Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 22, 2024 |
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Please note that your Data Availability Statement is currently missing the contact details for the third party, such as an email address or a link to where data requests can be made. Please update your statement with the missing information. 6. One of the noted authors is a group or consortium: J-MICC Study group In addition to naming the author group, please list the individual authors and affiliations within this group in the acknowledgments section of your manuscript. Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. 7. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Dear author (s), Thank you for submitting your manuscript in PLOS one. We are regret informing you that the present version of your manuscript is not suitable for publications. Please go through the reviewers comments and try to address all the suggestions. Please ensure that language in the manuscript is grammatically correct. Explain the methodology more clearly. Improve the scientific flaw of writing highlighting the novelty of the study. Discussion part should be more specific based on your findings. Please resubmit your revised manuscript once it will be ready. With thanks Academic editor [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This cohort study explored the associations between serum albumin and gamma gap levels as well as their combined effect on mortality risk in a Japanese population. There are so many variables in this study to compare among low to high albumin levels, protein intake, total protein level, and gamma gap levels with all-causes and specific causes of death. Initially readers may feel a bit uncomfortable to understand the whole process and analysis. However the authors involved in this study have been written the manuscript in a very clear and understandable manner. They also very clearly identified their limitations. I truly appropriate their efforts and honesty. Anyway there are some minor correction to improve this article. The comments are listed below: 1.My first impression about the co-authorship of this parer. I found, there are 26 co-authors in this paper. Although this study includes huge number of participants around 36,000, I can understand the contributions of each authors. However, I would suggest you to reduce the number of co-authors in this paper. Previously published one cohort study in PLOS One journal that analyzed more than 80,000 samples were just 10 co-authors. By considering this study, I would suggest to keep maximum 15-18 co-authors. 2.In Table 1, Table 3, and Table 5, please correct the unit of serum high gamma gap levels. 3.In Table 3, please correct the spelling mistake Medel 1, Medel 2 and Medel 3 on the top of the table. Reviewer #2: The following list of issues needs to be addressed: 1. Throughout the manuscript some statements lack of reference. You should add more updated reference. 2. Discuss further details about the function of albumin how it maintains the oncotic pressure as well as how it contributes to transport, solubilization and stabilization. 3. The manuscript would be more understandable after the inclusion of a flow diagram of study design that outlines participant recruitment, inclusion and exclusion criteria, and the ultimate sample size. 4. The measurement technique and kits used for the quantification of total serum protein and albumin are not described. Clarify the information in the materials and methods section. 5. What criteria did you use to separate the age groups of 35–49, 50–59, and 60–69 years? In the statistical part, explain it. 6. Mean or median of serum total protein, albumin, and gamma gap level for male and female is necessary for a better understanding. 7. What type of information you are providing or recommending to the general population through this study. 8. Please briefly discuss the physiological and clinical significance of low albumin and high levels of gamma gap level in respect to the diseases. 9. There have repetitions of some information and typos error. You should revise the manuscript properly. 10. Show the relationship among serum total protein, albumin, and gamma gap levels, if there have. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Serum albumin and gamma gap levels, and combined effect for risk of mortality in a Japanese population from the J-MICC study PONE-D-24-16646R1 Dear Dr. Takezaki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nayan Chandra Mohanto, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear author (s), Please address the comments from the reviewer 2 and resubmit the revised manuscript. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: No more additional comments for the authors from my side. I would like to appreciate all the authors to have their efforts and patients go through our whole reviewing process. Overall the manuscript is now well written and technically sounds with a better version. Reviewer #2: 1. It would be better to make the Fig 1 as a supplementary figure. 2. Could you please clarify whether the differences in total protein, albumin, and gamma gap levels between men and women were significant? 3. “Examination of serum total protein levels was carried out using the Biuret method. Serum albumin levels were examined using bromocresol green (BCG) test or modified bromocresol purple (BCP) test.” these two sentences can be combined and written in a following way- “Examination of serum total protein and albumin levels were carried out using the Biuret method and bromocresol green (BCG) test or modified bromocresol purple (BCP) test, respectively.” ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Momotaj Jahan Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-24-16646R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Takezaki, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Nayan Chandra Mohanto Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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