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| Original SubmissionApril 22, 2025 |
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Investigation of the Effect and Mechanisms of Moxa Smoke in the Treatment of Influenza A Virus (IAV) Infection PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: This study explores the antiviral and anti-inflammatory effects of moxa smoke (MS) against H1N1 infection using network pharmacology, molecular docking, and in vivo experiments. The integration of traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) with modern pharmacological approaches is commendable, offering novel insights into MS’s potential therapeutic applications. However, while the research demonstrates scientific rigor in certain aspects, it contains critical gaps, particularly regarding clinical safety implications and mechanistic clarity, which must be addressed for publication. Strengths and Innovations 1.Multidisciplinary Approach to Mechanism DiscoveryThe study employs network pharmacology to systematically identify MS components (52 compounds) and their potential targets (384 proteins), uncovering 16 core targets (e.g., STAT3, PPARγ) via PPI network analysis. This “multi-component, multi-target” framework aligns with TCM’s holistic philosophy and provides a robust basis for understanding MS’s complex actions. The molecular docking validation of stable binding between MS compounds (e.g., Bis-(3,5,5-trimethylhexyl) phthalate) and key targets further strengthens the mechanistic hypothesis. 2. In Vivo Validation of Antiviral and Anti-Inflammatory EffectsUsing a PR8-infected mouse model, the study demonstrates that MS reduces viral load (H1N1NP mRNA), alleviates pulmonary inflammation (e.g., decreased BALF leukocytes, IL-6/TNF-α expression), and modulates PPARγ/STAT3 pathways. These findings provide experimental evidence for MS’s therapeutic potential, particularly its ability to suppress cytokine storms—a critical pathology in severe influenza. 3. Translational Relevance to TCM PracticeBy focusing on MS, a byproduct of moxibustion with historical use in infection prevention, the study bridges traditional practices with modern science. The identification of PPARγ as a key regulator offers a mechanistic explanation for MS’s anti-inflammatory effects, potentially guiding the development of targeted TCM interventions. Critical Weaknesses and Safety Concerns 1. Inadequate Assessment of Clinical Safety Risks Occupational Exposure Risks for Acupuncturists:The manuscript fails to address the chronic toxicity of MS, a major concern for acupuncturist) and patients. Existing evidence (cited in prior reviews) shows that long-term exposure to moxa smoke is associated with increased incidence of chronic pharyngitis, allergic reactions, and potential pulmonary fibrosis. For example, elevated MMP12 expression in MS-treated mice (Table 3) indicates ECM degradation, a hallmark of emphysema and pulmonary fibrosis. The study’s failure to discuss this finding’s clinical relevance constitutes a significant oversight. Systemic Toxicity of Smoke Components:MS contains known toxicants, including PM2.5/PM10, aldehydes (e.g., formaldehyde), and polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons (PAHs). While the study excludes “toxic gaseous compounds,” it provides no data on the safety of identified components (e.g., phthalates, terpenoids) in long-term use. For instance, phthalates are endocrine disruptors linked to metabolic and reproductive disorders, and PAHs are carcinogenic. The absence of toxicity profiling (e.g., hepatic/renal function assays, genotoxicity tests) undermines the safety narrative. 2. Mechanistic Gaps and Incomplete Data Interpretation Contradictory Findings with MMP12 Upregulation:The study reports that high-dose MS (HMS) significantly upregulates MMP12 mRNA in lung tissue (p<0.05), yet dismisses this as a “potential risk” without mechanistic exploration. MMP12’s role in alveolar wall destruction and fibrosis is well-established; its induction by MS contradicts the claimed “protective effect” on lung injury. The authors must clarify whether this is a dose-dependent effect or an experimental artifact, ideally through immunohistochemistry or functional assays (e.g., ECM degradation markers). Unclear Dynamics of PPARγ/STAT3 Pathways:While MS upregulates PPARγ and reduces p-STAT3, the study does not address how these changes balance antiviral immunity and inflammatory suppression. For example, PPARγ overactivation may impair macrophage antiviral function, while STAT3 inhibition could compromise viral clearance. Long-term outcomes (e.g., viral persistence, secondary infections) are not evaluated, limiting conclusions about therapeutic windows. 