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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: PONE-D-24-42510: Advancing training effectiveness prediction in mass sport through longitudinal data: a mathematical model approach based on the Fitness-Fatigue Model ABSTRACT The article presents a meticulously developed mathematical approach to optimize the Fitness-Fatigue Model (FFM) in the context of mass sports. The most unique aspects of the study are the model's ability to capture individual differences, to make personalized predictions using longitudinal data, and its potential for integration with wearable technologies. The main outline of the study is clearly stated in the abstract. The abstract should state the research question more clearly and briefly touch on the limitations of the study. The rationale for choosing the heart rate variability (HRV) and heart rate recovery (HRR) indicators can be emphasized in the introduction of the abstract. In addition, the presentation of quantitative results (R², RMSE, MAPE values) as prominent findings in the abstract will strengthen the article. INTRODUCTION The introduction section comprehensively covers the importance of training load monitoring and estimation models, clearly presents the historical development of FFM and gaps in the current literature. A literature summary on the Fitness-Fatigue Model and training effect discussions in mass sports is given in detail, and the topicality of the subject and the necessity of the study are clearly presented. The authors present a strong argument for the transition from the use of FFM in competitive sports to mass sports applications. Especially the argument on page 3, "The mathematical relationship of FFM requires optimization", establishes the justification of the study on a solid ground. The authors convey the basic problems in the field and the gaps in the literature in a logical order, and also emphasize the difference between the current approaches and their own suggestions. The theoretical framework can be explained in more detail in the introduction section. In particular, the concepts of "adaptation" and "fatigue" should be addressed more comprehensively in the physiological context, and references to studies in different disciplines should be added. Additionally, a brief comparison of data-based model usage in mass sports with examples from different demographics or disciplines can be added to the introduction. The research hypotheses on page 5 can be reformulated in a specific and testable way. METHODS The research design of the study has been meticulously conveyed; the selection of the sample, the training protocol and the data collection processes have been presented clearly and transparently. The use of scientifically accepted objective measurement techniques (HRV, HRR, speed, watts etc.) in both internal and external load measurements is quite strong in terms of methodology. In addition, the fact that the ethics committee approval and informed consent have been obtained is appropriate in terms of academic ethics. The statistical methods and model validation criteria (R², RMSE, MAPE etc.) used in data analysis have been well selected and explained. The authors have clearly stated the model assumptions and explained the mathematical equations step by step. The systematic presentation of the equations (1)-(14) on pages 5-7 facilitates understanding the mathematical basis of the model. In particular, the addition of specificity coefficients (a and f) to model individual differences is one of the original contributions of the model. In addition, the method of determining the individual parameters in the modeling process and the MATLAB codes should be explained in more detail. Data preprocessing steps and parameter optimization processes should be clearly stated so that the reader can repeat the study. The physiological meanings of each parameter (a, τa, Ka, C1, f, τf, Kf, C2) in equations (7) and (8) should be explained in more detail. The value ranges of these parameters and the details of the optimization algorithm used in their determination (other than least squares) should be given. In addition, alternative approaches used to assess the validity of the mathematical model should be mentioned. Data Collection Methods for Model Databases The study protocol, inclusion/exclusion criteria, and ethical approval details are clearly stated. The methodological design of the study (12 weeks, 3 times a week, 30 minutes per session) complies with scientific standards. The measurement and calculation methods of internal and external load indicators (RMSSD, ΔHRR1, HRr%) are explained in detail on pages 8-9. The validity and reliability information of the IPAQ questionnaire used to determine the physical activity levels of the participants should be added. The technical specifications, measurement precision, and validity and reliability details of the POLAR H10 heart rate band and ergoselet100 power bike used in the data collection process should be provided. The testing process in Figure 1 should be supported by a more detailed timeline. The formula or method used to determine the training intensity (HRmax 60-85%) on page 8 should be explained. Statistical Analysis The authors have clearly stated the statistical approaches used for parameter estimation, model fit, and prediction ability assessment. The separation of model learning (80%) and test (20%) databases is methodologically appropriate. Various metrics (R², SSE, RMSE, MAPE) were used to evaluate model performance. The rationale and potential effects of the choice of data normalization (in the range of 0.1-1) should be discussed. More technical details about the specific implementation of the least squares method and the optimization process should be provided. Statistical tests used to compare models (significance tests, Bayesian approaches, etc.) should be specified. The reliability of the results can be increased by performing robustness analysis of the parameters with bootstrap or cross-validation. RESULTS The findings are presented clearly and supported by tables and graphs. The advantages of the model optimization over the original model are statistically demonstrated and reasonably conveyed with detailed results. The possible contribution of the study to individualized training processes is well-founded with the various parameter values obtained. Further analysis and visual improvement of some tables and graphs in the text would increase the completeness of the report. In particular, the missing units, axis names and statistical significance indicators in the graphs should be clarified. In addition, In the findings section, possible limitations of the model (e.g. inter-individual variation, small sample bias) should be discussed more clearly. Subjects’ characteristics and training completion status Table 1 clearly presents the demographic and anthropometric characteristics (age, gender, BMI, physical activity level) and training completion status of the participants. A total of 433 paired training data from 13 participants provided sufficient data for model training. Additional sports risk monitoring measures for at-risk participants (overweight, low physical activity level) are methodologically sound. A more detailed summary statistics of participants’ mean age and standard deviation, gender distribution, BMI ranges, and physical activity levels can be provided. The statement “subjects’’ compliance was good” on page 11 should be supported by quantitative data (e.g., ratio of planned vs. actual training sessions). Although no dropouts are noted, possible reasons for missing data (illness, work/school