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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript investigates the molecular mechanism by which gallium nitrate inhibits bacterial biofilm formation, focusing on the modulation of the pykF gene. The authors present a rigorous and multifaceted experimental approach combining transcriptomics, gene knockout, in vitro biofilm assays, in vivo rat models, and molecular docking. The research is original, well-structured, and addresses a clinically relevant issue in antimicrobial therapy, especially concerning device-related infections. The results are clearly presented and strongly support the central hypothesis that gallium nitrate exerts its antibiofilm effect via pykF upregulation. This finding adds valuable knowledge to the understanding of how metal-based antimicrobials function and identifies pykF as a novel therapeutic target. However, several minor revisions are necessary to improve the clarity and completeness of the manuscript: English Language and Style: The manuscript requires revision by a native English speaker or professional language editing service. There are numerous grammatical errors and awkward constructions that hinder the clarity of the text (e.g., “In regulation gallium nitrate…”). Improving the language will significantly enhance the readability and impact of the paper. Discussion of Literature and Mechanism: While the authors mention some previous work on pykF and gallium nitrate, the discussion could be strengthened by: Expanding the comparison with other known gallium-based antimicrobial studies. Commenting on pykF function across different bacterial taxa. Discussing possible off-target effects or regulatory feedback in the pykF pathway. Limitations: The limitations section should be expanded. The authors may address: The relatively short duration of the in vivo study. The absence of toxicity or cytocompatibility data for gallium nitrate. The limited number of bacterial species tested. Data Availability: Although the manuscript states that all data are available in the text and supplementary files, it would be preferable to deposit raw sequencing data (e.g., transcriptome datasets) in a public repository such as NCBI GEO or FigShare, in accordance with PLOS ONE’s open data policy. Statistical Details: Please clarify the statistical approach: Was normality of data distribution verified before applying parametric tests? If ANOVA was used, which post hoc tests were performed? These revisions are minor and do not detract from the scientific merit of the work. Once addressed, the manuscript should be suitable for publication. I congratulate the authors on their interesting and well-executed study. Reviewer #2: Dear Editor in Chief The manuscript by Xiaofeng et al, is “Molecular mechanism of gallium nitrate in inhibiting bacterial biofilm formation through pykF modulation” is interesting relatively and could be sufficient for publication in PLOS ONE but not in this format and needs minor corrections. Indeed, the methods and results are enough and sufficient. Some phrases were not clear and need to rewrite. However, author is kindly requested to address the following issues. Title: The title is OK. Abstract: Abstract is poor section and need to be extended by using more details of methods and significant results. The abstract is written very generally. Use more appropriate keywords. Experimental Section: 1- All methods need to be addressed. 2- Why clinical isolates were not used? 3- Why sub-MIC and MBC not determined? 4- According to reliable sources, a wavelength of 600 nm is used for reading to measure bacterial biofilm. Explain why you used a wavelength of 450. 5- Reference primers are not specified in Table 1. In my opinion results of this study are sufficient but, I recommend to clarify and describe more. Discussion is poor relatively and recommend to be strengthened using more addressed. Reviewer #3: Molecular mechanism of gallium nitrate in inhibiting bacterial biofilm formation through pykF modulation. The authors reported findings demonstrating that gallium nitrate inhibits bacterial growth and biofilm formation through the upregulation of pyruvate kinase (pykF) expression. These results were confirmed through comprehensive in vivo and in vitro experiments, including qPCR, western blot analysis, and knockout studies. The findings suggest a significant role for the pykF protein in suppressing bacterial growth and biofilm formation, as well as in regulating biofilm-associated gene expression. However, given the crucial role of pykF in glycolysis, deletion of this gene would impair bacterial growth on glucose and reduce overflow acetate production due to decreased ATP yield. Conversely, gallium-induced upregulation of pykF would enhance glycolysis and ATP production. Therefore, before publication, the authors must clarify the apparent contradiction: why does gallium-induced pykF upregulation inhibit bacterial growth and biofilm formation, whereas deletion of the pykF gene paradoxically enhances growth? Page 2, Line 26: According to Supplement