responses to Joy Odours The discussion states that horses showed a "gradient" of responses to joy, control, and fear odours, suggesting that control was not equivalent to joy. However, post hoc tests for individual behaviours (Table 2) do not show significant differences between Joy and Control in most variables, nor between Joy and Fear in some cases (e.g., startle intensity, number of contacts with the novel object). Request: Please revise the language regarding Joy odours. While the absence of significant differences is a valid result and the recommendation of future habituation–discrimination studies is appropriate, the discussion should be more cautious to avoid implying differences where statistical support is lacking. Consider offering a deeper explanation for the lack of clear behavioural response to Joy odours, possibly discussing the lower salience of positive chemosignals or the complexity of “joy” as an interspecific cue compared to “fear”. 2. Cortisol Limitations The lack of significant differences in cortisol levels is an important limitation. Request: While the discussion acknowledges possible reasons (circadian rhythms, short testing duration), this limitation should be more explicitly integrated—either in the Conclusion of the abstract or in a dedicated “Limitations” paragraph within the Discussion. This would help readers properly interpret the scope of the physiological responses. Increasing the sampling period, as suggested, is a valuable recommendation for future studies. 3. Figure and Table Presentation Figure 3: The caption is clear and the inclusion of individual data points is helpful. However, for some subplots (e.g., 3a, 3c), overlapping points make individual data hard to distinguish. Consider jittering or transparency to improve readability. Table 2: For post hoc tests, consider also providing the overall F or χ² statistic of the full GLMM before the pairwise comparisons, to give readers an overview of the group effect before detailing pairwise contrasts. Currently, only the χ² from the null vs. full model is shown. 4. Methodological and Interpretative Transparency Sample of Human Donors: Clarify the criteria used to select 14 donors out of the original 30. Animal Sample: Only Welsh mares (n=43) were tested. Explicitly discuss how this restricts generalization to other sexes, breeds, and ages. Audience Horse: The possible influence of an “audience horse” on focal horses’ behaviour is not mentioned as a limitation and should be acknowledged. Heart Rate Data Quality: A large proportion of artefacts were removed, but the exact percentage of excluded data per condition is not reported. This threatens reliability and must be stated. 5. Statistical Approach The practice of considering p ≤ 0.1 as a “trend” without corrections for multiple comparisons could inflate false positives. Request: Justify this choice and consider using appropriate multiple comparison corrections (e.g., FDR, Bonferroni). 6. Reporting of Effect Sizes and Variability The abstract presents the results without effect sizes or statistical values, which reduces transparency. Request: Provide effect sizes for key behavioural variables and more detail on cortisol variability. A power analysis for the non-significant cortisol results would be valuable. 7. Interpretation and Discussion Some conclusions (e.g., emotional contagion) are overstated given the absence of chemical analyses of the odours and the lack of evidence on specific volatile compounds. Please tone down speculative statements and emphasize that these results are preliminary and context-specific. Explicitly expand the discussion of limitations: donor selection, restricted animal sample, data exclusion, absence of chemical identification of compounds. Clearly state that results may not generalize across breeds, sexes, or ages. 8. Practical Implications The manuscript would benefit from a paragraph on the potential applied implications of these findings. For example: Beyond their theoretical contribution to understanding interspecific emotional communication, these findings may have practical implications. In equine management and training contexts, human emotional states could directly influence horses’ behavioural and physiological responses, particularly when handlers experience fear or stress. This suggests that caretakers’ and riders’ emotional regulation could be an important component of equine welfare, safety, and training effectiveness. For instance, in equestrian sports, therapeutic riding programs, or clinical handling, human fear-related odours might inadvertently increase horses’ reactivity, potentially raising the risk of accidents or impairing human–horse interactions. Recognizing this pathway opens new avenues for designing training programs that integrate human emotional awareness, developing strategies to reduce stress transmission between humans and horses, and selecting or conditioning horses according to their sensitivity to human chemosignals. Minor Revisions and Editorial Suggestions 9. Abbreviations: Ensure that all abbreviations (PCA, GLMM, LMM, etc.) are defined at first use in the main text. 10. Citation Consistency: Check consistency between in-text citations and the reference list. 11. Language and Style: The manuscript is clearly written and professional. A final careful proofreading for minor typographical or grammatical errors is still recommended. Recommendation This manuscript addresses an interesting research question with a solid methodological basis and valuable results, especially concerning fear odors. It is a valuable addition to the field of interspecific communication. Considering the strengths and the areas needing improvement, I recommend Major Revisions. Sincerely, ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Human emotional odours influence horses’ behaviour and physiology PONE-D-25-38894R1 Dear Dr. Jardat, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Olfaction is "the oldest one of our senses" but little understood by us "micreomatic creatures". It is important both for safety reasons and for animal welfare reasons. For these reasons the study is of interest for both scientists as well as for riders and horse caretakers. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, I have carefully examined the revised version of the manuscript entitled “Human emotional odours influence horses’ behaviour and physiology”. I appreciate the effort made to address all the comments and methodological clarifications requested in the first review. The authors have provided detailed and satisfactory responses to each of the previous concerns. The new version includes clear justification for the selection of human donors, expanded discussion of the cortisol limitations, and improved transparency regarding the heart rate data quality. The statistical reporting has been refined with the inclusion of effect sizes and appropriate terminology regarding non-significant trends. Furthermore, the discussion now adopts a more cautious tone when interpreting emotional contagion and highlights the study’s limitations more explicitly. The addition of the paragraph on practical implications greatly enhances the translational relevance of the findings, and the revised figures and tables are now clearer and easier to interpret. Language, formatting, and citation consistency have also improved substantially. Overall, the revised manuscript is well written, methodologically sound, and provides a novel contribution to our understanding of interspecific emotional communication. I believe it now meets the publication standards of PLOS ONE. Recommendation: Accept ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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