conflicts, etc.) should be explained. The potential impact of differences in training duration between participants on model results should be discussed. Fitting effect evaluation result Figure 2 comprehensively visualizes the model fit metrics obtained using three different output indicators (ΔHRR1, HRr%, TLHRV). It is clearly shown that the optimized model provides a better fit than the original model. The majority of participants achieved moderate-high R² values (0.5-0.7 and >0.7) and low RMSE values. The cut-off points used in interpreting the fit results on page 12 (0.5, 0.7 for R², etc.) should be justified based on literature. A more detailed analysis of individual differences should be provided - which participants showed better/worse fit on which indicators and possible reasons for this should be discussed. Model prediction ability evaluation results Figure 3 clearly shows the model's predictive ability with MAPE and RMSE metrics. The optimized model has been shown to have better overall prediction performance. Figure 4 effectively visualizes the prediction performance of the model for Participant 4 by presenting 3D model images from different visual angles. While the chronological nature of the test database (last 20% training day data) used in the prediction capability assessment is appropriate for testing the model’s true prediction capacity over time, it is recommended that cross-validation approaches (k-fold or leave-one-out) be used to increase the robustness of the results. The change in prediction error over time should also be examined – it is important to see how well the model can predict the distant future compared to the near future. The statement on page 12 that “Although the prediction error of some subjects' fitting models is slightly higher than that of the original model, …” requires a specific analysis of these cases. DISCUSSION The discussion section is logically structured around the optimization of the model, the use of longitudinal data, and the general applicability of the model output indicators. The potential use of the proposed model in the field, the future place of personalized approaches in sports with technology are successfully addressed. In addition, the contribution of the model to the training processes in mass sports is compared with existing methods and its importance is ranked. The authors comprehensively relate their findings to the existing literature and effectively discuss unique concepts such as "HRV fingerprints". The discussion on the causes of individual differences on pages 16-17 is particularly in-depth. The discussion can address the practical applications and potential impact of the model from a broader perspective. In particular, more detailed suggestions should be provided for the dissemination of the model through wearable technologies and smartphone applications. It would also be useful to evaluate the effects of sample diversity and demographic variables such as age/gender on the findings in more detail in the discussion. A brief assessment of the applicability of the model in clinical or professional sports environments can also be added. The section on the limitations of the study on page 18 should be expanded, and the effects of factors such as sample size, demographic diversity, and type of training (only cycling) on the generalizability of the results should be discussed. In addition, precautions against the risk of overfitting should be explained in more detail; future multicenter, randomized studies should be recommended to validate the model. It should be clearly emphasized that the model should be retested with different branches and age groups. Concrete recommendations for future research (model validation on different sports, age groups, genders, theoretical mechanisms) should be presented in more detail. CONCLUSION The conclusion section concisely summarizes the main findings of the study and highlights the potential of the model to predict training effectiveness in mass sports. It is clearly stated that the optimized model performs well thanks to the use of functional relationships and individual longitudinal data. The conclusion section should emphasize the theoretical and practical contributions of the study more strongly. Concrete steps and recommendations for future applications of the model should be added. The phrase “combined with wearable devices and machine learning” should be expanded with more specific examples. The conclusion should position the significance of the study in a broader context for the scientific community, coaches, athletes, and the general population. FIGURES AND TABLES Figure 1 clearly visualizes the testing process. Figures 2 and 3 effectively present model performance metrics. The 3D visualizations in Figure 4 illustrate the predictive capacity of the model from various perspectives. Table 1 provides a comprehensive overview of the participants’ characteristics. Additional tables (S1-S12) provide detailed information on model parameters, fit, and prediction results. Figure 1 can be redesigned in a timeline format to show data collection points more clearly. Additional explanations and arrows can be added to the 3D visualizations in Figure 4 to provide a better understanding of model features. Summary statistics (mean, standard deviation, range) can be added to Table 1. Additional tables should provide more descriptive information and context. REFERENCES The bibliography is comprehensive and up-to-date, covering key literature in the areas of training load monitoring, FFM, HRV, and HRR. Citations are used appropriately in the text. More resources could be cited on the integration of machine learning and FFM. More up-to-date references on wearable technologies could be added. Existing citations could include more meta-analyses and systematic reviews. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Wang et al. proposes a method to optimize the mathematical relationship between "adaptation" and "fatigue" of traditional fitness-fatigue model (FFM). The study may provide useful information by adapting the model to the subject characteristics but the methodology needs several clarifications, as well as manuscript structure needs improvement. Description of the model and the related optimization procedure need revisions to improve clarity. Description of signals and data acquired, as well as tests performed for the acquisition, should follow a schematic order. A list of major and minor comments is reported in the following. - Ref. 6. Please check since it is not correctly formatted. - Lines 14-16 The sentence is incomplete. Please rephrase. - Lines 17-18 The terminology used in not appropriate and focused for mathematical modeling domain. - Lines 70-71. This sentence is not clear to me. Please clarify. - Lines 89-91. The concept of internal and external loads should be better described. - Section 2.1. It is important to clarify what has been taken from Banister et al. and what has been modified. - Eq.(5) and eq. (6). Is this accounting for the initial conditions of the two differential equations? - Lines 155-156. 85% HRmax usually refers to vigorous and not moderate exercise. - Lines 166-167. A reference should be provided for the use of HR and HRV for the quantification of the internal load. - Lines 196-198. It is not clear how the parameter estimation was performed and which output were included in the cost function. - Line 215. Which are the training data the Authors are referring to? HR data? - Lines 264-265. On the basis of which results is possible to infer this observation? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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