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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is an interesting and partly well-crafted study. It is mostly clearly written and provides a background of the research problem and topic. Statistical analyses support some of the conclusions and provide contextual nuances with regard to the findings - there are indeed many countries that do not conform to the hypotheses. Nevertheless, there are many things that need to be corrected or improved prior to potential publication. A lot of research has been published based on PISA data so it is important to publish research which is less mediocre and provdes reliable findings. 1. More empirical research should be included. Use Google Scholar and search for the years 2024-2025 so you do not miss recent papers. Here are some suggestions. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s43545-024-00955-0 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10212-024-00805-w https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/21582440231225870 2. Lack of theoretical background, in part. If countries differ much with regard to these findings, why is that the case? It should come as little surprise when one reads te results. Hence, you have to improve the theoretical backgriund in that regards, particularly with regard to contextual and cultural factors. 3. References to important aspects of SES is one of the main weaknesses of this MS. It is far from enough to just mention the SES index in PISA, which has been criticized in many respects. Here are some important papers to consider: Avvisati, F. (2020). The measure of socio-economic status in PISA: a review and some suggested improvements. Large-scale Assessments in Education, 8. Marks, G. N., & O’Connell, M. (2021). Inadequacies in the SES–achievement model: Evidence from PISA and other studies. Review of Education, 9(3). Wiberg, M., & Rolfsman, E. (2023). Students’ Self-reported Background SES Measures in TIMSS in Relation to Register SES Measures When Analysing Students’ Achievements in Sweden. Scandinavian Journal of Educatioal Research, 67(1), 69–82. But not only that - you have to explain to readers what SES indicators are typically used in social science research and what the PISA SES index taps into and not. 4. Lack of standardized beta coeffcients. One of the quantitative flaws of the MS is the lack of standardized beta coeffcients, which are very important in educational and psychological research, even if some measures are on the same scale. If it is too burdensome to add this for all countries, you have to do it for at least 10 countries as a robustness check and compare the effect sizes. You may use IDB Analyzer for this as an option to Stata. But Stata works, too. 5. My fifth point is connected to 3 and 4 - you must perform substantial robustness analyses, using appropriate software. One of the key elements of multivariate analyses is control factors to not omit potentially influential factors. Such variables include gender, migration background (which may be separated from the SES index), and other non-cognitive abilities such as self-efficacy, perserverance (perhaps linked to Big Five conscientiousness according to some measures). Only then can have some confidence in your findings. Interaction variables can be included in the same multiple regression models - and make sure to include the standardized effect sizes for comparability. If you use some software you can also incorporate BIC values. https://psycnet.apa.org/record/2024-86110-001 6. Lastly, you may add a discussion about growth mindset, PISA, cognitive abilities and self-rated abilities (often categorized as generic or domain-specific academic self-concept). This may be incorporated into the theoretical section. It is important to note that PISA is not a usal ILSA but something which substantially taps into cognitive skills and abilities, not that different from the g-factor of conventional intelligence tests. Even if unintentional, that is what empirical analyses whow (see particularly Pokropek et al., 2022). Pokropek A, Marks GN, Borgonovi F (2022) How much do students’ scores in PISA reflect general intelligence and how much do they reflect specific abilities? J Educ Psychol 114(5):1121–1135 Furnham A, Cheng H (2024) The role of parents, teachers, and pupils in IQ test scores: correlates of the programme for international student assessment (PISA) from 74 countries. Pers Individ Dif 219 Reviewer #2: This study is an exceptionally well-documented and original work that makes a substantial contribution to the international literature on the relationship between growth mindsets, mathematics achievement, and the role of socioeconomic background. Using the rich and consistently reliable PISA 2022 dataset, the authors manage to analyze trends across 74 countries, offering both a global and a detailed perspective. The research stands out for: The scope and representativeness of the sample, which provides strong external validity to the conclusions. Methodological rigor, employing statistical techniques that account for the complexity of the PISA design and the plausible values of achievement. A critical and balanced presentation of results, highlighting positive, negative, and non-significant findings, while avoiding oversimplifications. The emphasis on cultural and contextual differences, underscoring the need for tailored educational interventions rather than one-size-fits-all solutions. The discussion of the findings successfully links empirical evidence with existing theory, while also acknowledging limitations and proposing clear directions for future research. The article not only deepens the understanding of how a growth mindset relates to mathematics achievement internationally, but also offers practical implications for education policies aiming to reduce inequalities. Overall, this is a carefully crafted, scientifically rigorous, and socially relevant study that can serve as a reference point for researchers, educators, and policymakers alike. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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