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| Original SubmissionAugust 27, 2025 |
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Furthermore, Reviewer 2 raises a concern regarding the high similarity with a recently published study, Abdelaziz, M.N., Hefnawy, A., Azzam, H. et al. Knowledge and attitude among Egyptian medical students regarding the role of human papillomavirus vaccine in prevention of oropharyngeal cancer: a questionnaire-based observational study. Sci Rep 15, 3767 (2025). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-025-86853-8". Please highlight and comment on any differences with the above-cited study in the discussion section. Best regards, Nicola Serra [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript proposes an in-depth analysis of HPV awareness among Egyptian medical students. The paper is well written and discusses the importance of targeted interventions in increasing HPV knowledge among medical students. I suggest English language editing and more attention to captions and tables. INTRODUCTION: Pag. 9. Men are also significantly affected, with global data showing that nearly one in three men is infected with at least one genital HPV type, and around one in five carries one or more high-risk strains. Please consider replace the word “strains” with “genotypes”. It seems that your introduction is too short. Please emphasize more topics, such as HPV prevalence and vaccines impact on the population. I invite the authors to consider the following works: Buttà M. et al 2025. The Role of Methylation as an Epigenetic Marker in HPV-Related Oral Lesions. Journal of Medical Virology. Sucato A. et al. 2025 Human Papillomavirus Infection in Partners of Women Attending Cervical Cancer Screening: A Pilot Study on Prevalence, Distribution, and Potential Use of Vaccines. Vaccines (Basel). RESULTS: Pag. 16. TABLE 2 Please consider specifying that in the items column, there are only the questions and not the correct answers. Reviewer #2: The manuscript analyses the HPV awareness among 1,431 medical students in Egypt. While knowledge of sexual transmission was strong, many students confused HPV with other viruses and feared serious vaccine side effects. Higher academic year, urban residence, and prior HPV education were key predictors of better awareness. The authors conclude that targeted educational interventions, especially in early academic years, are needed to improve vaccine acceptance and strengthen future physicians’ roles in HPV prevention. The study shows and highlights some important misconceptions about HPV infection among Egyptian medical students, and it does it in an appropriate and complete wat. It is also well-written and appropriately designed. I would also like to suggest some papers specifically regarding oral HPV infection and HPV vaccines: Buttà, M.; Serra, N.; Panzarella, V.; Fasciana, T.M.A.; Campisi, G.; Capra, G. Orogenital Human Papillomavirus Infection and Vaccines: A Survey of High- and Low-Risk Genotypes Not Included in Vaccines. Vaccines 2023, 11, 1466. https://doi.org/10.3390/vaccines11091466 Buttà M, Serra N, Mannino E, et al. Evaluation of the Prevalence and Potential Impact of HPV Vaccines in Patients with and Without Oral Diseases: A Ten-Year Retrospective Study. Arch Med Res. 2024;55(7):103059. doi:10.1016/j.arcmed.2024.103059 However, I need to raise an issue regarding the novelty of the study. In fact, the paper has similarities with the recently published paper: “Abdelaziz, M.N., Hefnawy, A., Azzam, H. et al. Knowledge and attitude among Egyptian medical students regarding the role of human papillomavirus vaccine in prevention of oropharyngeal cancer: a questionnaire-based observational study. Sci Rep 15, 3767 (2025). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-025-86853-8”. It focuses specifically on describing the knowledge of Egyptian medical students regarding HPV and oropharyngeal cancer, as well as knowledge and attitudes toward HPV vaccination. Hence, I would like the authors to discuss the differences between their paper and the study in the Discussion section. Reviewer #3: Overall impression: The research paper is well written, especially the methodology is clear and easy to understand. Apart from missing page numbers and line numbers, I have one major comment and a few minor comments, and I am referring to the page numbers of the PDF provided- Major comment: 1. Comparing by education would probably provide more insight into factors shaping HPV knowledge and HPV vaccination knowledge, while the sex-based comparison is still useful but more limited, especially for table 2 & 3. Since the author highlighted the importance of “…..educational interventions, particularly those targeting early academic years, are essential to address these gaps” in the abstract, comparison should be made across the educational levels or academic years. Minor comments: 2. In your reference no 11, they addressed the limitation of preventive screening for SGM AFAB people, but the author exemplified no preventive screening facility for men (page 9, last sentence of the 2nd paragraph). This needs to be clarified or corrected in the manuscript. 3. The author stated in the methods//Participants and eligibility criteria: “Students who declined participation were excluded from the analysis”. If the students who declined participation, there supposed to be no data at all from them. Or if any students participated, provided data and then withdrawn from the study- in that case, those data would be excluded from analysis. Or, did the author mean-Students who declined participation were excluded from enrollment? This needs to be clarified in the manuscript. 4. Page 21: no need of elaboration here- human papillomavirus (HPV) 5. Page 23: In Limitation section: causality assessment between increasing educational exposure and changing HPV awareness or attitudes is not possible in cross sectional study, but in my opinion, it was assessed in the current study. In another sense, the author’s statement is not wrong, but better to convey why causality is limited, because cross-sectional data can’t track whether more exposure actually leads to changes in awareness or attitudes. The statement can be revised by the author. 6. How do the calculated proportions be 100% for Religious Affiliation data in both HPV Awareness category in table1? 7. The font size of the table titles should be same as manuscript text font size. 8. Spelling needs to be corrected- “Strongly Disgree” in table 5. 9. The font styles for all the tables should be consistent. Reviewer #4: In the methods section, source of awareness by responders was not captured and in the abstract section, the results provided showed the narrative with no statistical values to support the claims made in the findings. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Francis Ajang Magaji ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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