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| Original SubmissionJune 24, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: While the overall quality of the paper is high, addressing a few minor points could elevate its impact and comprehensiveness to an outstanding level: Sample Specificity and Generalizability: The participant pool, drawn exclusively from athletic disciplines, is a very specific population. This rightly raises the question of whether the same patterns would be observed in a non-athletic or general population. I strongly recommend explicitly acknowledging this as a key limitation for generalizability. Furthermore, it would be excellent to suggest this specific point—investigating these effects in non-athletes—as a direction for future research in your conclusion. Clarification on the Rejection Calculation: The use of a 'closeness index' is an interesting approach. To further strengthen the Methods section, a small but important clarification would be helpful: please specify the exact threshold used to categorize participants into 'High Rejection' vs. 'Low Rejection' groups. Was this based on a statistical measure like the median, or was a pre-defined theoretical cut-off point used? Adding this single sentence would provide valuable clarity and enhance the replicability of your excellent methodology. Avoiding Repetition: Some instances of result repetition between the text and tables were noted. To enhance conciseness, you could direct the reader to the relevant table (e.g., "As presented in Table 3...") and focus the text on providing a broader interpretation and analysis of the results, rather than re-stating the statistics. Nuancing the Interpretation of Statistical vs. Practical Significance: The manuscript occasionally emphasizes statistical significance (the *p*-value) without an equal focus on the practical importance of the finding. For instance, some results, while statistically significant, show a rather weak effect size (e.g., Cramér’s V = 0.054). It would strengthen the discussion to interpret such findings with a bit more caution. Acknowledging that while a result is statistically reliable, its practical or real-world impact within the studied context may be limited would provide a more nuanced and accurate interpretation. This doesn't diminish the finding but rather frames it with appropriate scientific prudence. Reviewer #2: Dear Editor This paper addresses an intriguing and relatively novel topic that combines the analysis of motor behavior in traditional games with socio-affective dynamics. The scientific quality of the article is generally acceptable, featuring a rigorous methodological design and appropriate statistical analysis tools. However, the paper has limitations regarding sample size and generalizability of results. A robust theoretical framework has been established based on Parlebas' motor praxeology theory, though some claims require additional empirical support. Introduction • Some claims (such as the role of traditional games in interpersonal relationship education) are presented without sufficient empirical evidence. • Limited literature review with insufficient examination of previous similar research. Methodology • Small sample size (10 participants), which the authors themselves acknowledge as a limitation. Is there a convincing explanation or reliable source for this? • Game duration (8 minutes) may be insufficient for complete understanding of social dynamics. On what basis was this time period chosen? • Lack of control for confounding variables such as participants' prior game experience. Results • Some effect sizes are small (Cramér's V < 0.1), which may limit practical significance. Your interpretation is very important when the effect size is small, which is less addressed. • No statistical power analysis provided for interpreting non-significant results. • Lack of examination of more complex interaction effects between variables. Discussion • Some interpretations extend beyond the available data. The discussion should be based on the results of this research. The results can be compared with other research, but our criterion for discussion is the results of our research. • Insufficient discussion of study limitations. It is recommended that research recommendations be presented with an emphasis on the limitations of the research. • Limited comparison with similar research in other domains. Please strengthen this issue in the discussion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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The Sociomotor Role and its Meaning in Traditional Sporting Games: Socio-affective Rejection in Question PONE-D-25-33331R1 Dear Dr. Lavega-Burgues, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hesam Ramezanzade, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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