Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 17, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The present study investigated the effects of mental imagery and breathing added to a conventional warm-up on the sympathetic activation and muscle force and endurance. Some major concerns should be addressed to clarify the rationale (introduction), to justify the methods (2 repeated warm-up sessions for example), to clarify the statistics (e.g. huge variability) and to make the discussion clear. Please see below. Title and Abstract. The title is clear and the abstract almost adequately describe the study. The methods (e.g., the 2 experimental groups? the muscle group?) and results (e.g., physical performances?) should be developed for clarity. The last sentence is very general and not really helpful. Please consider rephrasing and giving a clear conclusion related to the present findings. Introduction. L51. high level of cardiac stress is too restrictive. L53. What does 'job performance' mean? L67-L75. The message behind this paragraph is unclear. What is the link with the preceding and following paragraphs. L81-82. It is unclear why activating the sympathetic system may be beneficial. The optimisation of warm-up routines is easier to understand. It can be achieved while lowering fatigue associated with the different warm-up exercises and while optimizing some physiological systems (for example the sympathetic). But the usefulness of the sympathetic system should be made clearer. L89-95. Authors seem to indicate these effects are related to the autonomic nervous system. Please explain or clarify. Generally speaking, the effect of motor imagery on the autonomic nervous system is unclear. Similarly, the link between this autonomic system and strength is unclear. L108-112. The hypothesis should also be clarified. Why less performance decline? The exercise considered should be defined here. Methods. L132-135. What is the rationale for considering 2 experimental groups and not considering a cross-over design? Please justify the sample size. L146. How were volunteers during the 30-min rest (seated, lying...)? L147. Why only 28 with HRV measurements? What were not involved volunteers doing during these 15 minutes? L149. Figure 1 indicates 15 minutes for HRV test (also L154). L154-155. HRV was evaluated after a single warm-up while muscle force/endurance were evaluated after 2 warm-up protocols. Have authors tested the potential bias? Were muscle properties similarly affected after a single or double warm-up procedure? Same question for HRV. L166, L170 and table 1. It is not table A1 but table 1. It is unclear if participants are doing mental imagery during or following the warm-up exercice. How did authors controlled the intensity of each exercices between CTRL and EXP. Did authors control the breathing and mental imagery? and how? L180. How many contractions? possible rest duration? Rest between this test and push-ups? Moreover, push-up is a form of dynamic plank. What is the influence of this pre-exercice. It can serve as a fatiguing exercice or as an additional warm-up exercice. L199. 6-min rest was observed between push-up and plank. This long rest could reduce the warm-up effects. Was the effect of this delay tested? L210. Conducting warm-up + mental imagery + controlled breathing could increase the (warm-up) perceived exertion. Why was RPE not evaluated following warm-up. L223. How was respiratory rate measured? Results. Please be consistant while writing pre/post or PRE/POST. Results and Figures. Figure should be modified to better show the * related to the 'performance' decrease in the control group. Also, was performance similar between groups post-warm-up? In the text, values during pre-tests are useless and redundant with figure 2. L290. Use '.' and not ',' for values. Table 2. One can question about the variability obtained for LF and HF. How can authors explain this huge inter-individual and inter-group variation? How can authors explain the lack of difference in pre-values between groups. These results are questionable. Discussion. L387-397. The aim of the study is different than the aim presented in introduction. Similarly authors indicate comparing percentage change. It was not done. In addition, some new terms are used (dynamization). Please be consistent throughout the manuscript. L399-415. This part is unclear and is too briefly discussed. Authors indicate MVIC decrease is due to fatigue. How it it possible? A warm-up should limit fatigue. What does authors mean with repeating maximal and submaximal contractions. This repetition induce fatigue? So it means that authors have not measured any warm-up effects. Tests per se bias the results? L428. I still can't understand the hypothesis about performance decrements. A warm-up is not conducted to produce fatigue. L438-441. Same comment than for part 4.1. L446. Where do these 8minutes come from? Is it just from mental imagery or the combination of breathing and imagery? Part 4.3. Can authors make the link between sympathetic activation and performance (cardiac, muscle or endurance). The likely effects and applications are not so clear. L517-528. I disagree with the conclusion. imagery and breathing do not improves performance. It is not shown by statistics. Part 6. Some limitations could be added. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Mental imagery and breathing exercises integrated into a standardized warm-up routine enhance sympathetic activation and optimize muscular performance in firefighters PONE-D-25-25807R1 Dear Dr. Amarantini, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emiliano Cè, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The reviewer thanks the authors for the huge work achieved (answers and alterations). Authors have adequately modified the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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