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| Original SubmissionApril 23, 2025 |
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1.The paper introduces a novel metric, closeness-accessibility, that extends traditional gravity-based accessibility by integrating closeness centrality from network theory.The authors should more clearly differentiate this metric from similar network-based accessibility metrics found in recent studies (e.g., betweenness-adjusted gravity models). 2.More justification is needed for the specific choice of β values (0.13 and 0.41). Are these empirically derived, or do they stem from prior studies? 3.GIS and Python (NetworkX) are appropriate tools, their implementation details (e.g., algorithms for shortest paths or centrality) need to be described more precisely. 4.Include more detailed maps showing actual road segments and accessibility zones, not just interpolated surfaces. 5.The interpretation of inverse relationships (e.g., lower accessibility with higher road grades) needs further discussion—why do higher-grade roads sometimes show lower accessibility? 6.In the limitations section, discuss the lack of dynamic travel data (e.g., congestion, real-time demand fluctuations) which will significantly influence accessibility. 7.There are some grammatical errors and long sentences it needs to be corrected. Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled “Accessibility measurement of highway transportation networks based on closeness-accessibility” presents a novel methodological contribution by integrating closeness centrality into a gravity-based model to develop a new accessibility metric. The proposed “closeness-accessibility” approach introduces network science principles into traditional transport geography metrics and is implemented in the context of Liaoning Province, China. This integration is conceptually sound and addresses some of the limitations of existing models that ignore the influence of network topology and node centrality on spatial accessibility. The paper is strong in its methodological structure. The workflow, including GIS-based near analysis, entropy-based weighting of socio-economic indicators (population, GDP, car ownership), and network construction using Python’s NetworkX library, is rigorous and replicable. The case study is data-rich and effectively demonstrates the empirical value of the proposed metric. The comparison of the closeness-accessibility model with the classical gravity-based model across multiple impedance coefficients (β values) further strengthens the validation process, and the inclusion of visual comparisons through maps and histograms enhances clarity. However, several areas require improvement. First, the literature review would benefit from a more critical synthesis of previous accessibility models. While the paper reviews the types of accessibility (infrastructure-based, location-based, individual-based, and utility-based), it does not explicitly discuss how closeness-accessibility addresses the specific limitations of earlier gravity-based or centrality-only approaches. Moreover, the review could be strengthened by referencing recent developments in dynamic and real-time accessibility modeling, which use time-sensitive data or mobile traces to better capture temporal variability in accessibility. Second, the paper does not sufficiently acknowledge the assumptions and limitations of the proposed model. For instance, the calculation of trip time does not account for congestion, road quality, or temporal traffic variability, all of which significantly affect real-world accessibility. Similarly, while entropy weighting is a valid technique, its impact on final accessibility scores is not examined through sensitivity analysis. Clarifying the choice of weighting method and discussing alternatives like AHP or equal weighting would improve transparency and reproducibility. Third, while the modified equations for closeness centrality in disconnected graphs (Equations 4 and 5) are mentioned, the manuscript does not provide illustrative examples or diagnostics for such subnetworks. Readers would benefit from a brief explanation or visualization showing how centrality scores are normalized across disconnected components, especially since the study uses a large network with heterogeneous connections. Another concern lies in the interpretation of results. The finding that county highways have higher accessibility scores than provincial or national highways contradicts typical assumptions about infrastructure hierarchy. The authors should further explore whether this result reflects true functional accessibility or is influenced by the spatial concentration of county roads in urbanized regions. Without this clarification, the practical implications of the finding remain ambiguous. In terms of presentation, terminology is at times inconsistent (e.g., “closeness-accessibility” vs. “closeness centrality-accessibility”), and some figures and captions require more detail. For instance, the distributions in Fig. 5 should clarify whether they represent the entire network or subsets. The manuscript would also benefit from clearer language in some sections to avoid redundancy and enhance readability. It is also recommended to ensure that figures are interpretable in grayscale and accessible to colorblind readers. In conclusion, the proposed closeness-accessibility framework offers a significant step forward in accessibility modeling by bridging spatial interaction theory and network science. The approach is methodologically sound and holds promise for transport planning applications. However, before publication, the manuscript should address the noted concerns regarding literature framing, model assumptions, and result interpretation. Subject to these minor revisions, the paper has strong potential for publication and could be a valuable resource for researchers and practitioners in transportation geography and urban planning. Reviewer #3: 1. Add section on the objectives of the research after introduction section clearly stating the need, Objectives, Scope and limitations of the study. 2. Check all the figures with GIS Maps for scale - All figures should be on same scale. Some of the maps are distorted. 3. Conclusions should be supported by data from results and analysis section, revise the conclusion section accordingly ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Song, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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