Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 22, 2025 |
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a valuable and well-executed empirical study on the role of employee benefits in fulfilling identity needs and enhancing job satisfaction, with important implications for HR policy. The integration of social exchange theory and identity-based mechanisms is theoretically strong, and the large datasets provide robust support for the conclusions. I recommend minor revisions to literature (Is it reasonable to repeat certain terms multiple times and continually return to them throughout the text - like job satisfaction?), write whole word for abbreviations (ESG). Expand the discussion of methodological limitations, particularly the cross-sectional design and the use of a single-item job satisfaction measure, and consider discussing potential interactions between benefit categories. Overall, this is a solid contribution to the literature. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript. The study is ambitious, with a large dataset and a meaningful research question. At the same time, I believe the paper needs significant revisions before it is suitable for publication. My detailed comments are as follows: 1) Theoretical Contribution - The paper’s novelty needs to be articulated more clearly. The claim that benefit quality matters more than benefit quantity has been supported in prior literature; thus, you should clarify how your study advances theory beyond this general claim. - The integration of social exchange theory with identity-based mechanisms is promising, but the discussion does not fully show how this combination provides new insights compared with existing frameworks. 2) Methodology - Both studies are cross-sectional surveys. While the large sample sizes are a strength, causal inference remains weak. Consider adding robustness checks, alternative model specifications, or at least a stronger justification for the analytic choices. - The mediation analysis in Study 2 should be interpreted with caution. Cross-sectional data cannot definitively establish mediation. Please temper your claims and clearly state the limits of your design. 3) Results and Interpretation - Some moderation and interaction effects (particularly three-way interactions) are complex but only superficially interpreted. More in-depth theoretical explanation is needed rather than descriptive reporting. - The negative association between the quantity of socio-cultural benefits and identity/job satisfaction is particularly interesting. However, the explanation provided is underdeveloped. This deserves a fuller discussion, including alternative interpretations. 4) Writing and Structure - The paper is overly lengthy. The literature review in particular could be condensed, focusing only on the most relevant theories and prior findings. - Results are presented in detail, but the discussion does not sufficiently highlight the key takeaways. Consider moving some secondary findings to an appendix. - Figures and tables are useful, but the narrative around them should be streamlined to emphasize the most important contributions. This manuscript has promise, particularly due to the impressive dataset and the attention to demographic moderators. However, substantial revision is necessary to clarify the theoretical contribution, address methodological concerns, provide deeper interpretations of complex findings, and improve the clarity and conciseness of the writing. I encourage you to work out these points and resubmit. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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One Size Does Not Fit All: Nurturing Identity Needs and Job Satisfaction Through Employee Benefits Across Gender and Age PONE-D-25-38613R1 Dear Dr. Valmori, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ali Junaid Khan, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have thoroughly revised the manuscript in accordance with the my and other reviewer comments. All major concerns have been satisfactorily addressed, and the quality of the manuscript has improved. The data described in the main text are appropriate and clearly presented. It is a positive improvement that the authors moved the lengthy tables to the appendix, which improves the readability and flow of the main manuscript. Additionally, the conclusion is now well supported by the presented results and aligns with the main objectives of the study. I recommend the revised version for publication. Reviewer #3: The manuscript presents a good and valuable, well defined contribution on role of employee benefits. However, I do recommed minor revisions. The further elaboration of cross sectional and single item measures is reasonable. Possible self-report and common method biases would be briefly mentioned because it would be helpful to increase methodological transparency. The presentation is clear, but captions can be reduced even more to highlight major insights as opposed to the process. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Shahar Yar, DBA ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
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PONE-D-25-38613R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Valmori, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Ali Junaid Khan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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