Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 25, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-10318-->-->Evaluation of the insulin-dependent and –independent hypoglycemic effects and understanding their breakdown in the progression of obesity using mice-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kubota, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.--> The manuscript has now been critically evaluated by two exeprts in the field. There is a clear consent that the paper is suitable for publication after major and minor points raised by the reviewer have been adequately addressed. -->For details please refer to the reviewers comments below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This paper dissects by means of direct measurements during mainly hyperglycemic clamp (HGC) but also IVGTT in mice the contributions of glucose effectiveness (SG) and insulin sensitivity (SI). This is combined with mathematical modeling. The model addresses some of the same phenomena as the classic Minimal Model but includes more mechanistic processes. It concludes that SG dominates during the first 60 min after an intravenous glucose load, whereas SI grows in importance from 60 - 180 min. Changes during the development of obesity are tracked in mice on a high fat diet by fitting the model to individual mice and plotting model parameters vs. time. The results are plausible, and I have mainly minor comments to improve and clarify the presentation. Major Comments: 1. L. 92 - 93, during a 90-min IVGTT application of somatostatin to suppress insulin secretion had no effect on rate of glucose uptake (Fig. S1). Would insulin have had more effect if the test had been continued beyond 90 min? I would like to see a comparison with two classic studies in people with T1D with and without exogenous insulin, which found that MinMod overestimated the magnitude of SG during IVGTT: PMID: 8013753 and PMID: 9843746. 2. L. 167, "previous models ... cannot reproduce the transient glucose effectiveness ... because onlu constant glucose effectiveness is observed under a constant blood glucose": This explanation seems a bit too simple. Flux 5 in the new model also depends only on G, and the coefficients k5 and k7 are constant. The only factor I can see that might account for the transient peak of glucose effectiveness in Fig. 4C is (k7 - stG), which limits flux 5 as stG grows. Please comment. 3. L. 706 - 708: The model is fit to three inputs, G, I and AG. I am concerned that this is not sufficient to identify eight parameters. Please justify. 4. Please post the computer code for the model in a public repository. Minor Comments: 1. L. 64, "glucose effectiveness is responsible for ... 45 - 65% of glucose disposal": What is the context? During an IVGTT or other test? 2. L. 120: "little hypoglycemic effects" should be "little hypoglycemic effect"." 3. L. 138: "Therefore"; "This explains why" would be better 4. L. 176, "EGP is suppressed by glucose effectiveness": Do you mean that glucose uptake into the liver suppresses EGP? SG is a process, not a molecular species. 5. L. 184, Figs. 3 and 4, "estimates are comparable": The numbers are on very different scales, and there are no units for glucose in Fig. 4. Also, G is in mg/dl in some figures and mM in others. In Fig. 5B, the glucose unit is mg. Please correct and standardize. 6. L. 187: The phrase beginning "While" is a sentence fragment. 7. L. 200, "time-dependent glucose uptake": Please clarify here and elsewhere whether "time-dependent" means over minutes or weeks. 8. L. 222, "parameter k_5 ... appeared to decrease": Can you do a statistical test to establish whether it did decrease? 9. L. 232, "the model captured changes in glucose homeostasis": It certainly predicted changes but how do we know they are correct? 10. L. 240, "and not effected by blood insulin levels": redundant, please delete. 11. L. 326, "a high-fat diet reduces hepatic NAD+ to decrease hepatic Sirt2 activity": "to decrease" implies purpose. Better to say "has the effect of decreasing". 12. L. 326, "This study": Which study? 13. L. 338: 'The question of "when" ... hypoglycemic effects occur': No need for "'s. 14. Figure 4 legend: Define "CD". 15. L. 749: "old chow" should be "old chow". Reviewer #2 In the presented manuscript "Evaluation of the insulin-dependent and –independent hypoglycemic effects and understanding their breakdown in the progression of obesity using mice " the authors present a impressive amount of data measuring blood glucose levels and a detailed analysis of analyse the effect of glucose uptake in various tissues in an obese mouse model. The methods are described well and the results are adequately presented. There is however a significant omission which needs to be addressed before the mansucript can be published. In their model the authors use somatostatin administration as model for "insulin"-independent glucose only response to increased glucose levels. The manuscript however lacks information that somatostatin not only blocks insulin secretion but also glucagon secretion in the pancreatic island cells. This is very essential for the interpretation of the results because glucagon plays a central role in adjusting/controling glucose uptake and release in the liver and may also influence glucose uptake in muscle cells. Therefore, it is very likely that inhibition of glucagon secretion contributes to the "glucose"-only effect. This needs to be discussed in the paper and the mathematical modeling should be adjsuted for this further parameter. Unfortunately, there are even more physiological regulators linked with peripheral tissue homeostatsis, but I agree that these can remain as a "black box" contributing in qn equal manor to blood glucose levers in the model presented. recommendation: major revision ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Although some points in particular regarding the crosstalk between different physiological signals, the manuscript has been carefully rewritten and significantly improved. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The authors have carefully and systematically responded to the critiques of the first review, clarifying parts that were ambiguous and adding statistical analysis for trends in the model parameters. I have no further objections. ********** -->7. 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