Fig 1, MICs against three bacteria were > 1024 ug/ml. Page 2, Line 43. Streptococcus mutans: Italic Page 7, Line 17, 18, 20. pykF is a protein. No italic. Page 7-8 : Molecular docking study was done with Ga ion, showing Ga ion binding to pykF protein. It’s unclear what conclusions the authors are drawing from their docking study. Does Ga inactivate the protein or promote the activity of the protein by binding? Does the kinase have iron-binding sites? Iron is involved in converting phosphoenolpyruvate to pyruvate? Authors should address this issue. In line 33, authors demonstrated that Ga ions bind to the pykF gene, leading to its expression. How does Ga binding to the gene increase its expression and promote the expression of biofilm-related genes? There is no data showing Ga binding to the gene. Page 8, line 8-9: an incomplete sentence. Page 8, line 19: In order to clarify, it is better to change “affecting” to “inhibiting”. Page 8, line 22-23: Figure 4F shows the knockout strain grows better than the wild strain. Figure 4H. fix Ga(NO3)3 legend. Page 10, line 11-18: the wild-type strain treated with Ga showed increased expression of pykF mRNA. However, there was no significant increase of pykF mRNA expression but significant increase in the protein expression from KO-pykF E.coli treated with Ga (Figure S2B). It seems like Ga enhances ribosome access and translation in the KO strain. Any explanation? Page 17, line 10-12: gallium nitrate does not bind to gallium protoporphyrin. Page 21. How long was the E. coli treated with gallium, and at what concentration? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Amanda Stefanie Jabur de Assis Reviewer #2: Yes: Alireza Khodavandi Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. dong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The revised manuscript shows significant improvement and is nearly ready for acceptance, requiring only very minor corrections. A final English language polish is needed, particularly in the abstract and introduction sections. The authors should also make changes according to reviewer's comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Irene Ling Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, The revised version of your manuscript titled “Molecular mechanism of gallium nitrate in inhibiting bacterial biofilm formation through pykF modulation” presents a significant advancement in the understanding of how gallium nitrate modulates bacterial physiology and biofilm formation. Your integration of transcriptomics, in vitro and in vivo models, and molecular docking is commendable and contributes meaningfully to the field of antimicrobial research. The inclusion of mechanistic hypotheses about the dual role of pykF under stress conditions—where its upregulation may disrupt bacterial homeostasis and its knockout may trigger compensatory metabolic pathways—is both thoughtful and well-contextualized. Below are a few points that could further improve the clarity and strength of the manuscript: Language polishing: Although substantially improved, a few grammatical inconsistencies and awkward phrasings persist (e.g., in the abstract and introduction). A final English editing round would enhance readability. Justification for strain selection: You have explained why clinical isolates were not used in this study. Still, including a sentence in the Introduction or Discussion stating that this is a preliminary mechanistic study and future work will explore clinical strains would strengthen the rationale. Mechanism of pykF upregulation: While you provide several plausible mechanisms for the increase in PykF protein without a corresponding mRNA increase in the KO strain, consider briefly stating in the discussion that direct experimental evidence (e.g., proteasomal degradation, ribosomal profiling) is still lacking. Graphical abstract clarity: The graphical abstract is visually engaging, but it would benefit from labeling key molecules (e.g., Ga³⁺, PykF) and briefly indicating whether their effects are inhibitory or activating. Minor formatting issues: Please double-check figure legends for consistency and ensure all abbreviations are defined upon first use (e.g., XTT, CLSM). Overall, the manuscript is well-structured and scientifically sound. I appreciate your thorough responses to the previous review and the additional experiments and discussions incorporated. Best regards! Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for responding to the comments, but it was expected that the changes made to the article would be highlighted to allow for their review. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Amanda Stefanie Jabur de Assis Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. dong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Molecular mechanism of gallium nitrate in inhibiting bacterial biofilm formation through pykF modulation PONE-D-25-24459R3 Dear Dr. dong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Irene Ling, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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