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PONE-D-25-26429Minimum Displacement in Existing Moment (MDEM)- A new supervised learning algorithm by incrementally constructing the moments of the underlying classesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nizam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review Comments This paper proposes a supervised learning algorithm based on the existing Moment Displacement Minimum (MDEM), whose core is to classify test data points into the category that minimizes the n-th order central moment displacement of the corresponding category. The algorithm dynamically updates the moments through incremental calculation, enabling the model to have evolutionary capabilities. The study uses the Pima Indians Diabetes Dataset and compares the algorithm with advanced algorithms such as neural networks and support vector machines through k-fold cross-validation and stratified k-fold cross-validation. The results show that the low-order moment MDEM algorithm performs comparably to K-nearest neighbors (KNN) with better test time complexity, providing a new option for data classification problems. However, there are still several issues as follows: I. Insufficient clarity in expressing core concepts 1. The paper proposes classifying data points into the category with the minimum moment displacement, but it lacks an intuitive explanation of the physical meaning of "moment displacement" and why this index can effectively characterize the correlation between data points and categories. For example, it only states that Euclidean distance is calculated and weighted by the category cardinality, but does not clarify the theoretical basis of the weighting strategy (e.g., why cardinality balances the "attractiveness" of categories), making it difficult for readers to understand the rationality of the decision-making mechanism. 2. The algorithm discusses the applications of the mean (first-order raw moment) and second- to fourth-order central moments, but does not explain why these orders are chosen. Additionally, whether increasing the order will continuously improve classification performance and its boundary conditions are not clearly stated. II. Limitations in time complexity analysis 1. The paper only theoretically deduces that the training time complexity is O(P) and the testing time is constant, but does not consider the actual overhead of calculating power sums for high-dimensional data (when d is large) or high-order moments (when n is large). For example, when n=4, each data point needs to calculate the 4th power four times. When n and d are large, the time complexity may deviate from the theoretical expectation, and the discussion of boundary conditions is lacking. 2. When comparing with the O(nd) testing complexity of KNN, the paper does not mention the moment calculation cost of MDEM in processing high-dimensional data (e.g., Euclidean distance calculation involves N-dimensional vectors), which may lead to an incomplete understanding of the algorithm's efficiency advantages among readers. III. Inadequacies in experimental design 1. It only verifies the performance of the mean, variance (second-order central moment), third-order, and fourth-order central moments, but does not set up control groups (such as combinations of mixed-order moments), making it impossible to prove the optimality of a single-order moment or explore the correlation between the order and data features (e.g., whether certain features are more suitable for high-order moments). 2. The paper emphasizes that the model can be updated incrementally, but the experiment does not compare the performance differences between "dynamic update" and "static model" (i.e., not updating moments after training), making it impossible to prove the practical value of this innovation. 3. The comparison metrics only use a single accuracy index, which is difficult to comprehensively measure the model's performance in imbalanced samples. It is recommended to add common machine learning metrics such as F1-score, Precision, Recall, and MCC to comprehensively evaluate the algorithm's performance under multiple metrics. 4. All experiments only use one dataset (PID). The PID dataset used in the experiment has fewer feature dimensions (8 dimensions) and a relatively sufficient sample size (768 samples), making it difficult to prove the algorithm's wide applicability. For example: How does the algorithm perform when facing high-dimensional data? Additionally, how does the algorithm perform on small-sample datasets? Adding these comparisons can further corroborate the algorithm's superiority. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the author proposes a supervised learning algorithm based upon Minimum Displacement in Existing Moment (MDEM). By some nu- merical experiments, the author evaluates the performances of MDEM in mean, variance, 3th and 4th central moment and obtain accuracy scores 73.43. By the comparison, the author asserts that the MDEM in mean runs better than KNN with 3, 5, 7 neighbors and 8 (eight) of the NN models under consideration in 2-fold cross validation technique, and that the best algorithm under 2-fold cross validation should be SVM, which has a run time accuracy of 76.63. The manuscript presents a novel supervised learning algorithm called Minimum Displacement in Existing Moment (MDEM) that incrementally constructs class moments. While the concept is something new and well-presented, several as- pects require clarification and improvement before publication. For more detail, please see the attached review report. Reviewer #3: Please find detailed comments in the attached file. This manuscript presents a novel supervised learning algorithm for classi cation called Mini- mum Displacement in Existing Moment (MDEM). The author claims that the performances of MDEM involving lower order moments are comparable to those of existing state-of-the-art classi cation methods. The algorithm the author proposes can be seen as a variation of the nearest centroid classi er (or Rocchio algorithm). Instead of calculating the distance between the test data point to the mean of each class, the proposed algorithm calculates the displacement between the original mean of each class and the mean after assigning a test data point to each class, and then pick the class with the least displacement to actually assign the test data point. Note that the statistic mean can be replaced by other statistics as the author has stated. The manuscript is well-structured and provides a clear explanation of the algorithm, and experimental results. However, there are aspects that require clari cation and improvement. My main concern is the lack of theoretical justi cation for the algorithm, particularly re- garding the technique of multiplication by the cardinality of the class when calculating the temporary mean (or other statistics), e.g., line 10 in Algorithm 2. Overall, the manuscript is a good contribution to the eld of machine learning and provides a new perspective on classi cation algorithms. I recommend publication and that the author can address the following major and minor comments. Reviewer #4: This paper presents a novel and interpretable classification approach by introducing moment-based class inclusion, offering a fresh perspective in supervised learning. MDEM is highly efficient, enabling constant-time classification ideal for real-time or streaming applications, and supports incremental learning by updating class statistics without retraining. The algorithm is transparently described with clear mathematical formulation and full pseudocode, and its performance is thoroughly benchmarked against a diverse set of standard models using multiple validation strategies. While it doesn't outperform top-tier classifiers like SVMs or deep neural networks, its simplicity and speed make it a valuable tool for constrained environments or streaming applications. Broader testing and deeper theoretical analysis would strengthen the proposal's impact. Three such suggestions are: 1. All results are from the Pima Indian Diabetes dataset. This limits generalizability. Benchmarking on diverse datasets to stress-test MDEM might be helpful. 2. MDEM’s design lacks the flexibility or capacity of nonlinear models like SVM (with kernels) or deep NNs. This inherently caps its accuracy, especially in more complex domains. Would it be possible to combine MDEM with lightweight NNs or tree-based models to handle non-linearity? Kernel tricks may also be able to extend MDEM to non-linear decision boundaries. 3. The intuition behind using minimal moment displacement is compelling but not theoretically grounded. Formal proofs of convergence, error bounds, or probabilistic guarantees are missing. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-25-26429R1Minimum Displacement in Existing Moment (MDEM)- A new supervised learning algorithm by incrementally constructing the moments of the underlying classesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nizam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 08 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: It would be better if a short discussion on convergence/error bounds could be added and runtime analysis on higher- dimensional data could be supplied (both are optional). Reviewer #3: The author has fully justified my previous comments and concerns. I would recommend for publication. Note: I would like to keep my comments anonymous to public. Thanks! Reviewer #4: The author has thoroughly addressed all of my concerns, and I have no further comments. This manuscript is acceptable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Changqing Xu Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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