Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 15, 2023 |
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Dear Dr. Dr. Setyowireni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have read your report with interest but share the concerns of the reviewers. To make this paper ready for publication you will need to work on a major revision. The reviewer comments will be a guide for your work. The following is a summary of my comments: The outcomes reported are concerning and should be compared to most recent reports by others. More information is needed regarding risk factors and the reduction thereof. Numbers regarding in-born versus out-born babies, extend of prenatal care, prenatal antibiotics, prenatal steroids, mode of delivery, description of Surfactant usage, available Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: An interesting read. There are quite a few grammatical and sentence formulation errors which I think the authors should consider revising. Overall, these are my comments: 1) At the start of the discussion part, it has been mentioned that aggressive mechanical ventilation might be the cause of lung damage and severe respiratory symptoms in BPD. However, later, it has been said that mechanical ventilation had a mortality benefit in BPD patients. I believe the authors should clarify this area further to explain the role of mechanical ventilation in the disease. Devote a separate paragraph to summarise all the relevant findings in present study, existing literature and plausible explanation for the same. 2) In continuation with the above, what may be the reason that mild BPD patients had more frequent use of mechanical ventilation than moderate or severe BPD patients? The number of ventilator-days also seem to be more in mild BPD patients. 3) Considering the confusing findings and retrospective design of the study, the authors may do a power analysis for their primary outcome parameters to put things in perspective. 4) Finally, not just mortality but long-term morbidity of these subset of patients needs to be studied in future. Reviewer #2: Dear Dwi Kisworo Setyowireni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript entitled "Outcome of Infants with Bronchopulmonary Dysplasia" for consideration. I appreciate the opportunity to review your work, contributing to the ongoing discussion on bronchopulmonary dysplasia. After a careful evaluation, I have identified several areas that would benefit from further clarification and revision to enhance the manuscript's scientific rigor and readability. Below are my comments, broken down by section, which I hope you find constructive for refining your paper. Introduction 1. Relevance of Citations: The introduction could benefit from more recent literature to establish the field's current state. 2. Problem Statement: The problem statement could be more precisely articulated. What is the specific gap in the existing literature that this study aims to fill? 3. Hypothesis/Research Question: It would be beneficial to clearly state the research questions or hypotheses. This would help the reader understand what to expect from the study. Method 1. Sample Size Justification: There needs to be more discussion about how the sample size was determined. Was a power analysis conducted? 2. Demographics: More details about the participant demographics might make the sample more transparent. 3. Variables: It would be helpful to define the independent and dependent variables more precisely. 4. Statistical Tests: Mention the specific statistical tests that were employed for data analysis. 5. Ethical Considerations: No mention of ethical approval for human/animal studies. Is it applicable? If yes, it should be included. Results 1. Data Presentation: More tables and/or graphs could be useful for visualizing the data. 2. Missing Data: There needs to be a mention of how missing data were handled. 3. Statistical Significance: Were the results statistically significant? P-values and confidence intervals could offer more insight. Discussion 1. Interpretation of Findings: The discussion would benefit from a more in-depth interpretation. How do these results add to the current body of knowledge? 2. Limitations: The discussion of limitations is brief and could be more thorough. 3. Future Work: Suggestions for future research still need to be included. Addressing this could round out the paper effectively. 4. Practical Implications: Mention the practical implications of your findings could strengthen the impact of your paper. Overall Comments 1. Cohesion and Flow: Ensure a logical flow of ideas from the introduction to the discussion. 2. Technical Jargon: Consider defining technical terms so the paper is accessible to a broader audience. 3. References: A uniform citation style is needed; some references are not in the same format as others. 4. Abstract: An abstract summarizing the entire paper, including key findings and implications, should be added. 5. Conclusions: A separate conclusions section summarizing key findings and their implications could make the paper more impactful. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Saikat Banerjee, MD Respiratory Medicine, Micromasters (MIT) in Statistics and Data Science Reviewer #2: Yes: Mohammad Arkani ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. 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<p>Outcome of Infants with Bronchopulmonary Dysplasia PONE-D-23-09921R1 Dear Dr. Setyowireni, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stefan Grosek, Ph.D., M.D., Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: The article is very interesting, with a clear goal, well done with conclusions and relevant, adequate literature. Acceptable for publication based on review ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Saikat Banerjee, MD, DM, Pulmonary, Critical Care and Sleep Medicine, MITx Micromasters in Statistics and Data Science Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Miljana Z Jovandaric ********** |
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PONE-D-23-09921R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Setyowireni, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Stefan Grosek Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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