3. Experimental Design Limitations Lack of Long-Term Exposure Models:The study uses short-term MS exposure (4 days) followed by acute infection, which does not mimic clinical moxibustion practices (often involving repeated sessions). Chronic toxicity endpoints (e.g., lung histology after 28 days, systemic organ damage) are absent, precluding assessment of cumulative risks. Inadequate Control of Confounding Variables:The study does not specify the combustion conditions of moxa sticks (e.g., temperature, airflow), which profoundly influence smoke composition. Variations in moxa stick quality (e.g., age of Artemisia argyi, processing methods) may lead to inconsistent results, affecting reproducibility. Recommendations for Revision 1. Expand Safety Evaluation: Include chronic toxicity experiments in mice (e.g., 4-week MS exposure without infection) to assess pulmonary fibrosis (e.g., collagen deposition via Masson’s trichrome staining), MMP12 activity, and systemic organ toxicity (liver/kidney function tests). Characterize MS components using advanced analytical techniques (e.g., GC-MS, HPLC) to identify potential carcinogens/endocrine disruptors, and reference occupational exposure limits (e.g., OSHA standards for formaldehyde, PM2.5). 2. Clarify Mechanistic Paradoxes: Investigate the temporal and dose-dependent effects of MS on MMP12 expression. Is MMP12 upregulation a late-phase response or specific to high concentrations? Perform gain/loss-of-function experiments (e.g., PPARγ agonists/antagonists) to dissect its dual role in inflammation and viral clearance. 3. Enhance Clinical Translational Data: Conduct a retrospective survey of acupuncturists’ respiratory health to correlate MS exposure with chronic pharyngitis or COPD incidence. Develop low-toxicity MS formulations (e.g., smokeless moxibustion) and compare their efficacy/toxicity with traditional MS in parallel experiments. 4. Revise Discussion Section: Acknowledge the trade-off between MS’s therapeutic benefits and safety risks, particularly for vulnerable populations (pregnant women, elderly, individuals with preexisting lung disease). Highlight the need for standardized MS protocols in clinical settings to minimize exposure while preserving efficacy. Reviewer #2: This manuscript is valuable for Investigation of the Effect and Mechanisms of Moxa Smoke in the Treatment of Influenza A Virus (IAV) Infection. But there are some important data need to clarify. 1. In page 9, line 182-186. The moxa smoker exposure experiment is low moxa smoke (LMS, resulting in a PM10 concentration of approximately 1.335 mg/m³) and high moxa smoke (HMS, resulting in a PM10 concentration of approximately 2.67 mg/m³)21. Both PM10 concentrations were lower than the typical concentration of 3.54 mg/m³ found in moxibustion clinics. But the dosage conversion isn’t correct simply by same unit (mg/m³) for animal and human. As common view, we usually use body surface area method to calculate drug dosage between different species. So in Figure 5, we could find the body weight loss of LMS+PR8 group and HMS+PR8 group reduced seriously compared MEM+sham group from day 2-4 before H1N1 PR8 infection. The author needs to explain these moxa smoke exposure concentrations and also need more data to prove its safety in this dosage. 2. In page 23, H1N1 NP gene of MEM+sham group is not correct, it is normal mice, it’s impossible to have H1N1 NP gene. So, these data need to calculate again. 3. Did author analysis the number of inflammatory cells in BALF with flow cytometry? If this, the author need provide more experimental information with antibody, company name, experimental condition etc. 4. Author need to check style of reference, English expression carefully in this manuscript. 5. The image resolution is insufficient, need to improve. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Investigation of the Effect and Mechanisms of Moxa Smoke in the Treatment of Influenza A Virus (IAV) Infection PONE-D-25-21289R1 Dear Dr. Yu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Md Bashir Uddin, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: Concerns raised in the previous revision round have been satisfactorily addressed. Although there are limitations in the experimental design, the manuscript has benen improved based on the previous comments ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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